Pirates: When the Great Swordsman Obtains the Thunder Fruit

This book is also called "The God-level Life Player among Pirates". If readers think it is well written, please remember to give it a five-star rating!

The book is okay, but the author updates it too slowly, so it's not enough to read.

It is recommended that after the author has finished writing one or more chapters, he should bother to read it again. This way, he can avoid typos, evaluate the quality of his novel, make it easier to incorporate the plot, and make it easier to think about how to write later (the above is everyone's opinion)

This is the first time I read this type of pirate novel. It's good. I think it's quite interesting.

It's really exciting, and the main character Wayne is so handsome. Big cheers for the author! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]

In the early stage, the author's description of his strength was a bit inferior to his strength in the battle, but overall it was pretty good. There were more points given out before.

After Im was captured, the book ended. It would be better to just kill him and end the book. The rest of the story will just continue. Except for the messy ending that really dropped the score, the book is not bad, and fan fiction cannot be so rigorous. Worth a look

If you want to write about summer, you can't just write about summer. You have to write about the girls who wrote furiously when they saw "Where is the way out for Li Chao and others" in the examination room? You have to write about the raised bachelor's hats and the red and swollen mosquito bags on the island, about the ripe red bayberry in the continuous rain, about the small tomatoes in the high temperature once in fifty years, about the unknown, about separation, about encounter, about the warmth and grandeur.

The author hopes that when you read the comments, you can change the fruit into a fantasy beast type, just like Luffy's Nika fruit, because the fantasy beast type is higher in the line, and the natural type is still not enough. I hope the heroine will have Yamato in the future.

All I can say is that it didn't reach 9 and now it's not even 8. There's a reason.

Why don't the author give me five stars?

Congratulations, young man, I congratulate you. As a person who has been here, I have come here, but I still want to give you a few words of advice. Remember, no matter what you remember, just remember that the greater your ability, the greater your ability. Have you been feeling like you don't know what's going on recently? If you always feel that you don't know what's going on, then you have to spend some time to understand it. Once you understand it, you will know it. You must be firm in your heart, and you must act, unless you can't. Let me tell you the truth, the salt I eat is saltier than the rice you eat. I saw this passage from an expert. What an expert says is professional, so I share it with you. After listening to it, I felt as if I had heard it.

In the middle and later stages of the war, the plot collapsed a bit, and the timeline was too tight. At this time, the protagonist's strength felt infinitely expanded. But the previous plots are all very interesting, and the author is very capable.

I just read this book and the setting is a bit interesting. But I would like to give you a small suggestion. Since you are a star in the world of pirates, you might as well write literary and artistic works that are more in line with the temperament of the world, and may be more in line with the aesthetics of that world... Choose Mr. Ren Xianqi for singing (sad Pacific 😂 I can't die in the sea, outlaws, or in the name of my father), and write literary works about gangster godfathers, etc. It feels more reasonable to become popular in the world of pirates [laughs]

This book is one of the best among the pirate fics I have read.

To be honest, this is the best book I have read among Pirates. I am currently following two Pirates books, but I feel that this one is more to my liking. I really don't think I would be interested in someone who has top-notch skills but works as a nanny for Luffy. This book by the author is very good. I will add it to my bookshelf for a while. It is too little. I found it last night and finished it today. Come on, author💪

Very nice, keep up the good work, author!

It's quite nice. A lot of things are explained clearly and they won't be blurred out in one stroke. However, one thing I don't like very much is that what Ace wanted to do was too delayed [face covering] Maybe it's because of the plot. Come on, author [laughing]

It's a very good book. It's written in a humorous and invincible way, and the setting is also very good. I suspect that Robin and the fruit-powered users are the heroines, but I haven't seen the end and I don't know yet.

The hero's pursuit of freedom and protection of his companions are well portrayed, and his actions are also very logical. In my opinion, everyone in One Piece has their own dreams, and some people slowly forget them at sea. Many fan fictions about One Piece try hard to show the strength of the male protagonist, and they are simply unreadable.

It's just that Momonosuke didn't die, but everything else is fine.

About the fact that I accidentally found out that I am actually a fan of the palace and the number one

It looks good, but before I put it on, I felt a bit uncomfortable behind it.

No more good things to say. Support it.

These 5 stars are worth the price

Personally, I feel that the back part of Im is not interesting, but the front part is okay.

The author is great and will add more updates. Don't be lazy! My youth has no regrets, shit yellow button, turn on! ! !

This is a standard five-star review.

Five-star praise, keep up the good work, the author, this book is super good.

The beginning is very comfortable to read, very exciting