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I think the writing is very good. The plot is tight and the connection is reasonable. Why is it only 5.7? I think it is better than many 8.8 Books. I started to think that the 5.7 Books are not interesting. As a result, I saw the end in one breath and the speed was very fast! Get me off. This is not a bus to kindergarten! ! !

Although it is written about a villain, he feels like a protagonist to me. It doesn't seem right to me that he is a villain? Today's decent people don't feel as good as villains. At least villains dare to do, act, love and hate, unlike those who do obscene things in the name of decency, give people a disgusting face under the guise of decency, do not flinch emotionally, and are used to face and take responsibility in national affairs? . . . . . . . . . [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

To be honest, I was very touched from the beginning to the end. The portrayal of the "protagonist" and the "villain" is very consistent with the current Shuangwen. The protagonist of the current Shuangwen is more like a villain, following instinct like a primitive animal, irrational and "brainless". The author's expression in the article is obvious. The ending is regretful and perfect, especially the farewell of the system and the meeting of lovers are very touching.

This is the most exciting villain article I have ever read. This supports the author to continue writing. It is a true record of true feelings. You have written all the emotions in the world. When I first read it, I was a little confused about how to kill the heroine. Some people almost cried when I read it, especially at the ending. It is a pity that the author did not resurrect the villain and the villain's wife. He is the author. I hope the author writes a better villain article. [Praise]

So exciting. Both the protagonist and the villain are well written. Unlike most other villains, either the protagonist is more villain than the villain, or the villain recruits the heroines like crazy or kills them all. The ending is also very perfect, it would be better if it could explain how the system works.

I read a circle of comments, and then quickly read about twenty chapters, two chapters with a small poison and five chapters with a big poison. For some reason, I laughed every time I saw a poisonous point. Maybe I didn't take it in and browsed it quickly. Summary: It's all poisonous. If you don't get into it and have a fun mentality, then open the commentary and enjoy it together, the effect may be better.

Okay, that's great. I haven't seen anything like this in a long time.

The overall feeling of this book is quite good. The character creation of Jiang Bai is okay, but it is not complete. It would be better if the ending is more detailed. I have read the endings of many novels, and they are all in one stroke. The only shortcoming of this novel is that it ends too quickly. If I add another hundred or two hundred chapters, I feel that its rating can exceed 9.0. There should be more foreshadowing at the end. Don't make people feel that it is good at the beginning but unfinished at the end. It will not make readers feel that it is difficult to get over (personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it) [laughing][laughing]

A good book, although it has flaws, the flaws are not hidden; give it five stars! Some chapters of this work are indeed powerful, so I won't comment too much on it; I hope the author will carefully refine the plot of the next work.

This is the only book I've seen the finale of, and it's pretty good

It's okay. Although it's not a magical book, it's worth reading it. The ending is really good. The ending is regrettable but fortunate. The protagonist died after all, the heroine died for her love, and her desperate efforts only ended up with the same fate. Fortunately, I returned to the original real world, and I was lucky enough to meet the person who grew old together again, and the memories of the past still remain in my heart. "Hello, my name is Fang Ling'er." "Hello, my name is Jiang Bai." The two held hands, and the woman smiled even more happily. , Asked: "You want to chase me?" "Isn't it possible?" "How are you going to chase me? I'm not that easy to chase. Of. " "The mountains and rivers are beautiful, the wedding dress is red."

It's a very good novel, but I don't know why it has such a low rating? First of all, I'll give it 3 points for a completed book. Secondly, I'll give it 4 points for the rich and colorful content that makes me feel immersed and not tired from reading. The last sentence, "Mountains and rivers are beautiful, and wedding dresses are red." It reminds me of my youthful and frivolous memories. I give it 5 points. It's an absolute 5-star review.

It looks good, much better than the Return of the Immortal Emperor. I just feel that Jiang Bai is a bit regretful.

It's good to watch. It was really sad when Jiang Bai died in battle and Fang Ling'er died in love. But fortunately, the ending was pretty good. It can be said to be one of the best endings I have ever seen. Perfect ending

I don't remember how many books I have read. The novel I started reading in the 4th grade of elementary school must be 5 years old now. Although this novel is not the best one, it is definitely my favorite novel.

The beginning, middle and ending of this book are very good and this book is touching. I like the ending very much. I hope the author will produce more good works like this.

This is really well written. I have to say that the ending of dying together with destiny and falling in love with the heroine in the original world is really good.

This book is very well written, don't skip reading [Like]

This is the only novel that made me cry while reading it.

Splendid mountains and rivers, red wedding gown It's a dream, but there is a beautiful woman accompanying you Zhuang Zhou dreamed of butterflies, butterflies dreamed of Zhuang Zhou A dream in life, when I came back when I was still young, I didn't seek to be famous and move the world, I just wanted to look back together with you!

After reading it, overall, it's pretty good. I think the score should be at least around 8.0. I think this score is missing. That's it. I hope Jiang Bai and Fang Ling'er are happy (the story of this world is over, it's time to go to the next story, bye everyone [laughing])

What a desolate story. The fate of these protagonists are almost all desperate mandarin ducks. It's so touching.

Five stars. I haven't seen such a perfect system article in a long time.

Come on, author, this book is pretty good, but the later updates are a bit too fast, and I can't keep up with the speed.

This is the best-looking villain I've ever seen.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. I have said the important things three times. I want to add a few more stars to the five stars!

Md, who asked you to write such touching things? I cried countless times,

This is one of the best books I have ever read in my life

I have read hundreds of pictures and then stopped reading. This is one of the very few novels that I can finish. I hope the author will work hard and look forward to the next one.

A very good book worth recommending