Mystery*******

Come on, at least keep at it

My evaluation is that it is not as good as Terror Resurrection [laughter]

What is surprising is that Tomato actually has such a fanfic that is very consistent with the original setting. The author writes about the unique experiences of different characters in the same world. The overall color is gray as the author said, excluding those cool articles and systems. This way of writing on the Tomato platform is eye-catching. However, the protagonist did feel a little uncomfortable in the early stage. It can be seen that the author is calibrating the timeline of the original work. When the protagonist becomes a ghost controller, supernatural events have gradually revived. It is really difficult to control only one powerful ghost. In fact, there is no need for the author to be influenced by some readers. Who says that others will only want to read cool articles. Among the protagonists who are born to be mavericks in Tomato books, the experiences of ordinary people in this book are a very good spice. I hope the author can continue writing and come up with a satisfying ending.

The author writes superbly! They are among the best in the fandom genre. I read some comments saying that the protagonist and Yang Jian interacted too little, but this way it seems real and does not make Yang Jian outrageous like other novels. This kind of relationship reminds me of Samsara Paradise. I hope the author can write better and better! Especially the shaping of the protagonist's character, who is calm, rational, decisive, and at the same time humane. A good novel with a good protagonist will definitely not be poisonous! His handling of supernatural events is also very consistent with his positioning, making people feel very involved. The overall plotting of the novel is also great, compact yet without losing detail. Then I would like to make some small suggestions. This book feels a little too little about the appearance and psychological description of the supporting characters and supporting characters, so what happens to them always has a sense of distortion, and the readers are not impressed by the characters except the protagonist. (I couldn't tell who was who in the first few chapters [laughing and crying]). There is also a little lack of description of the environment. More words and ink describing the sounds and lights of the environment will make people feel more immersive. Okay, I will continue to pursue it first, and I wish the author's writing skills will reach a higher level!

The writing style is at the upper-middle level in Tomato, the thinking is very clear, the logic is smooth and layered, and the plot is reasonable. The key is that the protagonist's IQ is online and the lyrical aspect is also good. Is the author really a new author? Come on! ! [Eating melon][like]

I found that if you can control the coward, it is great to play with the passing ghost. The coward will resist the supernatural approach, and the passing ghost will strengthen the supernatural. This will cause the coward's supernatural enhancement to reject the passing ghost's approach. Although there is no supernatural confrontation, at a certain point, with the passing ghost's supernatural enhancement, the coward will just resist the approach of the resident ghost to achieve a balance. If the supernatural is further stimulated to make the passing ghost become more supernatural and the passing ghost approaches, the coward's supernatural power will inevitably resist the approaching ghost and form a supernatural confrontation. Finally, the enhancement of the passing ghost should cause the passing ghost to fight against the passing ghost. A ghost that can greatly enhance any supernatural power and complete the puzzle of the coward or other supernatural beings is enough to become the captain's combat power.

I just started reading it, it's really good, there are no poisonous points (I didn't know the poisonous points at the beginning, but I don't know about the later ones. Note: For "me", there are no poisonous points at the front now). It is indeed better than Buddha in writing about people, and Buddha is indeed a bit [face covering] in writing about people and feelings. Come on, author, it's a good fanfic [send heartfelt] [please update]

I've read Chapter 40 so far, tell me your thoughts. The first one that the protagonist caught👻 was exchanged for money, no problem, but later I didn't see where the protagonist needed money, so it was like giving away a ghost for nothing Then there are the missions to catch ghosts all the time, but because the protagonist is too weak, the benefits obtained by the protagonist in these events are 0, 0! Why don't you ask the headquarters to reward you, and then you don't care who will do it for you? It's obvious that I want to write a good story, 4⭐️encourage

I'm not flattering, it's really good-looking. Although the description of the scary and weird atmosphere is not perfect, the rules and the description of the confrontation with the weird are very calm, but the writing is a bit white, but it is one of the best among the fans, and the logic is smooth.

The setting is interesting and the writing is good. I haven't finished reading it yet and will continue to pay attention.

If you look closely, it basically conforms to the world view of the original work, and there is no magic modification or anything. If you just want to read the system and enjoy the fun, then this book is not suitable. This is the story of a small character, and suffering disadvantages and injustices is definitely not everyone's cup of tea. But as I continued reading, especially at the end, I realized that the character was growing up, the plot was also very good, and the author didn't fool others and wrote carefully.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking [eating melon] [like]

The author can add more emotional scenes (please ask for a group by the way)

It is really well written in Tomato, and it is not the same story line as Yang Jian, and there is not much overlap, which is good. The tragic growth process of a small character is a bit cruel in the early stage (I haven't seen it in the later stage). The combat power in the early stage has not been improved, and the protagonist's appearance is difficult to describe in one sentence, but the story line is good and worth watching. Big boost for the author, it is very good👍👍👍.

It's very nice and there are no suffocating operations. I will send you some free gifts when I have time🎁 I will continue to pay attention. I hope the author can insist on not supervising. Five-star praise

"I am Wei Jing (Ghost Cha), online now", I have abandoned that body and my consciousness has transferred

Overall, it's good, not a cool article! But it's pretty smooth, the writing is good, and the logic is fine.

Yes, it tastes like Buddha

Not many people watch it, but I will keep watching it

It's quite beautiful. Why are there so few people?

Good-looking, likeable, thoughtful

A story about the growth of a low-level ghost controller without the halo of the protagonist in the early stage.

Support the author. Keep writing, it's wonderful.

I especially like reading novels with this kind of setting. It is thrilling and gives people a strong sense of immersion.

The protagonist walked his own path and did not blindly follow the plot.

I hope to see the main character solve the supernatural resurgence

The writing is good, but in my opinion, the description of the horror of the ghosts in the early stage was a bit bland.

Grandma was so miserable. She was so unjust. She was killed by a vampire like this. She was so miserable and shivering.

Personally, I feel really good

Author, you can let him control the unbalanced ghost in the haunted house, maybe he can form a puzzle with his current one, and it is a mortal supernatural being, so there will be no shortage of attacks.