I Checked in at the Mental Hospital

Emm, how can I put it, the personality of some characters is not very accurate. For example, Zhao Kongcheng will not kick the protagonist away, at most he will raise his eyebrows and give him a violent shock. And Xiaonan, in my impression, she is a very strong and brave girl. She can even fight against her own gods later on. She is also a night watchman. She has never seen any monsters before, and her psychological quality is very strong. She will not be afraid of the "weird" changes of the male protagonist, and she also uses words like alien. This is obviously not the Xiaonan we know. Besides, the people who read your article are all fans of Zhanshen. It will be uncomfortable to see that the character is not the original character. Here are some of my suggestions. （看前三十章有感）

I think the character of the protagonist is quite good. I like that the protagonist is quite dark, and there are not two male protagonists, and there is no female protagonist. I like the fact that the author does not have any messy people who are ambiguous with the protagonist. The author also writes very well, keep up the good work! ! 😉

It's quite interesting, especially the story of the [God-Killing] team in the later period, but there is no Cthulhu, and it doesn't fit well with the original work (probably because the author hasn't seen the finale yet), and then it's a bit unfinished in the end, but it's already considered exciting in the fanfic.

I remember it very well. 😊, The whole text is closely consistent with the original text. Without losing the humor. Every detail is restored to the point. This book is a good choice for fan fiction. I hope you keep writing. 👍👍👍

It is necessary for 395 stars. The author writes very well and is very close to the original text. The main character has a weird personality. I hope you will continue to work hard, Oli!

The first part is a bit embarrassing, but the more I read the later part, the more I am attracted to it. If you work hard, can you write another 100 million books? [Laughter] This book looks really good, but I didn't read enough.

It's well written, but a little short, and the characters gave me a weird feeling.

Good job! Between the moonlight and the snow, this is the third kind of stunning color. The plot is novel, the characters are vivid, the writing is beautiful, the description is detailed and fascinating, the details are very delicate, good book, good book

Not bad, but Lin Qiye seems to have been weakened. In the original work, Lin Qiye is very awesome and calm enough, but the Lin Qiye in this movie gives me the feeling that he will panic when something happens, and he doesn't have enough brain power [facepalm]

Ah, I've finished reading it, I think, there's nothing particularly embarrassing about this, right? There's a bit of strength in it, that is, in the front, um, when I joined the Night Watch, um... Anyway, overall it's okay. Anyway, I prefer to read it. In the end, please cheers for the author?

Not bad, not bad, the first few pictures are very good, the plot is also very good, but the character description and language expression are a bit rusty, I don't know how to feel, it's just a bit embarrassing, but it's still good.

After reading a few chapters, I got a sense of the picture. Baifa is sitting on the sea of ​​​​blood on Chishang, holding the enemy's corpse, drinking the enemy's blood, turning his head to look over (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

Personally, I think it's pretty good. Don't keep imitating and try to innovate. It would be better if some details are dealt with.

The author is good, keep up the performance, the writing is quite good, at least I quite like it

It's pretty good, but the character isn't that perfect. But since the author is not good at this, I think this book is pretty good. The plot is somewhat different from Zhanshen, but the writing style is very similar to Zhanshen. If you can't stand Sanjiu's short and small articles, you can read what this author wrote. Cheers, author.

In fact, this book is well written, but I personally feel (just my personal feelings [laughing]) that there may be a little bit of disrespect for the profession of night watchman in the back of this book (please don't scold me), which may make people feel like a joke (it's my personal experience, please don't scold me, thank you). The other characters are also well created, and everyone in the sixth special team (including the dog) is very distinctive.

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It's good. I wonder if the author can make the fighting scenes more realistic.

Generally speaking, the writing is good, the writing is delicate, the emotional description is not very good, and the character structure is not perfect, but it can be regarded as a good tomato book in the middle and upper class, but it is as short as Sanjiu and not enough to read [Cool] [Cool]

I feel like I can watch it, the plot is pretty good and quite funny (except it's a bit watery) [laughing awkwardly] [get it]

Come on! At the same time, I also hope that the author's writing will get better and better!

It's good to watch, but there are some contents that I don't feel are very good.

To be honest, this fanfic is really interesting. I finally got the freedom to learn how to kill gods and check in and sign in at the same time~~La la la~ I hope this book can stick to the end♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥ Author! Do it quickly! It's not enough to watch, and although I haven't seen the latest yet, it doesn't stop me from urging for more updates!

It's not bad. The overall plot is okay. The characters are also quite interesting.

It's quite good-looking, and you can't compare the original work with the fanfic. After all, it will be different if the protagonist is different. Treat the original work as a world, which is a parallel world, but the protagonist will be different. And you can't compare Sanjiu and the author's writing skills. After all, it is not easy for other authors to write. It is better to treat the characters as if they are different in different worlds. It is impossible for other authors to remember all the original works. (Comments are welcome, please do not criticize, only personal opinions) Come on, author!

To be honest, this novel is adapted from the God-Slayer collaboration. It is well written. However, the characters and expressions of some characters need to be improved, such as Zhou Ping. Now he should still think that as a hero, he needs to do justice for the gods. His personality is social. Also, he should not have such great power to mobilize special teams.

It's nice looking up front, but a bit lacking in stamina. Overall it's pretty good and I'm looking forward to the next book.

I quite like the character of the protagonist, but I feel the same as Sanjiu (short)

Come on brother, if you dare to write it down, I will dare to read it.

Come on! I think it's getting better and better, at least better than the previous chapters, you can do it!