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The technique is humorous, the characters are a breath of fresh air in the world of intrigue and deception, the logic is clear, the story transitions naturally, the growth is reasonable, and the fighting process is fierce and fast. It is one of my favorite books

The rating is underestimated and looks better than many 9-pointers. As a book about cultivating immortals, it describes the world of cultivating immortals in more detail, including elixirs, magic weapons, formations, talismans, spiritual beasts, and so on. It is a hundred times better than those who have the name of cultivating immortals, but are completely filled with grudges, resentments, family hatred, love and love. The story is good. When you read the book on cultivating immortals, you will see spells, magic weapons, spiritual beasts and insects, and formations and talismans. This book has good performance on spiritual beasts, spells, and formation pills. But it feels like it's not detailed enough. Currently, I feel that the entanglement between the two female cultivators and the protagonist is a bit too much. Personally, I feel that the relationship is not born out of "you save me and I save you." This emotional scene feels too far-fetched. There is no mutual attraction between men and women. It is born out of the entanglement of "you save me and I save you." Moreover, the protagonist does not have the same feelings for Lu Yufan and Qing Si that men have for women, but it is far-fetched because of Lu Yufan's rescue. There is a feeling of being forced to like it. Only a few hundred chapters later did I realize it was also a love triangle, so I gave up.

It's well written, and the plot and writing are all top-notch, so I'll keep up the good work!

This book is so well written! The author has read many mystery novels, most of which are about brothers fighting among themselves and killing each other. This book is unique and written with love and justice. I give you a thumbs up! I hope you will contribute to fantasy novels and write better works to satisfy readers! Thanks.

A very good article about cultivating immortals. The only shortcoming is that you can't stop reading it and it's easy to make mistakes.

The protagonist has an online IQ. Although he has great luck, he also has his own perseverance, decisiveness in killing, kindness and righteousness, cunning and friendship, full flesh and blood, and successful characterization. In particular, the author has a very sophisticated grasp of the characters and plots. The solid language skills in this book are another big help. Looking at the whole book, except for some text errors in some places, it is difficult to conceal the potential of this book's writing to rival that of Mr. Jin Yong! To be honest, a score of 9.8 Is too low. I don't know why the actual score is so low. This shows that when reading novels on Tomato Novels, the score does not represent the quality of the book!

I have read more than 60 chapters so far. It is very well written. Why is the rating so low? It seems to be very suitable for old bookworms. Cheers, author!

This book is wonderfully written, I like it

I read 675 chapters in one go. It's a pretty good novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update soon.

I have been reading Cultivation Literature for many years, and this book is refreshing, witty, and has exciting fighting skills. It is not as cold-blooded and ruthless as other Cultivation Literature. It is a good book...

The style of this book belongs to the old-school martial arts style, with love between children and grievances. It is different from simple refreshing articles and complex ancient style articles. It is slow-burning and makes people anxious. It is impossible to read without patience. This article is a bit like Zhu Xian. The emotional portrayal is complete and the structural framework is relatively cautious. However, some details are not in place and a bit out of touch. But overall it is good. I hope the author will not finish the book and update it as soon as possible.

It's exciting and full of surprises. A rare good book, enjoyable! Occasionally there is a little humor that makes people laugh! The emotional line is a little thin, and the protagonist is devoted to the truth. Although it is admirable, as readers, we feel that there is something left in the ointment! There is no greater good in the nature of food and sex!

There are no forced drama routines like other immortal works. Everything is explained in a logical and reasonable manner, and the plot has no abrupt and illogical feeling! There are no gorgeous words deliberately arranged to highlight one's literary skills, but one's skills can be seen in ordinary places! The characterization is also good, and the words and deeds of each person of different ages are also very suitable! It is a rare and good work!

It's very similar to Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and I personally think it's very good!

It's pretty, feels pretty good, and the writing is pretty good.

The writing is not in a hurry and unfolds slowly. The writing is delicate and beautiful!

This book not only writes the story of the ups and downs of a mortal becoming an immortal, but also the journey of seeking the Tao with great concentration, facing numerous difficulties and dangers, and opening the sky with one sword. The book is a good book, the person is a good person, and the story is a good story. It is indeed the best cultivation novel this year.

The writing is quite good and worth reading. Before the foundation-building period, the protagonist was a bit naive and wrote long and verbose sentences. After forming the elixir, you will know how dangerous society is! The realm is also pushed forward. The villain is always at a higher level than the protagonist, and is the kind that is always difficult to kill.

This book is very well written, and as a discerning old bookworm, it attracted me to keep reading. It's just that the updates are too few and too slow, and it's too hard to follow them.

The writing is pretty good, but it doesn't have any attractive features. In fact, adding more routines that can't be given up would be more attractive.

This rare good novel is indeed worth reading. It describes the true beauty of human nature very well! The indomitable fighting spirit of constantly striving for self-improvement and changing fate against the odds is very well described. Of course, it is not ruled out that other readers may have other opinions.

It's my favorite type, traditional cultivation! I have been reading novels for 30 years, starting with martial arts novels, and now it is difficult to find one that I can read completely. I've read over a hundred chapters, and I feel like I can continue reading. After reading more than 400 chapters, I couldn't hold on anymore. The pace was too slow. It's almost halfway through, only the middle stage of foundation building... Exchange books

The writing is quite good, with countless writings, but the writing is a bit weak on the emotions and the protagonist. Even though he is a Nascent Soul, he is still afraid of this and that every day, and he is a good person. But it's still quite engaging, and it describes the hypocrisy of the righteous way very well.

The language is fluent. It's been a long time since I've read a book like this that didn't make me tired at all. Thank you, author!

The structure is reasonable, and the skills, opportunities, psychology, and emotions are well written. Like it 👍

Very pretty! The story is wonderful, the logic is smooth, and the characters are distinct. Until more than 400 chapters, the views on love and right and wrong are very correct! Except for a few chapters where the male protagonist seemed a bit like a virgin, he was very decisive later on! Anyway, I like it very much and must give it a five-star rating! I hope the author can write more excellent works! Anyway, in my opinion, it is much better than those so-called masters! Potatoes, Chen Dong, and tomatoes are not as good as this author's writing!

It's a very good book. I feel like it's underrated. I highly recommend it.

Well written, much better than those scammers

The writing is good and beautiful, but the ending is a little rushed.

Not a cool article! But I think it's very good! ! Finished reading it in one sitting! ! Update soon! ! [Like][Like][Like][Like]