My Time Can Be Traded

I think it can be made a god, and the portrayal of human nature is very successful. Whether it is the initial inability to start, panic, shock at the betrayal of companions and not trusting others, to the later calmness, calmness, and handing the back to the companions, the details are all in place. But can you please stop being so cruel😭

The emotions of the characters in it are very real. Yeah, a very good book It ranks second among all the books I have read.

Originally, I was disdainful of the cowardly character of the protagonist, but when I think about it carefully, if the so-called gap between the protagonist and ordinary people is only one system, one golden finger, then the protagonist is meaningless, so I watched it with expectation for a while, and now I have finished watching it. The protagonist is now a person with a strong sense of justice and will make up his mind. He takes risks to save people, but he is also very emotional. The word fear appears very frequently, and there are also some death scenes. It does have the effect of being put into a life and death crisis, which makes me feel that the protagonist's emotionality is very powerful. Wandering between life and death can drive a person crazy, but it is difficult to maintain normal emotions. It is not an exaggeration at all. This It's not a matter of risking one's life. People who have suffered the pain of a broken arm are not simple. If you ask me, the cowardice at the beginning is in contrast to the current protagonist. He quickly goes from ordinary to special. The protagonist grows very fast, but the description is a bit insufficient. I hope the author can describe more about the psychological growth of the protagonist. It is best not to talk about it directly and use more events to infer it. Advance, in addition, the female protagonist can have a stronger sense of presence and be slightly more active in helping the male protagonist, otherwise the emotional tone will be a little different. However, the most important thing is to write the male protagonist well, because most readers seem to read the book as the male protagonist. After thinking about the male protagonist, please pay more attention to the female protagonist. An excellent female protagonist will also be more enjoyable to read.

Perfect, the description of the character's psychology is great, too real and realistic, but some people may not understand it. On Tomato, it's hard to live without Shuangwen.

It's great. It tells a story about an ordinary person who has gone through ups and downs and grown up in human nature. Unlike other novels, which are extremely calm and even cold-blooded, the protagonist is flesh and blood, just an ordinary person, but he understands human nature through the loss of teammates one after another during hunting. It's great, but it needs a little more color in portraying the emotions of the characters. Come on.

The writing is very good. I heard it's quite sad from what you said, but why do I feel so good when I read it? Doctor! Can I still be saved?

The writing is quite good, but it may be due to stereotypes and prejudices. I don't particularly like some of the content and the updates are too slow. As for giving five stars, I thought about it and there are two reasons. The first reason is that the author is not easy. The second reason is: I prefer Chen Shi who sacrificed his life to save Gu Hong. I have had a similar experience. When I saw this chapter, I thought about it. I only saw chapter 45 and I haven't finished it yet. I just read it. Look, of course I hope this person doesn't die. This book is too brutal. I originally thought that a few people could live for a long time, but they died without even one chapter. Oh, I dare say this is the most comments I have ever written. After all, after reading this book, I thought of some people. Well, this book makes people think deeply. I am filled with emotion when I think that as a science student, I have the opportunity to write a 222-word comment. Come on, author!

It depicts the actions that an ordinary person might take when encountering problems in the author's eyes, rather than the absolutely rational actions from God's perspective. The portrayal of human nature is not as profound as The Alone in Another World, which is a bit more enjoyable. The writing is quite good, and the rhythm of the writing is also well controlled.

I stayed up all night to read it, my evaluation of this novel The female protagonist cannot see or hear, only the male protagonist can touch and hear. The female protagonist is only the male protagonist, and the male protagonist's spiritual support is also the female protagonist. Whenever the male protagonist is desperate, the female protagonist will be by her side to encourage and comfort the male protagonist. I really like this female protagonist as the perfect type of wife. I give 9.9 Points for the female protagonist's setting. Let's talk about the bad points: The plot is a bit too compact. Except for the male and female protagonists, the other supporting characters are there to knife the hero, to make the hero depressed, and to make the hero feel the cruelty and beauty of reality (I am a little speechless at this point. I didn't expect that the supporting characters are all used to knife, and none of them hahahahaha)

It's okay. There is no such thing as the Virgin Mary mentioned by the following perverts. The confession of killing good people is also relatively real. The protagonist's choice of being a time hunter in the early stage is indeed a bit contradictory, but it is okay later on. The protagonist's cowardice is inevitable. He has lived in a safe zone since he was a child, and he probably hasn't seen much life passing by. There is a problem with being brave and good at fighting and not afraid of death. (There are a lot of plots, and there are only a few chapters. If the protagonist needs comfort, he can do it in other ways. There is a comment in the book review that "men's desires are not that big" which is very appropriate)

The quality of this book is relatively high. Looking at the title, I thought it was a story similar to that of the movie. The character of the protagonist is indeed quite realistic. The image of ordinary people is very close to the public. It is not like those who grasp the overall situation as soon as they get the golden finger and can see the stage of growth. After all, people have many problems, do not consider problems comprehensively, react to unexpected situations, etc. Excellent work, I hope the author will work hard! !

That's pretty good. The ending is quite in line with the plot. There may be a pitfall in the development, which is the pitfall of the Zerg. In fact, personally, I feel that the world line of the dazzling stars is better. You can take a look at it, but this ending is also quite good. Personally, I still want to see the world of the dazzling stars.

It's very interesting, and the writing is very real. Those who died to save the protagonist hope to find a good ending. It's very painful to watch, but it's very real. I keep wandering between these two emotions. All in all, it's very good.

Five stars must be five stars, even though I only saw half of it. But these excitements and fears are really real. It's not like other books where people who haven't seen blood haven't seen scenes of death. This book is more realistic, others are too calm.

This book is very good-looking and has a strong sense of growth. I think it is enough to become a god. But I don't know why, but some people deliberately give it a low rating. If you don't like reading it, you don't have to read it. So why do you give it such a low rating? (No squirting is allowed, no semen is allowed, no holy mother is allowed)

The writing is very good, very healing, and the author is also a good person, but I have one thing to ask the author, that is, where do you live? I want to give you some warmth and my family's local specialties, a box of ah, not a blue, more than seven hundred dollars, pure iron... Impure alloy,

The writing is very good, and the psychology of the characters is also well grasped. I hope the heroine's emotions can be more real, and sometimes she will be angry because of the protagonist. If the heroine is not a system, then the emotions should be richer. Remember to update more, hehe.

I stayed up late watching it, and from the beginning I frowned when I thought the protagonist was cowardly, but now I feel his growth, and I feel happy from the bottom of my heart. The protagonist is real, a person of flesh and blood, and after waiting for the first few chapters, I saw a different style. As the author said, he is a hero, but I still think he is an imperfect child. Fortunately, he has Lian's company and rarely reads male videos, but this book really made me read it carefully. Excellent work. After reading too many cold apocalyptic articles, it's actually quite surprising to suddenly see a book that helps others. Don't forget your original intention just because the books you read online push people far away. What I like has always been things that make people move towards a better version of themselves. Of course, I don't understand the emotional line. Some people will say that the protagonist is like a pile driver. But he was only 20 years old. In the initial betrayal and killing, in a world different from our current society, this was normal. But once it becomes a habit, can it be changed? Because I don't like emotional lines, I used to read novels without CP. This book was a breakthrough for me. Come on, author! I will continue to watch!

Let me comment. The writing of this book is not very good, the writing style is not very good, and the plot is not novel. The level is purely based on physical strength. I hope the author can change. Looking at the current development trend, it should be soon. Although the writing is not very good, it has an inexplicable attraction for me. I can only say "sweet". I hope the author will not give up on this book. Come on💪

This type of novel can be read for a long time, and it feels good every time I read it. It's not like some cool novels that feel boring if you don't read them for a while. If nothing else, it's super good anyway, and the author is awesome! ! !

I will keep following this book. The most touching part of this book is that Chen Shi met Ran Wei, Shi Shan, Bei Xing, Hongtan, Lei Zihang and others. They all died in the beast wave, but Chen Shi could still be resurrected with Lian's technology, which would take a million times. I think this is what motivates me to pursue it. Come on, Lao Chen💪.

Pig's Knuckle is very much in line with the mentality of ordinary ordinary people. He also has the growth experience of being a protagonist. He gradually changes from an ordinary person who is greedy for life and afraid of death and panics when encountering difficulties to an experienced hunter who has been on the battlefield for a long time. In short, it is worth watching. At the same time, the author also has some areas for improvement, so keep up the good work! There is a problem. It is destroyed as soon as it settles down. It has always been this old routine. The author can't think of a new plot. I suggest you improve it. In addition, the psychological description of the protagonist is too complicated. Since he has been wandering between life and death so many times, why is he still so indecisive?

I can only say that the atmosphere and rhythm of the teacher's writing are very good, very good, and it fits the plot very well. The inner monologue and character description are also very good. There is a little emotion in the front and some are not appropriate, but the more I read, the better it becomes. The author must support you [love]

Looks good~ Five stars given!

See now, first of all, this book is not Madonna. Secondly, it looks good! Boldly try this style among Tomato's many cool articles. (After all, cool articles are more popular) Anyway, I feel very comfortable watching it, so don't stop updating it😂 When you thought there were no knives. No! The knife is already on your neck. How can you think that there is no knife? This is disrespectful to the author.

The writing is wonderful and has a strong sense of immersion. I have read several of the author's books and they are very powerful👍

It's very interesting, and it depicts real human nature and reality, and the details are OK, but I think it's a bit overdone, but it doesn't have much impact.

The final ending is relatively perfect, but the author's world view is actually very grand. If it weren't for the difficulty in constructing the subsequent articles, there might be a sequel, but just don't do the nesting dolls. Overall, the book is very good, with ups and downs of the plot and clear central idea. It's worth reading [laughing]

The truth is often the hardest to reveal. The selfishness, ugliness, kindness and fearlessness of human nature are all vividly displayed in the book. Maybe the writing is not the best, but I see a light that is infinitely close to reality Come on!

This book is very close to the reality of "people" and is different from the usual repetitive, cumbersome and exaggerated novels. It allows you to experience the most real feelings of an ordinary person. It can bring people deeply into this story, and it can become a god in all aspects of emotion and psychology! The definition of "Protagonist" has been completely refreshed from the stereotype! Undoubtedly a masterpiece