Dayan**

Wonderful, very wonderful. The plot is awesome!

The story has exciting twists and turns and is worth recommending

It's so beautiful, why is there no one?

Grandpa Luo Bai is very domineering and dotes on his only grandson. But, old man, don't you know that being too pampering will only destroy him? Fortunately, our brother Bing traveled through time and space to replace him, otherwise your Lin family would really be in ruins!

Good guy, the ancient sky-swallowing beast is actually a little piglet. This image has nothing to do with the beast from the ancient times! However, although this arrogant tone is a bit damaging, it is still a bit domineering!

The willpower of a soldier is really strong. Although Uncle Lin Wu has been disabled for many years, he still retains the temperament that a soldier should have. Now that he heard from his nephew that he could stand up again and even regain his strength, he was even more excited.

Well written, worth recommending, high marks

Not bad, very good-looking, come on

It's not good enough to watch. I love the male protagonist so much. He's really awesome, okay. Waiting for the follow-up

I can only say that it is very good-looking. The plot is compact. I am very excited to watch it. It looks good. Do you like it?

Good Very good very good

I couldn't put it down. I read it until midnight.

Very nice, exciting and not verbose

Interesting! Well written! Come on💪

I haven't seen such a comfortable book in a long time. Although some parts are not very clear, the overall feeling is still very comfortable. The ups and downs, the company of beautiful women, and the promotion of martial arts are all worth reading.

The writing is very good, humorous and worth reading.

Is there anyone who thinks this book has such a low score? In fact, this book is quite good! ! Come on, author! !

The early stage is very interesting, and the quality of the game between the protagonist and Hua Qianyu and other characters is really rare. It's relatively inferior in the middle and late stages. It's not a big problem, but it's not as exciting as the early stage. It's really good for the author to write his first book like this

It's like revisiting a classic, right?

Super wonderful, super awesome

The writing is good, but there are some minor flaws that need to be addressed to make the novel more logically sound. For example, don't play "wall penetration" when your own abilities are still weak, and don't treat enemy masters as idiots (stalking and eavesdropping masters). It would be better to explain the function of Dahu Technique first.

This book is not bad

For Lin Tianji, it was unimaginable to hope that he could stand up, but now his nephew said that he could be cured. It's like surviving from a desperate situation. My nephew is well hidden.

The writing is delicate and well written. Come on, don't finish it.

It's great, it's super well written, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the writing is good and humorous.

Brother, hurry up! I'm dying Crazy reminder [punch out][punch out][punch out][punch out][punch out][punch out]

It's so well written and exciting, but I just don't know what the next step will be and I can't guess. I really hope the author can update it as soon as possible. It's so tortured that I can't stand it.

The first part is good, the layout is novel, let's see if it's a eunuch.

Lin Tianji will definitely be able to stand up in the future, and his nephew can help him heal.

Lin Luobai, the soldier's brother, traveled to Xuantian Continent and became the playboy Lin Luobai. He not only saved the Lin family but also fulfilled his family relationship. It really killed two birds with one stone.