I Can Trade My Time

I think it can be made a god, and the portrayal of human nature is very successful. Whether it is the initial inability to start, panic, shock at the betrayal of companions and not trusting others, to the later calmness, calmness, and handing the back to the companions, the details are all in place. But can you please stop being so cruel😭

The emotions of the characters in it are very real. Yeah, a very good book It ranks second among all the books I have read.

Originally, I was disdainful of the cowardly character of the protagonist, but when I think about it carefully, if the so-called gap between the protagonist and ordinary people is only one system, one golden finger, then the protagonist is meaningless, so I watched it with expectation for a while, and now I have finished watching it. The protagonist is now a person with a strong sense of justice and will make up his mind. He takes risks to save people, but he is also very emotional. The word fear appears very frequently, and there are also some death scenes. It does have the effect of being put into a life and death crisis, which makes me feel that the protagonist's emotionality is very powerful. Wandering between life and death can drive a person crazy, but it is difficult to maintain normal emotions. It is not an exaggeration at all. This It's not a matter of risking one's life. People who have suffered the pain of a broken arm are not simple. If you ask me, the cowardice at the beginning is in contrast to the current protagonist. He quickly goes from ordinary to special. The protagonist grows very fast, but the description is a bit insufficient. I hope the author can describe more about the psychological growth of the protagonist. It is best not to talk about it directly and use more events to infer it. Advance, in addition, the female protagonist can have a stronger sense of presence and be slightly more active in helping the male protagonist, otherwise the emotional tone will be a little different. However, the most important thing is to write the male protagonist well, because most readers seem to read the book as the male protagonist. After thinking about the male protagonist, please pay more attention to the female protagonist. An excellent female protagonist will also be more enjoyable to read.

Perfect, the description of the character's psychology is great, too real and realistic, but some people may not understand it. On Tomato, it's hard to live without Shuangwen.

It's great. It tells a story about an ordinary person who has gone through ups and downs and grown up in human nature. Unlike other novels, which are extremely calm and even cold-blooded, the protagonist is flesh and blood, just an ordinary person, but he understands human nature through the loss of teammates one after another during hunting. It's great, but it needs a little more color in portraying the emotions of the characters. Come on.

The writing is very good. I heard it's quite sad from what you said, but why do I feel so good when I read it? Doctor! Can I still be saved?

The writing is quite good, but it may be due to stereotypes and prejudices. I don't particularly like some of the content and the updates are too slow. As for giving five stars, I thought about it and there are two reasons. The first reason is that the author is not easy. The second reason is: I prefer Chen Shi who sacrificed his life to save Gu Hong. I have had a similar experience. When I saw this chapter, I thought about it. I only saw chapter 45 and I haven't finished it yet. I just read it. Look, of course I hope this person doesn't die. This book is too brutal. I originally thought that a few people could live for a long time, but they died without even one chapter. Oh, I dare say this is the most comments I have ever written. After all, after reading this book, I thought of some people. Well, this book makes people think deeply. I am filled with emotion when I think that as a science student, I have the opportunity to write a 222-word comment. Come on, author!

I stayed up all night to read it, my evaluation of this novel The female protagonist cannot see or hear, only the male protagonist can touch and hear. The female protagonist is only the male protagonist, and the male protagonist's spiritual support is also the female protagonist. Whenever the male protagonist is desperate, the female protagonist will be by her side to encourage and comfort the male protagonist. I really like this female protagonist as the perfect type of wife. I give 9.9 Points for the female protagonist's setting. Let's talk about the bad points: The plot is a bit too compact. Except for the male and female protagonists, the other supporting characters are there to knife the hero, to make the hero depressed, and to make the hero feel the cruelty and beauty of reality (I am a little speechless at this point. I didn't expect that the supporting characters are all used to knife, and none of them hahahahaha)

It depicts the actions that an ordinary person might take when encountering problems in the author's eyes, rather than the absolutely rational actions from God's perspective. The portrayal of human nature is not as profound as The Alone in Another World, which is a bit more enjoyable. The writing is quite good, and the rhythm of the writing is also well controlled.

It's okay. There is no such thing as the Virgin Mary mentioned by the following perverts. The confession of killing good people is also relatively real. The protagonist's choice of being a time hunter in the early stage is indeed a bit contradictory, but it is okay later on. The protagonist's cowardice is inevitable. He has lived in a safe zone since he was a child, and he probably hasn't seen much life passing by. There is a problem with being brave and good at fighting and not afraid of death. (There are a lot of plots, and there are only a few chapters. If the protagonist needs comfort, he can do it in other ways. There is a comment in the book review that "men's desires are not that big" which is very appropriate)