Online Games: the Talent Is Too Strong, the Game Starts with Maintenance

It has been a month since I started the book, and I have gained a lot. When I first started writing, I only had some fragmentary thoughts, but the more I wrote, the easier it became. I also saw the comments from readers. I have changed the following about the fragmentary issues in the early stage. It should be much smoother now than before. You can give me more opinions and I will see them. 😁

How can I put it this way? I read it chapter by chapter. There was no big problem before chapter 35. The main character in Chapter 35 just showed his power in a family and even collapsed a building. Then he was stabbed unconscious by a little girl with a wooden stick for four days. This place is very poisonous! Book friends who have watched this kind of online game rebirth should all know the concept of the protagonist being delayed for four days at the beginning of the game! Although the author said that if you don't want to read the realistic chapter, you can skip it, but I didn't skip it, so I took a big hit and gave it up. If you still want to read it, I strongly recommend skipping 30 to 35 chapters. In the end, I'll just give it a five-star rating. Anyway, I spent some time watching it. Oh, it's even worse from behind! Does that little girl have some kind of superpower? She can knock someone unconscious for half a day, but it only takes four days for her to be with the protagonist? There was also a horse boy from Brother Hao who wanted to steal the girl's money, but the girl jumped into the ice cave by herself. When the protagonist went to save the girl, he kicked the horse boy into the wall. It's really a double standard! Especially what the girl stole was the protagonist's own money. At least Ma Zai has nothing to do with the protagonist. I don't know if my three views are correct. At least I know that others steal my money and others rob other people's money. I care more about the former than the former.

It's very interesting. It's hard to find a novel like this without a heroine. Come on, author.

Did the author get inspiration from Master I really didn't target him?

Chasing it every day, it looks good. Everyone has their own love for carrots and greens. If you don't like them, please don't hurt them.

It is a god-like figure that mortals cannot see and will be blinded by your light.

This book is good. Although there are sometimes some logical problems that don't make sense, the plot is well written, which adds a lot of points to this book. However, the author may not be very rigorous with the data and may not handle it very well. Overall, it's a book worth reading. It would be nice if the details could be better handled.

The protagonist kills monsters more than 5 times faster than others. Why are the levels always about the same and cannot be separated? [Thinking] It turned out to be a book about virgins licking dogs. I gave up reading it. It's just a little girl, and I gave dozens of pieces of silver equipment to the beautiful president for free. I also want to learn Ultraman to save the world. It poisoned me to death [vomit]

I like you very much if you can listen to some opinions and don't flirt with girls. Hahaha, to be honest, the person who wrote about flirting with girls in the harem in the book must be someone who has never touched a woman in real life. To be honest, I have been so weak in the kidneys these days that I don't want to sleep with my wife!

Eat slowly Read the book slowly People chase slowly Take the road slowly Although this book does not have passionate scenes and does not give people a dull feeling, not many people are willing to read it patiently. Some people leave because of dissatisfaction with the data, some leave because of the introduction, and some people are defamed because of psychological problems. To be honest, it doesn't have shocking writing style, but it can make people spend time in peace.

It's not bad, but there are a lot of regrets and holes that haven't been filled. For example, people who have interacted with the protagonist in the past will not have any scenes in the future, and some agreements with the protagonist will not have any scenes. This is a pity. In general, the rest of the story is pretty good and enjoyable, but it's not directly invincible. It belongs to the semi-invincible growth type, which is still very interesting.

The overall feeling is not bad, but the character is a bit confused. I recognize your strength and I would like to call you the strongest high school student [laughter][laughter]

Good hahahahahahahahaha I finally finished reading it. It was well written, but the ending was a little rushed.

The book is still readable, but I feel that the data is not very rigorous. After reading more than 100 chapters, I missed a few talent rewards and didn't write them down. I don't know if I didn't pay attention or the author didn't pay attention! [You taste it carefully][You taste it carefully] Already read almost 200 chapters! ! ! Here's a suggestion for the author: Why didn't you write a main character attribute table for 200 chapters? Do you still remember the protagonist's attributes? What skills does the protagonist have? [Thinking][thinking]

Generally speaking, the content is still a good one all the way through, but the logic in the middle part is not smooth, the front and back are incoherent, and a lot of holes are left unfilled. Generally speaking, it is good in Tomato. At least the general direction of the logic is OK.

Very good, but a bit wordy [Adoration][Adoration]

No one paid the author, so it ended on a cliffhanger

The author has his own ideas. I am also a player of World of Warcraft. Originally, I thought it was only 4⭐. It seems that they all like the Blood Church and it is five stars.

How many can you cheat by giving 5 stars?

When the grave rain comes, I will give Ji Lulu a chance and think about it.

This book is okay, I don't want to say anything more.

Why is it that when I think of brutal impulses, the image of holding my head in my hands, twisting my waist, and rushing forward appears in my mind? [Shock]

Very good, but a bit short. I always feel like you've offended others. Why are there so many little guys?

Reincarnation Paradise Kukulin Baiye Su Bai Dragon Slaying

Okay, I quite like it. It would be better if I could improve more attributes and skills.

It felt okay, but the ending was too fast

I suggest the author improve the data. The overall plot is pretty good.

Well, around the mid-term, it will be more like an unlimited novel in the guise of an online game, with the male protagonist progressing through various small worlds to connect the stories together.

It is indeed a good book, and the author's writing style is also very smooth. It does not look like a new author. I suggest the author change the title of the book.

The content is novel, the plot is well connected, and the combat arrangement is reasonable, but the ending is a bit hasty and has a fly in the ointment.