Pirate: Celestial Dragon Sword Master

It's really good. It's a piece of human literature and a lily novel (singles are also acceptable, but based on the plot, not lily is too much). The key points are pretty good. It's really a breath of fresh air in the tomato.

Nice! This is my first time reading a novel about pirates, and I have always wanted to find one with a female protagonist. It's great! Love this! Come on more! ! 🤫🤭😘😍 The strongest, the strongest, I love the strongest heroine! ! Expect! [Send a heart][Send a heart][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

So pretty! ! Personally I don't want a male protagonist

It's really good-looking, both the writing style and the content are in line with my taste. And I especially want to know if this is Bai Hewen [sneered laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

The book is good! The writing is very good, I like it very much, but it is too short. I finished reading it in two or three hours, and I don't like it! I hope you will correct it, update more, and write more, so that I and all my friends will be happy.

Yes, the idea is very good... I hope there will be no cp! It's in the East China Sea! Go and take Nami as your apprentice! And the girl with glasses next to the chimney man can also be his apprentice, and then go to the Grand Line... And accept Weiwei as his apprentice! Accept female apprentices along the way! A ship full of female marines!

One Piece yyds!!!🌸 It's really good-looking, a treasure-level book✨ In my eyes, it's all advantages, nothing to say. However, the author, I would like to discuss one thing, please have less tangerine content🍊💦 I love no cp!!!🌙

It's a good-looking pirate novel with a female protagonist. The subject matter is novel and the writing is good. I'm looking forward to the plot in the future. The author will work hard to update it!

To be honest, the character of the female protagonist is too absolute. Her ideals are very lofty, but she feels naive and always righteous. Maybe I prefer Chaos and Goodness, not this kind. And judging from the latest One Piece manga in front of me, Imu is indeed a female. The protagonist Luffy may be a Celestial Dragon. There is a story between the dragon and the Celestial Dragons. Of course, this novel is from a long time ago.

Five stars, must be five stars. This is the best One Piece fanfic I've seen so far. After reading it, I can't think of any other One Piece fanfics at all. When I first saw Esdeath, I thought it was the particularly sassy Ice Queen. After all, I had read a fanfic like this before. But this article is about a kind-hearted and righteous Celestial Dragon. There are many people who write about the Celestial Dragons, and there are also many about the navy, but the kind-hearted Justice is the first one. However, the author's writing style is very delicate and matches the protagonist's character very well. I thought it would be the end like this, but then there was a big twist. The collision between the evil of pirates and the good justice further highlighted the essence of the pirate world - One Piece is still evil no matter how hot-blooded the pirate is. The protagonist's experience is somewhat similar to Zefa's. The protagonist basically doesn't kill the pirates and then advances to the level. To be honest, I was quite critical of this, and then I gave the protagonist a head-on blow. Watching the battle of Malinfando really made me feel a little uncomfortable. Sengoku was indeed a bit naive and had no plan after the intelligence was leaked. All in all, this book is highly recommended and I hope the author will work hard and continue writing.

It's great. I hope the author can continue it. It's really great. I've read a lot of pirate fanfics, but this one written by the author is the best I've ever read. It's great, great, great.

The system has a very low sense of existence and the heroine is facing more pirates without outrageous leapfrogging and killing. If you want to change the world with your own abilities, it all depends on your own abilities. Come on, the author [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

I have read more than 10 chapters so far, and I feel that the starting point of the plot is quite novel. I have hardly seen the same in other Tomato books. Although the author's writing style is not as good as Zhanshen, at least the writing is well-organized. Personally, I feel that it is one of the few books with female protagonists among male books. I also like the heroine's character and plot development so far, and I haven't made any mistakes. I still have some expectations for the subsequent plot. As long as we don't mess around, the character structure doesn't collapse, the combat power is disordered, the world view collapses, and we don't mess around, we will continue to update it. Give the author a big shout out! ! ! I have finished reading the existing ones, and overall I feel that it is a very good book. It can be regarded as the pinnacle of Tomato male books with female protagonists. I feel that it is much better written than other similar books.

The big world is One Piece. The names and skills are almost the same as those in Red Eyes. The ending is Lelouch's model. There is no bad ending, a single female protagonist, a small number of posts, and the past life and system have almost no plot influence. It makes people return to the passion of youth. The writing is very touching. The whole book is mostly short sentences and has strong rendering power. Except for the world line of the main world, which is slightly inaccurate (it can be ignored), the values ​​are not skewed (there is a value development route process). There are no major shortcomings. As a novel, it is excellent and worth reading. Let me tell you more, I read this book in one sitting (I couldn't die suddenly after only 11 hours), and it was because of the strong rendering power. I have also watched One Piece, but I don't know much about it. I have only watched the anime and watched Wano Country, so I don't know much about the "axis" in it. Let's talk about a few more flaws: 1. There are several times where the author really couldn't find a reason to go back to the plot and just wrote "Guide to the World", which was just fun (not important) 2. Why is Im so fond of the protagonist, and where did Im go later (it is considered a small plot hole, it is around the end of the novel, so it has little impact) 3. This is what I want to say the most. It was clearly stated that the next novel will be the follow-up to this novel. Why was that novel discontinued? The author still wants to read it. Can you come back and follow it up? I really want to read it [crying] (it has nothing to do with this book, but the most important point)

This book has a very good subject matter and the writing is not broken halfway through. This book will be a very good book. Will the author and the protagonist acquire Esdeath's skill in the future that can lower the temperature to the extreme and freeze time during the journey?

A wonderful beginning, a rare good book on Tomato

The writing is very good, the plot is also good, and it is very novel. After all, I have searched a lot of novels about pirates, and there are very few books with female protagonists. The character portrayal is also quite good, but the protagonist has progressed too quickly, and the system basically has no sense of existence. I personally feel that it is very good. I read this book before I changed my mobile phone, but I didn't log in to my mobile phone number. The reading time is short, which is normal. I like this book very much, and the author will keep up the good work!

It's a very innovative subject matter, and I'm still a Haimi. The author's writing style is my favorite type, so... Uh... So... Forget it, I will never say that I only gave 5 stars because the protagonist is a girl [I got it]

This is ao! (Laughing) The fighting scenes are very exciting. Especially the last battle is very oppressive, and the grand sense of having the protagonist declare war on the entire world is perfectly reflected. At the same time, the perspective is also very novel and unique. It is a right choice not to describe too much about the original protagonist group. After all, they are the navy. Not sticking to the original story line, but daring to open up new horizons is an essential quality for a good author (although I like Luffy and the protagonist group very much, the author's decision deserves recognition) In terms of content, the memories are inserted very well, the characters of the key characters are quite full, and the thinking about justice is not superficial. The knife is not forced, it comes naturally, and it can also reflect the growth of the protagonist (Oh my god, isn't it an invincible article? Well, it is indeed invincible later) If I have to talk about shortcomings, there is indeed no particularly impressive plot or plot (I mean among all the books I have read), and impatient viewers will be easily dissuaded. But be patient, this book will definitely be worth the time you spend. All in all, all in all, it's worth a look!

A perfect fan Reasonable setting Likeable character The most important thing about fan fiction is to create characters well so that readers will like them. The plot is not the focus, because it is generally similar to the original work

It's finished. This book is very suitable to my taste. It is the most exciting book I have read. But my only regret is what happened to Im in the future. I still have a lot of feelings. The heroine of this book is the strongest I have ever read. Girls can also be kings and dominate the world. There is no need for him/man, Esdeath is already the emperor🎉 I will never forget this book, it will become the most profound memory of my youth. I really like it! I feel like this is the best one among all the heroine pirates. I really love it. I think this ending is okay, but it doesn't give many people in One Piece a good ending. The heroine of the Navy Sword Master is strong! It's really good. Other pirate heroine stories are all about Mary Sue. I really can't read them. I really love this book and would recommend it to my friends. I would like to thank you for your hard work in updating it.

Only then did I realize that I didn't score [eating melon] two words Good luck! The whole process is non-toxic and has no flaws. Not embarrassed Watching the protagonist grow up is like raising a younger sister or daughter [Chigua] Suitable for health readers

Not bad. It's a very interesting novel. At least it's not as brainless as other pirate novels. If the protagonist has CP, then the most likely one is Hancock ❛˓◞˂̵✧

It's still very interesting. The reason why I gave it four stars is that it didn't meet my expectations. I can't tell you exactly what it is. I hope the author will work harder [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's so beautiful👍👍👍I hope the author will work hard and update🌹❤️🌹

It's a very interesting novel, but I still can't stand it. It's mainly because I overestimated the book quality in the early stages or the invincible amount of writing later on, but I just couldn't get over that hurdle. It's not that there's anything wrong with the characters in this book! It's just my own problem, so I say the novel is a good novel, but as a person who reads novels, um, I can't stand this book anymore, haha

It's really nice, five stars is worth it, but it's too slow to update. I'll update it at least twice a day, okay? The ball is gone

It's very interesting, the plot is complete and full of twists and turns, the characters are full-bodied and the inner thoughts are rich. Just like the original One Piece, he is good at memory killing. In the later period, he paid attention to education, which is something you haven't seen in other fan books. Very interesting and interesting, well worth reading.

Although it's very beautiful, I haven't watched it for a few days and it's already finished. I feel so indescribable [face covering] [face covering] Congratulations on the completion [love][love][love]

It took me some time to read it, and I really like the protagonist, so I felt very distressed when I saw the protagonist carrying so much. That is to say, at the end, I actually didn't want to read any more. The original relaxation suddenly became so heavy. But I still finished reading it. After all, I really like the protagonist, both in terms of personality and appearance.