(Not a harem, not invincible, not routine, not systematic, not brainless, not cool)
The young man collapsed on the grass and looked at everything around him at a loss. He still couldn't believe it and rubbed his eyes again and again.
When he came to another world, he was surrounded by a group of monsters under a tree at the beginning. When he was desperate and was bitten until he had only one breath left, he was rescued by Lin Nai, who came to this other world five years earlier than him. In the subsequent interactions, Wu Yuan, who learned about the girl's past and the injury to her soul, resolutely embarked on the road to save her...
This is a two-dimensional time travel novel that tells the story of the love between two people, the growth of Wu Yuan, and the duel between swords.
A journey of passion, pure love, comedy, and a fantasy story of time travel.
Reader comments
The writing is quite good, but the writing technique needs improvement.
The plot advances a bit slowly, and the side plots are too long-winded, so they should be cut.
The plot also needs to have appropriate ups and downs and reflect contradictions. This is very important.
Finally, there is emotion. There's nothing much to say about this.
If you want to write it later, just keep advancing the plot. There will be climaxes one after another, and the baff should be full of jokes. There are also some things that have nothing to do with the main plot that are briefly written and passed over in one stroke. Write more emotional and combat content to whet the reader's taste.
The writing is quite good, but the writing technique needs improvement. The plot advances a bit slowly, and the side plots are too long-winded, so they should be cut. The plot also needs to have appropriate ups and downs and reflect contradictions. This is very important. Finally, there is emotion. There's nothing much to say about this. If you want to write it later, just keep advancing the plot. There will be climaxes one after another, and the baff should be full of jokes. There are also some things that have nothing to do with the main plot that are briefly written and passed over in one stroke. Write more emotional and combat content to whet the reader's taste.
It's pretty good, come on