Pokémon: Journey Beyond

The novel is overall good. The level structure of the elf world is perfect. The addition of transformation is a bit abrupt but useless. Since I have read the journey, I feel very happy after reading it. The elf level in the early stage of Pikachu is a bit high. I am afraid that it will end too quickly and there will be no good plot in the later stage. It is recommended to suppress the plot and not finish it too early.

How can I put it, the writing is pretty good. I have read a lot of Pokémon novels. Although this novel is not perfect, the ones I have read before are pretty good. Many of them have high ratings but are vicious, and many have low ratings, but they are still very interesting. In fact, yours is not unsightly, but it just has a lot of ideas. You can easily see it in the novel. You just Like many novice authors I have seen before, they have good ideas, but they cannot be integrated into the novel. Your novel starts well, but when your ideas cannot be integrated into the novel, the readers will feel unreasonable, or even uncomfortable, or even unacceptable. It depends on your ideas and whether they are well integrated. The better and more reasonable the integration, the more acceptable it will be to readers. [Laughing] Let me give you a word of advice, those who like Pokémon may not necessarily like you, and those who don't like Pokémon may like you. ? [Laughs] Be optimistic and embrace the world with your heart, and you won't care about the discomfort.

It's good to read. It only needs ten chapters a day! Bangela, Biting Land Shark, Metagross, Tyrannosaurus, Lucario, Gardevoir, arrange it quickly

This book is very good, I like it very much, but can the author write about the harem?

I would call this book the strongest! Play with two of my favorite female characters, Sirona and Serena, at the same time! The author understands me! ! !

The only elf novel I can read at the moment is very good. I wonder if the plot of the theatrical version will be added? Because the theatrical version is almost incompatible with the main plot of the anime, if they are added, I hope to include some powerful ones in the theatrical version. [Code to live][code to live][code to live]

Well done, I hope the author, Duo Duo, a dog abuser, has grown displeased with him a long time ago. Because I have given up on his animations and only watch them when Zhi Ye is at home. Now the battles in the animation are not exciting anymore. I hope the author can make the battle plots more exciting.

The plot is smooth. Although the writing is flawed, I don't care. The key is that it's fun. That's enough. But I hope the author can write more about the emotional line with Pikachu. (Big brother, please help me, I'm too unlucky, all the holy relics are useless, all tm rock element damage bonus (sad) After watching it for so long, I always felt that it was shortcomings. I finally realized that Xiaozhi without the support of "Pika Pika" during the battle has no soul! My Pikachu, my whole family is in a state of desolation. We can take a bath without it, go on the road without it, and win without him. My poor Pikachu, oooooh, so pitiful.

It can be regarded as one of the few Zhiye fanfics in Tomato. The combat power is not broken. It is very interesting and the plot is very coherent.

4 Stars is not bad. Although the protagonist of this Pokémon fanfic is Ash Ketchum, it just tells a different story about Ash Ketchum's travels. It's just that it's over, and it's a pity that there's no picture of the ending……

The writing is pretty good. Don't be discouraged, the author. There are too many people reading novels. There are all kinds of birds in the forest. Don't punish yourself because of other people's mistakes. Be happy and don't let them affect your emotions and life. Just live every day well. It's not too late to write novels when you have time and inspiration.

Come on, the author＾0＾~, and the author is begging you, can you please stop it from being a mess? I think your writing is very good, but the first reading is a bit strange, but you also transitioned later. I think it is very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Come on＾0＾~

It's good-looking. No matter how you write it, it's good to be able to write at this level. After finishing this book, I have experience in re-opening it. As I write, I just need to slowly make up for the shortcomings. Everyone has a different style of reading fanfiction Pokémon. Some people like it and some don't, and the author doesn't force some people to read it.

This book is very beautiful and wonderful. I personally think it is a very good book. Goodbye, author. See you again in the future! Goodbye Xiaozhi, my childhood, goodbye author [cry][cry][cry]

Very good, great, but I feel that in the early stage, I am now over level 70. In the later stage, I just want to learn like the anime, without bringing the original Pokémon? But I still feel that the plot is very good and I hope the author will continue to work hard💪🏻💪🏻

This book is well written. I don't know why there are so many trolls. Maybe some of them are professionals.

I really like this book. I originally read this book just to fulfill the dream of Xiaozhi having the aura of the protagonist. Come on, just be happy. I saved it before and read it today. Suddenly I saw the chapter where I stopped reading. I was stunned for a while. Come on, I hope I can finish it. It's okay to take it slow.

This book is as good as Ash Ketchum's book "Pokémon Dreams Come True". The disadvantage is that the update speed is too slow [face covering], so the author should work hard [please update]

This book is very well written and I hope it can be continued without being unfinished. Here I would like to give the author a suggestion. I hope Xiaozhi can control the power of mage in the future. The power of mage is not the kind that requires mage stones, but full possession of this power. The unlocking conditions are to have colorful meteorites, vermilion orbs, indigo orbs,

To be honest, it's really good. You just need to imagine the Transcendence Terminal as a kind of superpower and then give birth to new skills and improve your strength. It's just that some readers can't stand the mixing of two different worldviews. I seem to be watching Serena and Xiaozhi next [crying][crying][crying][crying] The setting of Lao Pang and Gyarados is really good

Everything else is pretty good, I'm not a little retarded, I'm a bit of a bully, but this terminal is so weird, especially the ability to load armor, I watch it every time, it feels like a hard fusion. When I saw this paragraph, I thought of Dadi inserting the card, not Xiaozhi inserting the card.

Come on author! I believe you can do it well! There must also be a harem! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Come on, author, take a rest when you are tired. Those who like it will naturally like it, and those who don't like it, just let them be. I hope to see Xiaozhi win 5 or 6 consecutive championships and make up for the regrets in the animation.

Yes, yes, the author will listen to readers' suggestions and often interact with book friends. Although the writing style is relatively immature (a bit like reading an outline [laughing]), he will add some of his own ideas, that is, he must have a good attitude. Writing books and reading are both accumulated bit by bit. Come on💪

Not bad actually. It can be seen that the author is not a big expert in Pokémon, and does not know enough details about some settings. But the writing is actually pretty good. I don't know why it won't be updated later. Maybe it's like the author himself said, but he doesn't have a good grasp of the system rewards.

2023.1.3 7.24 Pm Finished watching🌸🌸🌸 (▼ plate▼#) It looks good, but it's a pity (*｀へ´*)

Seeing this, I can only say that it is good. In terms of plot, I think it is remarkable and there is room for improvement. If it can be improved, then this novel will at least be among the best among Pokémon fans. Secondly, the Pokémon of the protagonist. Although I have roughly guessed what Pokémon the protagonist wants to conquer, I am still looking forward to it. Then, in the old spray, there are self-created ones, but they can be explained and accepted. In the end, Gou Hao's part is... Intriguing, everyone and the author have said it. In short, a good fan novel that raises some standards is the work of a master (personal opinion, please don't criticize)

I think it's pretty good, but it would be nice if more elf combat upgrades could be written about, and less about the unimportant daily stuff. Everyone has their own tastes, so don't worry about those people. Come on, author. You can change that card to a power of super evolution for the elves to use. Don't add other elements. It will be better.

Four points of encouragement! It can be seen that the author is a college student, but the writing style should be above average. The story line basically follows the anime, but it is a bit more exciting than the anime. The plot ends on the Orange Islands (the Orange Islands don't have much plot, and the city is not opened). Although there are two heroines who have a crush on Ash, there has been no real progress. The ending is a bit abrupt, but the author also explained the reason and expressed his understanding. All in all, Shuhuang Player is worth watching!

It's pretty good. Although it's unfinished, it's pretty good and not particularly toxic. I feel like I read this book from its characteristics at the beginning until it's finished. Although it's unfinished, it's really well written. I'll keep this book on my bookshelf and probably won't move it out.