Alice and Hogwarts

I hope there will be a side story. I really like this article. I feel it would be better to have a side story. Snape is so warm in his daily life [laughing]

Some of the sentences written by the author are not fluent, but they are still good and still need improvement. I hope the author will continue to work hard~(ง•̀_•́)ง

The writing is good, but when I read it, I always felt that the chronological order was wrong, and what the protagonist said did not match the time she was in. The protagonist obviously played at Ron's house since she was a child, so she should not be able to express the feeling similar to the first time she came to Ron's house. Overall, it is good.

The content is very sweet, I like it very much.

Can the author write a side story or something? 

It's pretty good. Sri Lanka doesn't have a lot of OOC. I think that's how it should be. He's not gloomy all the time... (There are a lot of private things, but it's not very complicated, recommended!)

It's very nice and pretty. I like Sri Lankan teachings that are so humane.

It's nice to watch, but it's still a bit regretful. The deaths of Lupine and Tonks, but I believe it's a good one, and Sijiao and the Twins are both fine.

The author's writing is good, but I think the private settings may have been changed too much (it only represents my personal opinion)

Why are there so few people watching?

Well, okay, finally segmented

Pretty good short story

Woooooooooooooo~ It's so beautiful~ It's very cruel at the back, so bring your own napkins. Five-star praise! Take a look at it with confidence. This book assumes that Luna and Draco are brother and sister, and Alice replaces the original Harry. There are some small bugs, but they don't affect reading at all! Straight into the pit!

Although I didn't watch it for a few minutes, I read it quickly and simply skipped it. It was so beautiful that I decided to watch it again carefully.

The author meets again

This book can be recommended. Alice was raised by the Sect, and was cured by the Sect as she grew up. Lucius shocked me in the middle, and I almost thought Luna was going to fall there. Nicholas should be an old reformer, and his resurrection is almost the same as the capture of Hogwarts. The whole article doesn't look like a fanfic, but more like a novel with the same structure as HP.

A perfect book [Like] [Like]

I'm a little confused, is it Alice who replaced him, or is Potter also replaced?

A very good book, recommended

It looked so good, I was so infected that I almost cried (≧ω≦)