Online Game: A Modifier from the Start

Give yourself a five-star review~ Respect to myself for the explosive update~hhh

There are shadows of a super mechanic, but it is also really good-looking. It has its own ideas and settings! The world view is very grand. I hope the author can control the pace and write a more exciting story! Come on!!!

The author must have read "Super Mechanic", because the setting and background are the same as the Star Sea in "Super Mechanic", which is a very grand world view. I have been looking for a novel like this since I saw "Super Mechanic", and now I finally found it.

I have to say that this book is one of the better online game novels I have read. The author has a great imagination and the plot is step-by-step without any abruptness. The integration of the game and reality is also very smooth. It also has a great world view and the combat power is not broken, but the protagonist is a little too open-minded 🤦

It's quite interesting, but there are too many female characters. I can count the male characters on one hand now, and they are all just supporting characters. All the characters summoned are female characters. In the first 100 chapters, more than ten harems have been opened. . . . Well

I'm really impressed by the two organizations, self-directed and self-acted. Everything else is good. Come on, author, I hope the writing gets better and better. (Also: since it is linked to reality, the protagonist's own strength should be stronger. No matter how strong the summoned object is, it is still an external force after all)

The data and settings are very rigorous; the plot is also good, and I haven't found any bad points. I can finally read the book with my brain! (Ps: The only drawback is probably that it requires not only brains, but also a little bit of lack of themòᆺó)

Personally, I feel that the only toxic point is the Japanese style. Whether it is the names of various characters and items, or the logical way and elements of the characters' speech, they are all full of Japanese comic style. . . . . . The setting was well received.

The sentence "The storm is about to come and the wind fills the building" completely captured me. This simple poem perfectly matched the previously constructed story scene. It had a strong sense of substitution and the sense of picture instantly filled my brain. The sense of reality that was separated from the novel, as if it was happening in front of my eyes. I was immersed in it. When I saw this, I seemed to be following the main scene. I can feel the strong wind blowing all over my body. The coolness and moisture before it rains penetrate the text and pull me to the protagonist. I have to say that the writing is really good. Very few online game series can be written like this. The storyline is so intertwined that I can't bear to skip a chapter and read back. I really like the author's technique.

Four star masterpiece. The writing is good, and it is a book with great potential. The content of the work is rich and the background structure is grand. It will definitely be worthwhile to read it. Points were deducted for the first few realistic chapters, but it got much better later on. Note: My book review scoring system is very strict, please see my review for details. Star recommendations are as follows One star: Don't watch it just to avoid making you sick Two stars: I can barely read it, but I won't lose anything if I abandon the book. Samsung: You can read it, but there are not too many mistakes. You can make up your own mind and it is considered a good book. Four stars: good-looking, although there are some shortcomings, but nothing serious Five stars: Don't worry about it, it's a loss if you don't watch it