It Scared the Candidates That All the Scars on My Body Were Exposed

Now I only pay attention to the relationship between the protagonist and Qin Hao... How it feels... Full of gay feelings!

Yes, it's good to watch for entertainment.

I've seen a lot of disconnects so far. One second I was talking about one thing and the next second I was jumping to another thing, which made me confused, but overall it's okay.

It's okay. I want to ask if there is a female lead.

The beginning is good, but the transition from urban writing to cultivating immortals is really not very good, but the author's writing style is very good, and the later parts are quite good from literary talent to story background. Humanistic stories, environmental geography, historical background, etc. Are all very good. I hope the author can stick to it and it is best not to be unfinished.

The overall worldview is good. The protagonist is an ordinary person who knows martial arts at the beginning. Then as his strength continued to improve, he came into contact with spiritual energy, became a monk, and entered the spiritual world. Many things happened, and the plot was exciting. Then he became an immortal cultivator, entered the fairy world, and had a wife, Wang Yushi. Moreover, the protagonist is not like other fantasy characters who have a bunch of wives, and unlike other protagonists in the fantasy system stream, the protagonist is very single-minded in his feelings, just like us ordinary people. Even though the protagonist has experienced so many things and contacted many people, the protagonist's heart remains unchanged. The author writes well, keep up the good work. The shortcoming of this novel is that there are too few chapters. I haven't finished reading yet and I don't know whether the protagonist will ascend to the divine realm later on. Also, the protagonist's life is too easy. There are no hardships and ups and downs. The author did not combine this with reality. It may be that the author's writing skills have just started, and he hasn't actually written much in this area. The author should not always immerse himself in fantasy, but combine it with reality, otherwise readers will be bored. Finally, to summarize: The advantages of the novel: the plot is exciting and compact, the character of the protagonist is clearly portrayed, the minor characters also have a voice, the protagonist is emotionally dedicated, and will not become arrogant because of his strength and experience. Disadvantages of the novel: There are too few chapters for a bookworm like me, the protagonist's halo is too strong, there are no hardships and ups and downs, there is no parting between life and death, and there is no pain of missing each other.

Very good, good luck to the author

Great author, come on

Very good looking

It's okay, why is the rating so low?

It's pretty good, but I don't know if it has a female protagonist.

Come on author, I believe in you

Very good, you can watch it

Very beautiful, highly recommended

How can I become an immortal just by writing this?

Very good looking, very good looking, highly recommended! ! !

Why isn't it popular?

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The content of the novel is very good

The previous part is quite well written