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Personally, I think it's better than most Harry Potter fanfics, but it's a bit unpopular. Another drawback is that each chapter has no title, which makes me afraid to skip reading for fear of skipping the exciting parts, but overall it's still very good.

Nice! This is my first HP fanfic in my life, and I am very satisfied with it [heartfelt]. Who wouldn't love the third-generation Dark Lord Harry who wants to burn Voldemort with fire? Dear author, why are there no sixth and seventh graders? [I'm about to cry] [Crying] There are so few, I still want to read their stories

This is the first HP I read on Tomato. I was quite surprised when I first saw it. I didn't expect that Tomato also has Harry Potter fan fiction. I'm very glad that I saw this kind of high-quality article for the first time. After that, I searched for many HPs, but in the end this was the only one left on my bookshelf. It completely checked my appetite, the characters are not OOC, the logic is online, the protagonist is strong but not exaggerated, and the emotional line runs through well (I like all CPs). What I like most is that the story still revolves around Harry and the others, instead of the protagonist being the only one like other novels. And I don't belittle any character (I'm talking about the comment section, some books will say that Ron is not worthy of Hermione, Dumbledore conspiracy theory, etc.) Especially Hermione, she is finally not a nymphomaniac (some novels will write the protagonist to be very handsome, and then Hermione will blush... I don't mean to criticize, but I personally don't like this setting) My favorite extra, hope to update soon [Blow kiss]

Starting from the third part, it feels like Harry has experienced more alone than as a trio. This is growth. Fan fiction is like making up for regrets. Little Harry is no longer lonely. He has many friends. He is no longer "Potter's stinking turd" but "Potter's youngest warrior" He was accompanied by the Big Four as a child, had many friends as a teenager, and had Malfoy as an adult. He was no longer alone, and even when something happened, he had to tell many, many people. I especially like the Snake Ancestors (I'm touched by my CP). In this book, they seem to really exist, and there is no difference or miss. The daily writing of the Big Four is pretty good, and it gave me a sense of trance at the end. I often read a novel with emotion, word for word, and apart from a few masterpieces, this one is the most emotional one. This is the charm of long-form group portraits. Each person is portrayed with flesh and blood, and there are so many characters that I seem to be familiar with them.

It's so beautiful and interesting. I almost laughed like crazy in the first few chapters. I suggest that there be less original plot and more interaction between the four little animals. It's so unpopular. It's a pity.

It's better looking than many HP fics. It feels like reading the original work. It has the style of the original work. It looks very comfortable and not mindless. The CP is quite normal and easy to understand (some CPs are really evil...). I feel like the author really likes HP! But it feels like it's reducing Harry's burden. The Big Four are so awesome that Lao Fook didn't get anything done, which makes up for the sadness and pain I feel about the original work (after all, the original work didn't even leave me a bird...). Really pretty, highly recommended! ! !

It's very, very good-looking. It covers almost all the HP CPs I've tried. I've also tried it many times on another device, but it's been taken off the shelf. Fortunately, I still have it on my bookshelf, but I can't promote it [Petrochemical]

That is to say, we respect the original plot and have made magical changes. It is very exciting. The author is very imaginative, and the small theater is also great, but there are too many characters, so the author is careful not to mix them up.

This book is truly one of my favorite books on Tomato. The author is really great. I'm so glad I discovered this book. Really well written. Maybe I have a bad taste in fan fiction related to HP. On Tomato, this is the only True Love HP I have found so far. The author is also very attentive. When writing the book, he also carefully read the original work to find the basis. For such a serious and responsible author, would you like to sleep with me? Who doesn't love it? And it really aroused my interest in reading articles as an old bookworm. Hahaha, I have stayed up late reading for two days in a row and I really can't stop. To be honest, I never thought that Godric and Salazar could be a couple. Although I didn't expect them, they really made a good match. I am extremely excited every day. Helga and Rowena are also good. Especially Deha, GGAD... Ah, my wish has come true~ It's useless to say more, really hurry up and go see it! ! ! Rush the duck! ! ! Daily reminder! ! ! Hey hey hey... Come on! ! ! Aim for 10,000 chapters a day. Believe that you are the best! ! ! (ಡωಡ) ٩( 'ω' )و

Finally experienced the crazy feeling of CP, I am so happy [admiration] CP has Godric Gryffindor x Salazar Slytherin, Helga Hufflepuff x Rowena Ravenclaw, and Deha and Rohe, GGAD! The little badger expressed that he was in a good mood and took a sip of hot tea [savour it carefully]

I am a Harry Potter fan, and I have been turned off by some mindless HP fanfics before. This book made me feel the feeling of reading Harry Potter for the first time again. This book is really super invincible, Thunderbolt style spin and beautiful (Star Eyes)

To be honest, my personal taste is rather boring and I have discarded many articles, but this book is really my White Moonlight! The emotional line is very delicate, and the plot line is also very interesting, especially the several private characters (disciples of the Big Four and ancestors of various families from thousands of years ago, and several time-travelers) are really good-looking! Each character is vividly created, and there are various CPs (Sarah and Gordy, Hel and Rona, Deha, GGAD...) Really satisfy my fantasy of HP! I really love it!

It's very interesting. The things between lovers are interspersed with each other, not written all at once. It feels very natural. It's somewhat different from the original work. It's very interesting. This extra chapter is very interesting. Dear author, if you write this snake haha into a book, the calories will definitely not be low (I suggest you [eat melon]) and it will probably be very high. I would like to boldly say that this book is definitely one of the best in the Harry Potter series. I personally think it is very good-looking and can be read [laughs]

There won't be any embarrassing plot, the writing is just right and it's very beautiful😋😋😋 I am a second-time user, why should I remove it? So beautiful😭😭😭

A very nice book... The writing is very good, very similar to the original work! It's the most beautiful book I've ever read, right? Why was it removed from the shelves... My book... [Crying] [crying]

Very nice! I just don't understand why the rating is so low (paralysis) The first time I read a fanfic, I felt happy throughout the book. The characters and settings of the four founders really impressed me! And the communication between the original characters and the original characters is also very good! Moreover, the original character settings such as Qian Qiao are very comfortable to watch. I don't feel comfortable seeing the original characters like other fans (because I feel that they are not from the same place or level) (It's not malicious, don't take it too seriously!) In short, it is very comfortable. It feels like they really exist in the world, and students' worries about exams and their dislike of people they don't like (?) Are very real! So can I wait until Godric and Salazar have their honeymoon someday(? What) I'm planning to watch it a second time because I read it a little too fast when I first started reading it, so I didn't fully understand the relationship between the characters. So can the author do more extras? (I'm so hungry for food.) Overall, highly recommended! So Sago is real! So why is the rating so low? I feel like there are so many good reviews in the comment section. I feel heartbroken after watching the extra episode.

This is the first HP article I have come across about the Big Four, and it is very exciting. It's for those who haven't finished it yet and want to finish it, and for those who have finished it are ready to read it. There are CPs that I'm looking forward to and CPs that I want to knock off, but I still have to praise the author for being caught off guard by the knife. The sweet parts are so sweet that they are tooth-dropping. The knife parts are really cruel to the body and mind, but they are within the range of small torture and pleasant, so it is acceptable. I hope that I can write more articles and write more high-quality articles. I only finished it in one swipe, so I am very reluctant to finish it. I am preparing for a second swipe [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

I have to say that this book is very interesting, the overall logic is good, the timeline is very clear, and the author's writing skills are also very good. It is the best one I have ever seen among HP fanfics. The following is my monologue, which has nothing to do with the book: I never thought that I could incorporate this kind of time travel, and this book really exceeded my expectations. I saw this book on a post I didn't know. I didn't have any expectations at the time. I thought it was just a mess of a book. However, I haven't read anything like this before. Based on the principle of reading it when I see it, I clicked in. I didn't expect it to be so good. I am really excited about this CP! ! ! !

It's really beautiful, and the CP is very easy to beat. I would like to rank it as the top 1 in HP (just my opinion). Highly recommended! It's not a waste to buy it📚

This novel is really beautiful. The author greatly shows us the possibility of a Harry Potter world in parallel time and space. While maintaining the image of the characters, it also makes the story interesting and fascinating! Great support! ! !

My favorite HP fanfic, bar none! It's just too unpopular. Can the author, Daqiuqiu, sing more? It's not enough!

It's very interesting. The subject matter is very novel and interesting among HP articles. It's a bit unpopular, but there are no questions that make me afraid to jump to the chapter.

No poke, no poke, no needle. Among the HP fanfics I have read, it is one of the few excellent ones that respects the original characters while also being able to derive different story directions. Highly recommended

This book can be said to be the best fanfic I have ever read. It at least has basic logic and the whole text can be connected. It is not like some fanfics that leave the protagonist with a lot of worries, nor is it like a protagonist whose setting is ridiculously strong but slowly develops the plot. Even if it is a bit inconsistent with the plot of the original work, it is still within the understandable range; it is not deliberately to beautify the characters and the incest (the original book and the movie are different, even though their stories are the same); this book is not like another book that imposes the highlight moments of the original protagonist group on the protagonist of the fanfic in order to highlight the power of the protagonist. Of course, the most important thing is that someone finally wrote about the influence of some strange fan fiction. Sometimes I really don't understand how the setting they added came about, and it is especially easy to mislead those who have not read the original work. Overall, I like the original party very much.

It impeccably realized my fantasy of Hogwarts and the wizarding world, depicting a different "Harry Potter" with novel themes. We can feel the same sense of family, friendship (and... Love?) We felt when we first read Harry Potter. The author's writing style is really almost inherited from the original work. One of the best books among Harry Potter fans. The four founders have all been written as being somewhat intellectually depraved. In fact, when he first thought about why Voldemort did not die, he did not think of the possibility of Horcruxes. He did not even think of this possibility. Secondly, when chasing the basilisk in the second grade, did you ever think about using tracking magic or divination, etc. In a series, you really had to have the four founders and a time traveler (I don't know why she was added as a character) to battle wits and courage, which made people speechless. In addition, the order of basilisk attacks is also different. . . The plot of First Grade is so well written, why do you want to change the light-hearted tone of the work? The writing makes people doubt the ability of the founder. There are some differences from the original work. The most outrageous! ! ! Even Slytherin suspected that the notebook was related to Yule, but he didn't use Legilimency? ? ? ! ! ! This is too intellectual.

I love it so much. Sarah and Gordy are so cute, and Hel and Lorna are so sweet. Both the main CP and deputy CP love it. I just saw that now I still can't tell the difference between attack and shou [thinking] is it a lion-snake or a snake-lion?

This book is simply the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever read. All the regrets in the original book have been basically made up for in this fanfic. I really love this book so much. I want to say that there are hundreds of millions of knives in the end, but it's harmless, knives are healthier (crying)

I swear this is the best HP fanfic I've ever read so far! (I don't accept refutation) I still remember that I gave up halfway through reading it a long time ago (because I couldn't stand the two male protagonists [face covering]). Then I read all kinds of strange books and my ability to accept this kind of thing seemed a little stronger (?) So I read it again, and I have to say that I am really happy that I made this decision! It's really beautiful, but I always feel that Voldemort's death was so hasty... () It ended before I could react [facepalm] [facepalm] and the extra plot of Heiha really made me cry for a long time, but I have to accept the ending (you have to accept it if you don't accept it). Finally, I love eagles, phoenixes, owls, and all other birds!

It's really super nice [Admiration] This is the first time I saw a book in Tomato that made me so satisfied. The content is rigorous and some parts are exactly the same as the original. I really love it [Blow kiss]

Nice! Recommended to re-list!