(No harem, no invincibility, no clichés, no System, no brainless plot, no wish fulfillment)
The boy sprawled on the grass, staring helplessly at everything around him. He still couldn’t believe it, rubbing his eyes again and again.
After arriving in another world, he was surrounded from the start by a whole pack of monsters beneath a tree. Just as he fell into despair and was left with only a breath after being torn apart, Lin Nai, who had arrived in this world five years before him, rescued him. As Wu Yuan learned about the girl’s past and the wounds to her soul, he resolutely set out to save her...
This is a fantasy novel with an anime-inspired transmigration theme. It tells of their love, Wu Yuan’s growth, and duels between swords.
A thrilling, pure-love, comedic fantasy adventure about transmigration.
The writing is quite good, but the writing technique needs improvement.
The plot advances a bit slowly, and the side plots are too long-winded, so they should be cut.
The plot also needs to have appropriate ups and downs and reflect contradictions. This is very important.
Finally, there is emotion. There's nothing much to say about this.
If you want to write it later, just keep advancing the plot. There will be climaxes one after another, and the baff should be full of jokes. There are also some things that have nothing to do with the main plot that are briefly written and passed over in one stroke. Write more emotional and combat content to whet the reader's taste.
The writing is quite good, but the writing technique needs improvement. The plot advances a bit slowly, and the side plots are too long-winded, so they should be cut. The plot also needs to have appropriate ups and downs and reflect contradictions. This is very important. Finally, there is emotion. There's nothing much to say about this. If you want to write it later, just keep advancing the plot. There will be climaxes one after another, and the baff should be full of jokes. There are also some things that have nothing to do with the main plot that are briefly written and passed over in one stroke. Write more emotional and combat content to whet the reader's taste.
It's pretty good, come on