Demon Immortal Slayer

Children play house. The tricks are full of loopholes and the behavior is childish

Apart from anything else, new > old, this point must be praised. I don't understand the reason why the older the fantasy, the more outdated it is. Has the era gone backwards?

That's right without ratings! A demonic cultivator is still struggling when fighting an enemy.

It's not interesting to read, it feels like the word count is too small, not exciting, and bland.

Rubbish. . . .

No wonder there is no rating. The protagonist has so many golden fingers and is so rubbish. It's too slow to advance.

Some typos, others are fine

The traces of imitation were too heavy, and I blindly pretended to be sexy. As a result, I was slapped in the face, hard...

Good, good, good