The Beginning: The Ultimate Smooth Talker

From the moment Captain Zhang inexplicably confessed his crime, I didn't know what he was writing about? It's a mess, the main character is also mentally ill, and it's obvious that the cycle starts when he wakes up, so why do he care so much about whether he's guilty or not? I was so confused, I thought the cycle was over, but later it was said that there is still a cycle? Why were you so excited before that? Did the author drink fake wine? It's even more bullshit when the protagonist sees Xiao Heyun dead and resurrected. Your cycle has been restored. You're wasting the opportunity to be resurrected. I'm really drunk. The plot written later has no logic at all.

Zhang Cheng believed in cycles after watching a strongman performance? Is there a necessary connection between strength and circulation? And the most outrageous thing is that you suddenly took the blame and were sentenced to death. Even if you believe in the cycle, does it have anything to do with you taking the blame? And he didn't even explain why he took the blame for the author, and just passed away. Moreover, the protagonist group actually started to rush to plead guilty. This is a cycle, brothers and sisters, your main mission is not wasted here. It's getting really outrageous. . . . And later in the loop, Xiao Heyun died, and the protagonist actually spent the death-free gold medal to resurrect him?? I am so confused. You are in a cycle. If you die, you will die. If you sleep, the cycle will start again. Why go out of your way to resurrect him? He is sick!!

I've only read a few chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. 1. The plots before and after do not correspond. In the first chapter, it is said that the protagonist only saw Li Shiqing being stabbed in the neck and then traveled through time. Later, the protagonist told Li Xiao that they wanted Lao Zhang's phone number and a photo of the woman's ID card; 2. The plot is absurd. The protagonist stops the bus halfway, then grabs the pressure cooker and throws it into the police station??? Is this an arm or a cannonball launcher? 3. The characters' personalities have been changed. What did Xiao Heyun and Officer Zhang look like? 4. If it is forcibly unfolded, how can a criminal be caught this afternoon and shot tomorrow? Or Jiang Feng jumped off the bridge, swam to the shore in a deserted place, took out his mobile phone to check the tracking position, and then threatened the three protagonists with a gun??? Putting aside whether Jiang Feng would be able to do such a thing and how to make his cell phone and pistol waterproof, couldn't he drive to find it? Looking for it without swimming? The three protagonists are not hiding in places where land routes are inaccessible.

A simple thing has been made so complicated by the protagonist. To be honest, it doesn't look good.

Originally, it was good to add a multi-looper setting, but the protagonist was too unreliable and felt unscrupulous and unscrupulous. I originally followed the script and solved it all at once, but in the end, I had to add so many unnecessary pitfalls.

The author is awesome. I saw it in the early stage and it was relatively average. In the later stage, it was really good. But after the author starts and ends, can he write about Jiu Shu Xingye and Jackie Chan? The author gives you an idea. You consider that real-world stars are celebrities and entertainers. Wouldn't it be interesting to travel back in time and live in their own works? Think about it.

It's really outrageous

The original text has been completely revised. The main character is still so good after maxing out his physical fitness.

What did you write? It's outrageous.

No, no, just ask them to leave┐(´-`)┌