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The power system has not collapsed, and the gap between levels is easy to understand. Although the protagonist is strong, it is within a reasonable range. Moreover, the level experience of the protagonist after turning into a snow elf is a hundred times more than the normal level, which is too poisonous (although I want to see more snow elf forms hehe). Five stars are given, and additional updates are really few.

Very nice! The author's writing style makes me laugh as always, haha, the plot rhythm is also appropriate, and it doesn't drag at all. Especially when submitting to the panel, the author always saves what he can. There is no element of "water", which is just a bit lacking! Update soon! I'm chasing you! Refresh the reading time. The pit of salted fish is too deep. Every point of your feelings can be studied in depth [almost crying]

I started watching Jin Yu and Jin tide when they reunited. At first, I thought it was a pure sisterly love, but Nani? Orthopedics? So I got even more excited, hehe Also, the author is a big fan of eunuchs. I will accept it even if it sucks.

It is one of my most beautiful alien books, but no human wants the homework to be more exciting.

It's really beautiful, five stars.

High-quality transformation writing, currently in a cute style, looking forward to the follow-up

It's a great story, I won't say much else. I just want to say don't blame Lanruo, the little Tanzhi, for stealing spiritual power (the author's foreshadowing). She is the warmest and most considerate [shy] (but a bit arrogant)

Nice. Different world, time travel, saving the world, female transformation, system, dual heroines. This book is novel and diverse. No brainers. Good writing. The plot is smooth and not confusing. The character's emotions and actions are well designed. The New Year's chapter is in reverse order. But The chapters are a bit fast, but not too slow. I just wish the pace was slower, otherwise I wouldn't be able to write more chapters. Author, I hope you can work hard! Author, I hope you will adopt these opinions. I fully support and recommend this book. By the way, add more details to make the book more interesting.

It took me three hours to read the current content carefully, and I feel that it is pretty good. The suspense points are pretty good. The content is not exquisite, but it is worth looking forward to. It is very good for a novice author to do this. The character of the protagonist matches her sister's character very well, a bit like my nephew and niece. Well, in short, it is very good.

Personally, it looks pretty good

It feels very good-looking, not bad (≧∇≦*). Supported by author yyds(´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

The writing is delicate and coherent. The abbreviation of the abbreviation is not hydrological. Lots of updates. The world view is novel and the strength setting is unique. The heroine's psychological image is very skillfully portrayed, and her transitions when her personality changes are natural. (I can't edit anymore [make faces][make faces][make faces]) Five stars is enough, it's not a loss if you get into the trap [Code]

On the periphery of the city is the endless starry sky, above the starry sky is the endless watch, and in the watch is God's looking back. Every rule of life is the law controlled by a god. It is very well written. No matter how many lives we are apart, if the family love continues and the longing is still there, we will definitely reunite. The author's writing style is very good and very immersive. Unlike others, I don't feel anything when reading the book. Once I get involved when listening to the book, I feel that the plot is very awkward. The author's details and the rhythm are moderate. I will continue to follow it.

You know, the author sister is great! And the writing is also very good.

First time writing, five-star review.

How should I put it? The article is well written and the author has a lot of imagination. It can be seen that he has put a lot of effort into it. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the article, but there are almost all explanations. As long as it is not unfinished, this book can definitely stand out on Tomato. However, with the current prevalence of fast culture, some readers cannot understand the foreshadowing of Hengsheng, but this cannot be said to be the failure of the article. I think the bad thing is that the character creation may be a bit too strong. How can I put it, the protagonist is a bit too stupid and can't understand the timing. I hope the author can give the protagonist a chance to grow. Secondly, the sister's character creation has been successful and failed (personal point of view). The success is that her character and his experience have successfully entered the reader's field of vision, but Personally, I think the flaw lies here, too, when paired with the protagonist. First of all, the emotional line between her and the protagonist, I think it is a bit stretched (I don't understand the line where she meets her sister). Of course, it may be that I started to make judgments before I saw the experience of the sister later, but that part of the content may really dissuade some readers. Maybe it's just a different point of view. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers. These may also be the highlights of this book. Of course, putting all these aside, this book is a really good book. If you are not afraid of being knifed, this book is definitely worth owning. (I felt numb after hearing that there was some serious content in the back, because I don't like this kind of content very much, but it lived up to the author's efforts and the masterpiece of the article, so I left a five-star review and left quietly. It's a pity, after all, such good books are rare.)

I read more than 100 chapters, and I can see that the author wants to depict a very grand world view. I hope to show the protagonist's love (friendship, family affection) and desire to explore the origin and unknown of the world. I think the selection of materials and starting point are very good. But I feel that the underlying worldview is not strong enough, and the story is told very well, but the narrative is not detailed enough. It tells the story clearly while sticking to some basic information, so some people may find it confusing and contradictory to the worldview. It can also be seen that the main story has always been about finding and rescuing my sister (repeatedly) without too much foreshadowing, which gave me the illusion that this planet with a diameter of one light year has no other place except the Far North and Yancheng. However, it can also be seen that the author is writing very seriously. Finally, I hope you can write a work that you are satisfied with! At the same time as the eighth paragraph, add no ps: This is my first time writing such a long book review. There may be some errors and unclear expressions, so please forgive me.

I hope this comment can help friends in the future. This book is still very good. It is a book that requires readers to be patient and careful. This type of book is rare nowadays. Don't be misled by the name of this book into thinking that it is an original divine novel. The overall world view of the work is quite rich, and you can feel the author's thought in it.

It's astringent and mild, with both sharpness and sugar. It won't make people feel too uncomfortable or embarrassed. But why forcefully bring the brothers and sisters who live a happy life? One of them is not dead, the other is not worried about survival, and the three parents are here. There is no reason to ignore their own life and death to save a world that has nothing to do with them. The so-called will not blame them when they go back. When they first came, they had no strength. When they have strength, they will always have fetters and responsibilities (personally think it is a poisonous point)

It's very interesting. The author worked hard. Come on.

It's good, but the front part is a little childish, but the overall plot in the back is not bad, but I still want to say that the deaths of some characters in the plot are a bit harsh, and it feels like dying for the sake of dying.

The fried chicken is beautiful and interesting. The author gave me a great reply.

Not bad, very appetizing. Come on, author! !

Very good, full of laughter, I like it!

After reading it for a while, let me write a book review. The author's writing is good, and there are no big holes in the plot. In terms of plot, it's true that the introduction is labeled "Sugar Knife", which contains a lot of sugar, but the subsequent plot made me deeply feel the power of the knife tablet press. The human camp once made me want to say hello deeply. Write this first All in all, it's pretty good.

It's a wonderful story. Both Jin Yu and Jin Xi, as well as the author himself, are still fighting and pursuing beauty after seeing the true face of the world. This book may not be so perfect, but at least it left me with a lot of touching and comfort. I hope the author has a happy life.

It's very good, the writing is very good, the content is very attractive to me, and it left a deep impression on me. The last time I read it was more than a year ago, but even now I can still clearly recall the images I had at that time. Come on

Let's just say, I really like it. Not to mention whether the novel is rigorous or not, it is easy to read and there is nothing uncomfortable about it. And I like the characters written by the protagonist very much. Orange has great momentum (^~^)

Very wonderful book. Here I hope that the fish in the North Sea can be wrapped in happiness in the future life, do what you like best, and live the life you like. Suffering will not leave traces on you, and what you wish for will eventually be accomplished. Come on! !

The protagonist in this book becomes an ice element, which is countless times better than other books in which the protagonist becomes an ice element. It is definitely the best in the ice element field.