Starting with the Night Guy Template: Every Punch Lands with a Meaty Thud

First give yourself a five-star review to cheer you up, but it's not too much. ✌(̿▀̿ ̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)✌

This writing is so baffling, I'm really speechless.

I couldn't stand Chapter 11 because it was really messy. I don't know if the author wanted to write a flashback. If he had written a flashback, there were indeed too many previous chapters. He got involved with someone else inexplicably. There was no background introduction, and there might be some punctuation errors in some places. For example, after a person finished speaking a sentence, he didn't have a period or other symbol at the end, and just continued with quotation marks. I usually listen to books, so it's easier to find out. Although the writing before Chapter 11 is a bit confusing, the author's description of the fighting is not bad. If the author optimizes it, it may be very good. I give five stars for encouragement, even if the writing is not satisfactory, but it took time to write, which is my recognition of the author's efforts. In fact, I started writing novels recently, so I can comment on it when I have time. By the way, will the author see it?

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