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Beast control? Chinese comic goddess? Harem? I like chasing. Love it, love it, it's really good. I've confirmed that the eyes are my thing. It doesn't matter whether the content is good or not. What matters is whether it's a beast-controlling girl, a Chinese comic goddess, or a harem. There are beast girls and Chinese comic goddesses, so there won't be anyone who cares about the content and plot, right? No way? No way? Five stars have been given to the eunuch. I don't expect you to finish a thousand chapters, I only ask you to finish more than five hundred chapters. I don't want to say anything, but it's a bad review. As for what's going on, go read the comments below. I feel disgusted with this book, that's all

The little apprentice jockey Miezu looks good.

It's nice to read, and the writing is good, but it's too little to enjoy. Why do so few people see it?

This book is the second best-looking novel in the entire series that I have read. . . . . Let me tell you secretly that the first one I like very much is "I Randomly Make a System Every Day" [Eat Melon] [Eat Melon] [Eat Melon] [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out]

The book really appealed to my taste, and it was very good for me. First of all, I would like to thank the author for his hard work. Hahahahahahahahaha. I originally read it as a fun read, but it became more and more wrong as I read it. When Leng Yue committed suicide, I felt really sad. I read it in one go, so it was so emotionally rich that I feel empty after reading the chapter I was thinking about [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. But the book is still very good and recommended.

Not bad, not bad, it suits my taste. Come on, author, you can make a breakthrough. Every week when I go home and pick up my phone, I check to see if the author has updated it. I hope it won't collapse in the future.

This book is very interesting. Ji Yan's comedy, the forbidden love between master and apprentice, and the appearances of various Chinese comic goddesses, etc. Are all the reasons why I like this book. I hope the author can update it faster. I can't get enough of it every day! Come on, author! [Please update]

Ahem, this book is really, really good! The protagonist's halo is sparkling, and the author's writing is humorous. I watched, laughed, and kept watching and laughing. However, the middle part was also sad due to the plot. The death of the senior sister who defended Luo Yi from the knife made me feel that the author was too cruel. I felt that there should not have been that plot. The tragic battle between humans and ghosts was described in such a way that it made people feel like they were actually there. All in all, this novel is really great and very funny!

This is the only novel about cultivating immortals that I have read for 4 years. It made me burst into tears. The pictures are so touching. I am a boy. I cried when I read this novel. Wow. This is also the only time I comment on the novel after four years of reading it.

I serve the quintessence of the Chinese nation, this is so well written. I was immediately moved later, okay. It was also touching and funny later on, and then a little heartwarming at the end. I have to say that this book is very well written. Really recommend this book. But there is also a disadvantage. The previous part focused on the beast control. The latter part is a little bit not very close to the beast control. So what I said was a bit confusing. Overall, it's pretty cool. I can't think of better words to praise this book. All I can say is awesome.

I personally think this book is good-looking. I personally like this flow of traveling through the system of cultivating immortals. I hope the author can create such an excellent work again! [Laughing][admiration][top post] @

Use humorous writing to write a plot with ups and downs, and use a bland villain (Fan Changqing) to highlight the protagonist's natural appearance. Although the follow-up is not satisfactory, the ending is happy (I can't edit it anymore)

The harem is very good. The master-disciple relationship didn't start directly, but they managed to get together until the end. The ambiguous process in the middle was very nice. The protagonist is also very mean, and the author uses a lot of Internet memes. All in all very good.

It's good to watch. In the later stage of the war, the protagonist went to Shuanguguan and started to fight. Leng Yue was forced to death by his master. The protagonist was heartbroken and decided to kill all the immortals in the world. In the end, he did it, even his brothers and friends were not spared. In the end, Leng Yue was resurrected. The two teamed up to kill the villain Bai Di, and the protagonist used the reincarnation ghost body to resurrect everyone.

It's still very interesting, but there are a lot of typos, but I'm not sticking to details and give it 5 stars (some of the plots are not very reasonable, for example, the spiritual stone should not be difficult to get, there are many tasks once you complete them, the two royal people, why do they only have so few spiritual stones? They should be able to do the tasks)

It was so good, I watched it several times. As for the last knife, to be honest, I was touched; I really liked Ji Yan and Leng Yue's leisure time together, it was very healing; finally, the part where Ji Yan destroyed the world looked very sad, and it broke my heart. But the writing later was a bit fast... But the author wrote really well, and I look forward to the next work. But some parts are not explained clearly, such as how Leng Yue was resurrected? You didn't make it clear why Tiandao chose the protagonist?

To be honest, I was very scared after watching the whole scene. The author pulled out a knife, which scared me to death. The whole thing is wonderful, but the part where the main character goes crazy feels like something is missing. Changing the ending to an open-ended or suspenseful ending is more exciting.

Good. Personally (this is my first serious review), I think there are a few shortcomings (don't criticize if you don't like it). The characters are not full, probably because there are too many characters (harem characters), and things are not reflected enough. Two people think that a lot of funny things can be added. After all, there is a system (not convinced? Come hit me!). The author can learn from this point, King Spare My Life (I haven't read it, but I heard what my classmates said) or other things. 3 The plot can be sweeter (dao (ahem, nonsense)) and some foreshadowing can be set up. (Again!! Don't criticize if you don't like it!!! I am stupid and may have some shortcomings, but this is my first serious comment [top post] [eating melon] [note]

The contrast between the front and back is a bit big. The first half is relaxed, humorous and invincible. I can push it all the way. The second half... Ugh, it's heart-wrenching and a bit too fast. Come on, the author. I look forward to better works [Like]

It's pretty good. They say abuse is actually not bad. If you have a smooth journey, it's better to read some cool articles. The main reason is that Leng Yue's character is almost actually willing to marry that person, and it's not direct, which means that he is not loyal to love. Another timeline may have abandoned the protagonist. Marrying someone else just for a word from the master, whether you like it or not, is no longer worthy of the heroine

The content is very colorful, the whole text is full of ups and downs, it is a refreshing and refreshing article, and the ending is very happy! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

This book is also very good-looking. Ji Yan previously unlocked a lot of beauties and beast-controllers through the system, all of them at the level of goddesses. And for various reasons, he had a relationship with his master Leng Yue, and they had a child, Ji Niannian, in a spring (I forgot the name). Later, Ji Yan was stabbed by Leng Yue with his sword, which hit Ji Yan. In the end, Ji Yan went crazy and became the Ghost Emperor. Later, he destroyed all the heavens and worlds and fought against the White Emperor. In the end, Leng Yue's resurrection helped him. In the end, Ji Yan and Leng Yue restored Wanjie. And married Leng Yue. Ji Yan's beasts were all resurrected. Summary: It seemed very enjoyable at the beginning, but at the end it felt like I wanted to cry, and the ending was very sloppy. Overall it's ok! ! ! If I can write better in the future, I feel it will be even better! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

What a wife! I'm so good-looking. Can you keep Luo Yi? And that Mu thing is really good-looking.

The writing is good. The only shortcoming is that all the bad guys are almost alive. The heroine in the later period is too frustrated. She has to bear the huge injustice alone. In the finale, all the big villains are resurrected! It's the type I like to watch, so I gave it four stars. Overall, it's about two and a half stars. I hope you will continue to work hard and write books that everyone will like!

It's very nice. Although there are a lot of knives in the back, this is the only novel I have finished in the past year. I haven't even finished The Perfect World [Read carefully] I hope the author can write a novel by Lao Liu, very Lao Liu.

It's so good. I've been reading Tomato Novels for more than two years and it's my first review. It's so good.

Okay, okay! When I first watched it, the male protagonist was confused when he was accepted as the apprentice by the empress. There were also foreshadowings during the subsequent training, but I felt that the empress was still too gentle. The scenes where the male protagonist and the beast are together feel like they should be more detailed [admiration], hehe... Although I feel that the male protagonist is not thoughtful enough and a little brainless, but overall it is still good! ! !

The background of this book is very broad, and the content is also good, especially the early and middle stages are better written. The only bad thing is that in the later stage, the combat power collapsed, and there was a bit of knife. Overall, it is very good. The ending barely meets my expectations. Good luck to the author [cry][angry][angry][love][love][love][love]

It's great. Although the plot behind it is a bit tight, it's still tear-jerking. When I saw Leng Yue's death, I immediately wanted to send you a blade, but I'm sure I like the ending. Hahaha. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

This book is the best one I have read out of all the books I have read. Especially at the end, the part where the protagonist goes dark is so fierce that he couldn't be killed before if he didn't have the strength. The second part is about killing whoever is unhappy. It's also very funny. It's like Gunara, the God of Darkness, and there's a 100% dizzy brick. It's awesome.