Heavy Punishment************

Four stars, why? Why did the second half end so wonderfully? ? ? Overall it's pretty good, but it's a bit quick to finish. If there was a long side story, the score would definitely go up ( ☞ ͡ ° ͜ ʖ ͡ ° ) ☞

1——Through enriching the character's language and actions, the character's ideological quality is brought out. The imagination of the article is reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent. 2——Reflect meaningful philosophy through reasonable imagination. The writing is smooth and concise, giving full play to my imagination. It is a good article. It is elegant, graceful, smooth and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous, and the use of some exquisite words virtually adds a lot of interest to the article. (Personal Tomato praise template. The book is beautiful and the comments are lazy to write~(^▽^)~

Whether the story is good or bad, it just suits my taste. This story suits my taste very well. It seizes the most important time and growth point to tell the story. The plot is not procrastinating or wordy. The heroine is innocent and not a virgin, and the ending is a bit rushed.

Well, the article is clearly organized and vividly demonstrates the author's father's talent and his daughter's cleverness and cuteness. The content of the article is logically clear and consistent with most of the relevant life. It is a very good article. The novel uses large and small details and vivid rhetorical impressions, which made me deeply aware of the warmth and warmth of life. This is a very good article and a very good novel, full marks. The anchor's speech was also very interesting and very enjoyable.

I cried several times in this book. The writing is really good, especially the scene where Zhizhi attended her younger brother's birthday and recognized her aunt as her mother. It moved me to tears. I have listened to this book twice.

Perfect! Very interesting

It sounds so good, I want to laugh when I hear it

The plot of the story is good, but it's overly descriptive. It's okay to read the novel, but it's a bit boring to listen to the novel.

Very good book, excellent anchor [like]

A very nice book

A super nice book

Very warm and beautiful

A great book, very touching

Very nice. I like it very much.

It sounds so good that I can't stop listening to it, I recommend it.

It's so beautiful. The score is too low.

Before each segment is finished, it switches to the next segment.

It looks good, but I don't know who Zhizhi will be with in the future, so I'm looking forward to it [laughs]

To be honest, my ears are a little tired after listening to books for several years, but this book is really good, and it is very relaxing for people to keep reading [Like][Like][Like]

The focus is on the character Zhou Mu, but his appearance was described as quite handsome at the beginning, but later on he was always said to have small eyes and a big nose, and it was a pity that he was not arranged for a marriage in the ending.

A cool article with clear logic and a rigorous story structure. It was a relaxing and enjoyable read. Very good. The score should be above 9.6 To be reasonable

A very interesting novel. The adoptive father and grandfather raise a girl who is rich. She has high qualities, is self-reliant and capable. The story is compact and not procrastinating. It is wonderful.

I have to give it a 5 points. I've read Chapter 80. It's real, funny, and fast-paced. I'm addicted as soon as I listen to it [laughs]

After reading the mindless book Cultivation to Immortality, suddenly there is a book like this that feels very, very, very good, very novel [like][like][like]

I have to say that as a person who likes fantasy and immortality, I actually like to watch this kind of book, and I became hooked after reading only one chapter.

It's very interesting to read and listen to. It's a rare good book.

I just listened to a chapter and I think the content is good and very life-oriented. The language is humorous and the content of the story slowly unfolds, making people want to put it down. I hope you don't disappoint later!

Recommend one. A very heartwarming drama

No Space is very good. If you are short on books, you can read it. I like all the characters and the protagonist. It is a book without ink.

It looks great, my adoptive father and grandpa are both very nice, and so are those friends! !