The God of Thunder and Lightning in the Apocalypse

I see it now, even though it hasn't been long, but I still want to say a few words First of all, I really like the subject matter. I really like the IP of the apocalypse. Secondly, the author's writing style is not bad, but there are some places where attention should be paid to description, such as some foreshadowing and details. Third, pay attention to the differentiation of paragraphs. At least in the early stage, many paragraphs are piled together, which makes it a bit dry to chew. Finally, if you become popular in the future, I will be an old fan! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Keep writing, no more eunuchs, it is a rare good novel, and it is rare to be different from other apocalyptic novels. The 8-year-old bookworm said that if you keep writing like this, you will become popular.

In the first twenty chapters, there is no sentence fragmentation if you can't change it. You can listen to the book. After the next twenty chapters, sentence fragmentation is better. After the 40th chapter, it is basically a good article. The further it goes, the better it gets.

Emmn, the front is a little bland, but the back becomes more and more delicious! What makes me unhappy is that Logan died so early. Will he be resurrected? So many other scumbags have lived for so many episodes. On the whole, it is very true. Damn it, the author must be unambiguous. . . It's quite fun to watch! BIU~~~ will always follow the author and look forward to the new book! 🤓🤓🤓🤓

Very good, showing humanity to the fullest

Very well written, I like it

Not great, but wonderful

I was persuaded by the author to come back and read the follow-up. It turned out that I couldn't continue reading. After looking at it, I couldn't give it another star. (After all, the author said that I was the first one-star monster to be embarrassed)

I quite like the style and the rhythm is good

The new chapter actually calls Gu Xue pregnant. ( 'ﾛ')!!!

Who would have thought that I came back to read the second book [laughing][laughing]