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It's okay. The most important thing you can see is that the author is a Yuan Dan girl. Although the protagonist and Watari are both men, I understand that there are many like this in the world. I hope the author can continue to write well! ! !

Men and men...... Don't dare to think about it, don't dare to think about it

I support the author greatly and hope that the author will continue writing. A big message for the author: "No matter what time, look ahead, and you will be invincible if you are full of hope." ——Wu Zhe I hope the author will not abandon the article, care about the world's view of love, and keep writing.

It's great, I like it, double male protagonist yyds

It is not easy for the author to write. I give five stars, but it is not because of how good the content is. Here are the reasons. I hope the author takes a good look at it. First of all, you write Danmei, there is no problem. I am also a rotten girl [laughs evilly], but let's not write the protagonist too similar... I know you want to highlight the setting of his acceptance, but you have written him to be completely girly. Even if a boy accepts the setting of his acceptance, he will not admit it, because boys are more self-respecting. If I didn't know that the protagonist is a boy early on, I would have thought he was a woman, so mentally seeing him like this is... Very speechless, you know? Author! The first point, from the perspective of Pokémon, my idea is that the protagonist's first Pokémon should be as handsome as the Riolu evolved Lucario. If the author likes cuteness, Super Meowth is also good. If the author likes Eevee, I suggest giving a white Eevee later. , The kind that seems to be the experimental body of Team Rocket, the kind that can evolve in multiple ways, evolve and degenerate. Secondly, from the perspective of the protagonist's character, the author can make him a little more arrogant. In this case, the later transfer will arouse his interest. Who wouldn't want the CP of that kind of enemy? (Don't comment on your personal opinions. If it doesn't work, just change the character of the protagonist ≥≤)

Nice! Come on, author!

That is, um, have you ever thought about it, the author is not from this platform at all, so your evaluations and comments will not be seen at all, and 🍅 will not be so kind as to publish the author's modified version.

First of all, this is a novel with two male protagonists. Secondly, it is a story about time-traveling Pokémon. Then, stop complaining, the author is very speechless! Finally, I wish everyone a happy reading! ^_^

I love it (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ. No matter what others think, I will give it five stars anyway! ! ! It totally suits my taste, and I haven't seen this kind of article for a long timeヾ(●´∇｀●)ﾉ

It looks good, I hope the author doesn't mess up the story

As far as the content is concerned, the five stars should definitely be about the same. For men and women, I just thought of the protagonist as a woman and let it go, but wouldn't the people around me stop it a little bit? I immediately agreed!

The main character is male, his cp is Du, watch it if you can

Azhe, I always feel like I missed something about how the male protagonist and the Flying King got together.

Hmm,,, the writing is quite good, but unfortunately I can't understand Nannan [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

Good looking good looking good looking

Author, come on^ω^. Although there are some mistakes, this is the ideal type that I have always wanted to see but could not find~

This is okay. There is also a book next door called Men and Men.

I have a little question, is the protagonist male or female? The author saw it, could you please give me an answer?

Don't say anything and just rush! Just rush and that's it!

I love gay literature, I am 0

Very good! Ahhhhhhhh! It's so sweet, my family, even though I'm being blunt, it's really sweet! There is a child! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] ][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] ][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Love Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Love Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][ Adore][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][ Adore][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][ Adore][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]!

Big cheers for the author

Although the emotional line is weird, it is very easy to work on. Come on, come on! Love you so much, Da.

Is the protagonist female or male?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, suits my taste⊙▽⊙

I love you so much😘The two male protagonists are so loved❤️

The content of this book can be said to be very exciting, and the friendship between the protagonist and his Pokémon also moved me very much. I think this should be the best Pokémon movie I have ever read, bar none.

I want to know if the main character is male or female

A pretty good simple novel (￣∀￣)