Traveling Through the Qin Dynasty: Intercepting Yi Xiaochuan at the Beginning

Can I have a physical rejuvenation? Get Yi Xiaochuan into the palace as a eunuch. Let's see if he becomes like Gao Yao😂😂😂

Well done, I hope Yi Xiaochuan won't die too early! I also hope that Yue'er will have a happy life

If it is written by a novice, it is considered to be of high quality. If it is written by an experienced hand, it will be hard to bear to look at it. Many places are actually wrong, and the look and feel is not as smooth as that written by an experienced hand. But as a newbie, there is still a lot of room for improvement. When writing about a certain genre, you can read more about the same genre, and then synthesize the summaries and reviews of other novels, and then you will write better.

I beg the author to write Chen Feng more decisively in killing and Yi Xiaochuan more miserable. I have long disliked him when watching TV series before. He is really lickable.

The author's writing is so beautiful. He uses rhetorical techniques such as metaphor, personification, exaggeration, parallelism, parallelism, metonymy, rhetorical questioning, questioning, contrast, repetition, pun, quotation, irony, association, synaesthesia, veracity, intertextuality, loop, empathy, symbolism, and allegory. The protagonist's image is vividly described.

How can I put it this way? As a social worker who clocks in and moves bricks to work every day, I think this book is quite good. It relieves stress. Reading is just for entertainment. Don't worry about it so much. Entertainment novels are the most enjoyable. Stay away from those moralists who are pretentious. Decompression index: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Happiness index: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Comfort index: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Recommendation index: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I still hope that the author will continue to write. The writing is very good. I agree with the author that Gao Yao is really miserable, but it can be written in a more detailed way. I don't know the name of the peerless martial arts at the beginning, which is a bit big.

Just because of that knife, you can't get away with your five-star reviews.

Yi Xiaochuan, the writing is great, it is so refreshing, but I think you are still too kind, King Lanling. I really haven't seen it. Prince Lanling was the most popular one, and I watched it all while jumping. There are indeed too many regrets in Fairy Sword.

Author, enter Douluo and kill Tang San for me. How miserable Huo Yuhao is.

The author writes so well! Come on!

Or "Flower Thousand Bones"

After reading it, I only have four and a half stars, not even half a star, so I can only give it four stars. Sorry, sorry, let's get down to business. Nothing bad, just about going back to modern times. There is also the system. I kind of want to curse. First of all, it seems that this system has not been upgraded. Even the primary system can be sent back? ? There is also the question of whether this system was created by humans. Or should I say that this system has been used by tens of thousands of people and is too user-friendly. I deducted half a star for these two points. Well... I've finished reviewing the book, and then I'll share my thoughts. While I was watching, I was thinking, how many people did this system have to go through before it became so humane, or did the system change into an adult later, or was there a real person behind the system? If the system has passed through the hands of many people, then the previous host. Where is it again? Or rather it has become a system. In other words, he has changed into an adult. What are the cheats for the protagonist later? An old man? Or ten? No system is awesome, right? If there is a real person behind the system, will you want to kill or love? Let the author tell me, I'm very curious, haha, keep it up,

It's good. You decide what you write. Whether you like it or not is other people's business. Just stick to being yourself. After all, we are not RMB, we can make everyone like it

It's a very good book worth recommending😌. I hope that the next time and space journey can change the original problems and get better and better. If you really don't know how to write, you can watch TV series and movies and you will have something to write about. Your book is about traveling through the Qin Dynasty, but you also mentioned in your book that you can go to other time and space to change history, so I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, come on, come on.

I really like Yi Xiaochuan's writing. I'll give it a five-star review before reading it! Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I hope that when the protagonist leaves, he will bring his three wives back to modern times.

Come on, author, Oli! ! !

Come on, author, keep writing😊

I have long wanted to say that Yi Xiaochuan is a scumbag. If someone writes a novel, it would be perfect to reverse the situations between him and Gao Yao! As a result, I discovered this book, and I was very happy and satisfied.

The writing is very good. Keep up the good work.

Don't panic, just write it down according to your own ideas. Others can give suggestions, but they will never influence your ideas. Come on!

Great author! Others don't like it! I like! The myth is true and there are many unreasonable things! Don't lose heart

Write down Fairy Sword seriously, come on

This is what happened to Yi Xiaochuan. I like this. I must get high scores.

Big cheers for the author

Keep at it, don't stop,

Five first. Um. Good.

Very good cuckold article

It's okay, I feel pretty good