Demons Are Rampant, and Martial Arts Create Mountains and Rivers!

To be honest, the book is good, especially the early stage. Later, let's build up the sense of anticipation and how to enrich the character. As far as the current protagonist is concerned, the Mountain and River Palace serves him, and he also protects the human race, but the stronger he is, the better he can protect the human race. With the protagonist's spiritual strength, demons and demons can sneak in and kill them, and then create a virtual town to push them on him. Now that the three parties are fighting for hegemony, the plot is a bit bland. In addition, plots other than the Chen Dynasty can now be introduced, allowing the protagonist to quickly lead the Chen Dynasty, gain good luck, and know the opportunity to break through King Wu. In addition, the protagonist's sister, brother, and wife can also set up a foreshadowing and be taken advantage of. Xuanshui is a snake, he is a prostitute, but he can also covet the protagonist's wife, serve as a cauldron, and achieve breakthrough. In short, it's a bit dull now, so we need to mobilize our emotions as soon as possible and create some sense of anticipation. Give the protagonist a better reason to become stronger quickly. Just like it looked good in the early stage, it was because the ghost mother and spiritual cultivation were oppressing him. The protagonist rises from adversity and is well portrayed. It should also be deepened like this below.

This is the fifth book I have read, Muscle God. The more you watch, the more addictive you become. I hope it won't be written like the book "Strange into the Game World" and other books, where you hide and fight in the later stage and fight between gods and demons.

This book is really wonderfully written... It is written in one go, responsible and not pretentious. The only drawback is that I am a reborn person and a bit poisonous. If the follow-up arrangements are not arranged properly, it may collapse.

After reading Chapter 133, although there are some minor flaws, they do not hide the flaws. I feel that the author is telling a story well, not perfunctory, and very sincere.

This book written by the author is very interesting. It is one of the few novels written by modifiers that I find interesting. I hope to continue writing and not stop updating [laughing and crying] [face covering]

The previous article is well written, but there are two main issues behind it. 1. He is too good to human warriors and too cruel to aliens. 2. I am already a martial arts master, but I have too few combat skills. I only have wind, fire, earth, and metal skills. I also need other water, wood, and thunder skills. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but there are these problems. If I change it later, I will give it five stars.

The novel is not bad, but the fighting is relatively simple. The advantage of martial arts is that ordinary people can practice it. That is, the base is relatively large and the war potential is large. Then it is necessary to develop the weak to defeat the strong with more. Generally, the formula of weak to defeat the strong is to use formations according to the routines in various novels. So can we develop battle formations and the like? Yes, there is also a relatively simple war in world fragments. Can we open up 2-4 levels of battlefields, where generals and generals and soldiers fight against soldiers? A certain battlefield can be opened up to the other world and massacre the creatures in the other world. If the world's intelligence reaches a certain number, the world's intelligence will be weakened. If it is weakened to a certain extent, it can swallow up the opponent's way of heaven. It is best to add to the pitfalls of spiritual martial arts. Get a spiritual practice method to temper the body, so as to speed up the integration of spiritual martial arts, and then get a high-level spiritual practice and a high-level martial arts practitioner to give birth to a child with a fatan physique setting. This will speed up the integration and unity of the human race. I also personally feel that the author is very grateful for it. The emotional text is a bit stiff. For example, the princes are fighting for power now. Let them become the prince with the highest military merit. The person who becomes the prince will receive certain martial arts and human luck blessings. The author will feel more relaxed as he writes later, and the water numbers are also convenient [Salute]

I just finished reading it, from the rise from the humble beginnings, the founding of a country, to the conquest of the wilderness, to the unification, to the fusion of countless world fragments. I feel very comfortable with the writing technique. No academics, no old routines, just battle. I think what he said to his son at the end was what a strong man should say, "I have changed my destiny against the will of heaven, fought in all directions, and lived vigorously to find a stronger path. This may be the last time we meet."

It's pretty cool, why is it rated so low?

It's pretty good, not exaggerated or outrageous, but it's a little short and not rich enough. But it's indeed a good work. Young and restless people don't have the patience to watch it. After all, mainstream works nowadays are all about the protagonist having a superman, having a group of wives and concubines, blowing up a universe with one punch, and killing people at a high level.

It's more suitable for me to watch if the plot develops a little slower and there are cheats. It can be faster.

It's nice, but a little lacking. It's gone in no time. Author, how many new ones did you post in a day?

It's okay. I can see there are no obvious poisonous spots.

Why is no one reading such a beautiful book? This book is sure to be a hit! ! [Like][Like][Like]

It's an era when cool articles are everywhere, and the protagonist feels uncomfortable if he doesn't rise above the level. There can be such an author. I feel like I have found my purpose in reading books.

It's well written and comfortable to read. The front has improved so quickly, but the back is a bit overwhelming, but luckily it doesn't seem to have any impact, it's still very powerful. The final ending is a little too fast, and the golden immortal is gone. It would be nice if the chapter was written to about 1,500 chapters, and Chaos was re-opened on top of the saint. After all, you already have the Wu Clan's skills and systems, so it's not too much to extrapolate to Pangu or surpass him [laughing]

It's not easy to read a book by Jida Ryu. It's a five-star review. It's worth reading.

Looks good, let's see what happens next I have read them all, let me tell you my feelings. The whole book is generally good. The only bad thing is that I have a reborn younger brother, and I listen too much to my parents. The Weird Martial Arts Next Door has been updated for 13 days, and I have written more than 400 pictures. You only have 88 pictures in more than a month, which is not very productive at all [angry]

Come on author! ! Don't suck! Don't be a eunuch

It's a pretty good book. It's well written from beginning to end, but the ending is not good.

It's very good and worth watching, but the evil body refining is a bit troublesome. These evil places are like forbidden places, so they should be easier to find.

This is one of the few novels I have ever read.

This book is one of the few good books that an old bookworm like me has ever read.

Generally speaking, it's okay. Better than most.

I have read many books on Tomato, and this is the first one I have read. It is very well written. Cheers to the author [Sending heartfelt wishes]

There are so many Tomato novels and this is the only one I want to follow. Come on, author. Please update more. It's not enough.

The author writes so well and writes with great care. Please support me.

A very nice book. It shouldn't have been such a low score

Okay. It's been a long time since I've had an eye-catching novel to read. Come on, author.

It breaks away from the conventions of other novels and describes the development of a big force with a huge pattern.