Konoha: Is the Overlord Weak? Watch Me Turn into a Natural Disaster!

This is the only Naruto fanfic I can read without going too far. The fighting is well written. The only thing I don't like is that it's not enough.

It's a pretty good novel. I have a question to ask the author, that is, will the protagonist have the Sharingan and the Rinnegan in the later stages? Could it be that the protagonist only has Overlord Haki, Wisdom Haki, Weapon Haki and Devil Fruits, but doesn't he have the Sharingan and Rinnegan?

Hmm, it's a good book, but I feel that the combat power has increased too quickly. I feel that it is almost catching up with Madara's combat power. In the later stage, the combat power should not collapse, and can this overlord be restrained and concentrated in a small area (just enough to trap the enemy) The range of the cover is enough), I don't want landslides and earth-shattering within the area every time I turn on the Overlord color, which is not very friendly to the environment, and it is easy to expose yourself and cause some trouble (I haven't watched One Piece, so if the restraint does not match the original work, please ignore my suggestion)

It's a very good Naruto story. The fighting scenes are well described (✪▽✪), but it's a bit unreadable. It would be better if the word count was updated a little more.

It looks good, but can it not be watery?

Come on! It's not enough to watch, but you also need to pay attention to your health

Much better than other Naruto novels

We've just started, keep up the good work

No comments, great book! ! 👍👍👍

I still don't realize it after reading it, I really like this kind of article with Xiao

Author, I want to ask one thing. At this point in time, is Shisui dead? If he is dead, Itachi should be Mangekyo.

It's okay, but the place where the protagonist sells scorpion and Kakuzu ninjutsu is so poisonous, I can't stand it

It's ok. I think the part where you have the armed color and the overlord color combined with the overlord color should be the overlord color, Liu Ying... And the overlord color sword is really bad... And the other one is too short. I'll give it four stars based on this, haha.

Come on, code words make you happy, rewards make you happy, comments make you update 5 times in a row

How do I put it? It fits the Tomato novel [laughing] You have the power of the Gate Fruit. After getting the book of seals, where are you talking nonsense about not being able to escape the water number? Then you open the door and run to the woods. How can you keep up with the third generation who doesn't know space ninjutsu? [Shocked] You have the gate fruit and you can run the water number immediately after taking the seal book [face covering]

There were emotional scenes with Xiaonan that poked me

At present, the poisonous points are acceptable, and the author is more eager to read what he writes. I hope the author will update faster. Keep up the good work.

There are billions of points, author

Good looking, good looking, come on

Xiaonan [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [eating melon], I want to see Xiaonan

This novel by the author is very good

Dear author, I hope you can be kinder. I personally really don't want Jiraiya to die! 😥😢

Overall, it's a relatively novel novel, but it's a bit slow to update.

It's a good Naruto article. The fighting scenes are described in detail and have a sense of immersion. When Pig's Knuckle improves his combat power in the later stage, he can add special abilities from other comics. Don't add Naruto's abilities. The collision of different two-dimensional abilities should be very exciting and unique. The ending in the later stages should not be similar to the ending in the comics. Keep up the good work, author!

There are not many novice novels written with clear ideas, so it is very suitable for book lovers who want to eat fast food! Highly recommended! Come on, author~

I discovered a blind spot. Your cover says "Dongtian Xiuwei", but your author's name is "A Cotton Slipper Ya". What's going on? The author explains

If you really can't do it, write me a book

It's really good, but I hope you can update it faster and don't stay up late

Author, hang in there.

Shock! The novel a certain reader read was actually so short! But the author did this kind of thing—————————————— Thousands of words updated every day!