Casting on a Deserted Island: School Beauty Please Follow Me

Desert Island novel is the first novel I read, and I have some experience with it. Overall, it is good. The main reason why no one reads it is because there is no system (of course I like it very much). I like unsystematic novels very much, but the big era is system, and there is no other way. Well, the plot is the development of the earlier desert island novels. It has an innovative start, especially there is no system, and I don't cultivate immortality, so I have to mutate (what I have read before) This book is a bit like), the plot is very good, and the mutated content is also relatively new. There are not many plot points. Personally, the most unacceptable thing is the relationship with the wife. I still like to show the glorious humanity in disasters. I am not saying that I want the Virgin, but I should abide by the minimum morals. At least I hope the protagonist is like this. There are also emotional lines that feel weird, nothing else, overall it is good

Good start, keep going!

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the writing is quite good. Good cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes] Come on! Although there are not many book reviews now, if you continue writing, you will definitely get good results. When the book becomes popular, I will be the veteran [cool] [cool] [cool]

A pretty good start

It's good to watch. The previous chapters of survival are very well written, but starting from chapter 80 it completely starts to burn your brain. I'm looking forward to the subsequent chapters [laughing awkwardly]

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