While roaming the universe, I picked up something that looked like a spare part, and after repairing it, it turned into a system, and this system looked like a workable material.... From then on, a small pendant was added to one's travels.
Reader comments
I have been looking for a quick time travel story with a male protagonist for a long time, but I don't know why the quick time travel stories on female channels all feature two men from the male protagonist's perspective. I don't understand! But there are still people like you, the author, who write things that normal people can read. Hey hey hey author I support you! Keep at it!
You can do some fantasy!
I've read ten chapters, so that's a general overview! To sum up my personal opinion - the author's writing style needs to be improved a lot, and there are still some problems that it does not introduce the protagonist's hacking ability; there are no gangsters who skip classes in high school, because they will be expelled. [Personal suggestion: When writing a villain, it is best not to describe it from the front, but from the side. It can better describe the character. The same goes for the protagonist. When writing about a villain, don't directly write about how bad he is. You can write sideways about how bad he is or the reasons why he is bad. By all means, there are no completely bad people in the world, and vice versa. ]
This book is still good. If the author wanted to end it, I hope it ends like this.
Zhixian completed all the tasks and returned to his original world, but suddenly found that the wife he married in every world also came to his own world. Zhixian got to know a few women and smiled, and then lived a harem life without shame or impatience.
My writing style may not be very good, but generally I hope it will be a happy ending, without any tragedy or knives.
This article is the kind of love that flows slowly and steadily, without so many bloody points. This article is the kind of heartwarming and everyday article. I like it very much! I've read too many fast-moving articles and I'm a little tired. Reading this book can relieve mental fatigue~
Cooking tea in a small pot, the water flows slowly, elegant and fragrant, simple and unpretentious
I really like this kind of plot. Although it's a quick time travel, I really like the plot.
Why is the rating so low? It's obviously very pretty
Come on, every story is redemption
This book is super good, thank you to the author!
Come on! Super good-looking Super good-looking
It's quite interesting. Although the plot is a bit tight, it's not elegant. It only gets five stars. I hope this style will continue.
Why do the male protagonists written by the author always save the female protagonist and then get together with her? All for the heroine in the novel
The front is pretty good! Why does the male protagonist's character "change" later on?
It's quite interesting, but some of the small worlds end so suddenly. I'm still looking forward to the sweet follow-up [laughing and crying] Nuan Nuan's world is a bit regretful, personally I prefer the perfect ending [full] The latest unlucky landlord is a bit brain-burning, and I'm a bit confused so far, looking forward to the follow-up [laughing]
Although I just watched it, I will give you a five-star review first.
I quite like this book
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Big cheers for the author
Not bad, very pretty
After watching one, I couldn't stop. So addictive.
The first part is good, but the second part doesn't feel like a traveler anymore.
I like it~ I feel like the male protagonist is really gentle~
It's quite interesting. At least it didn't make me feel like the author was gibbering. Even if the plot is bland, I can still read it.
Overall it's pretty good^ω^
The school sweetheart's little confusion is so beautiful there
It's very beautiful, I like every little story, and every ending is very good [Like][Like]
The story is short but interesting
Great author, cheers
Come on, I really like what you wrote.
Getting prettier and prettier
I don't quite understand why the ratings of good books are so low every time
I have been looking for a quick time travel story with a male protagonist for a long time, but I don't know why the quick time travel stories on female channels all feature two men from the male protagonist's perspective. I don't understand! But there are still people like you, the author, who write things that normal people can read. Hey hey hey author I support you! Keep at it! You can do some fantasy!
I've read ten chapters, so that's a general overview! To sum up my personal opinion - the author's writing style needs to be improved a lot, and there are still some problems that it does not introduce the protagonist's hacking ability; there are no gangsters who skip classes in high school, because they will be expelled. [Personal suggestion: When writing a villain, it is best not to describe it from the front, but from the side. It can better describe the character. The same goes for the protagonist. When writing about a villain, don't directly write about how bad he is. You can write sideways about how bad he is or the reasons why he is bad. By all means, there are no completely bad people in the world, and vice versa. ]
This book is still good. If the author wanted to end it, I hope it ends like this. Zhixian completed all the tasks and returned to his original world, but suddenly found that the wife he married in every world also came to his own world. Zhixian got to know a few women and smiled, and then lived a harem life without shame or impatience. My writing style may not be very good, but generally I hope it will be a happy ending, without any tragedy or knives.
This article is the kind of love that flows slowly and steadily, without so many bloody points. This article is the kind of heartwarming and everyday article. I like it very much! I've read too many fast-moving articles and I'm a little tired. Reading this book can relieve mental fatigue~
Cooking tea in a small pot, the water flows slowly, elegant and fragrant, simple and unpretentious
I really like this kind of plot. Although it's a quick time travel, I really like the plot.
Why is the rating so low? It's obviously very pretty
Come on, every story is redemption
This book is super good, thank you to the author!
Come on! Super good-looking Super good-looking
It's quite interesting. Although the plot is a bit tight, it's not elegant. It only gets five stars. I hope this style will continue.
Why do the male protagonists written by the author always save the female protagonist and then get together with her? All for the heroine in the novel
The front is pretty good! Why does the male protagonist's character "change" later on?
It's quite interesting, but some of the small worlds end so suddenly. I'm still looking forward to the sweet follow-up [laughing and crying] Nuan Nuan's world is a bit regretful, personally I prefer the perfect ending [full] The latest unlucky landlord is a bit brain-burning, and I'm a bit confused so far, looking forward to the follow-up [laughing]
Although I just watched it, I will give you a five-star review first. I quite like this book
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Big cheers for the author
Not bad, very pretty
After watching one, I couldn't stop. So addictive.
The first part is good, but the second part doesn't feel like a traveler anymore.
I like it~ I feel like the male protagonist is really gentle~
It's quite interesting. At least it didn't make me feel like the author was gibbering. Even if the plot is bland, I can still read it.
Overall it's pretty good^ω^
The school sweetheart's little confusion is so beautiful there
It's very beautiful, I like every little story, and every ending is very good [Like][Like]
The story is short but interesting
Great author, cheers
Come on, I really like what you wrote.
Getting prettier and prettier
I don't quite understand why the ratings of good books are so low every time