Mortal******

There are many hardships on the road to cultivating immortality. Han Li grew up rapidly because of Doctor Mo. Han Ming also needs such an ordeal to cleanse his mind. Otherwise, he will take action casually. When he meets a woman, he will be trembling with love. How can he survive for a long time?

As of now, Han Ming's story has reached 300,000 words. In terms of the plot of this book, it actually has little relevance to mortals, mainly because it is too long ago from the story of Old Demon Han, so the characters and plot in the book are basically brand new. The reason why I decided to write this book in the first place was more out of interest. Although I have limited writing experience, I will try my best to write this book well. Writing this book is actually a process of continuous learning and progress for me. I hope readers will gain happiness from reading this book and I will also gain growth. In addition, I will carefully read everyone's comments, preferably chapter comments and paragraph comments, because there will be prompts in the background so that I can see them. I am also begging you here. If you like this book, please comment, read it, and urge updates. If you don't like it, you can just leave. After all, reading is a pleasant process in itself. In my opinion, the most attractive thing about a book is to conceive a plot well, create characters well, and tell a story well. I hope that even fellow Taoists who have never read Forget the Mortal Man will like Han Ming and this story because of this book. To this end, I will continue to work hard. [Eat melon]

The writing is really good, it has the feeling of forgetting words. I hope you can see what it looks like after ascending to the fairy world later.

This is the first time I've seen a fanfic about Mortals' Cultivation of Immortality. I hope the author will update it soon.

The writing style is good. It is written in the traditional way of cultivating immortals. The content is basically the same as other novels about cultivating immortals. The breaking point is not high and it is lukewarm. The language expression ability is good. It is not like some novels that are boring to make up the word count. This is good. All in all, the author's novel is worth reading.

This novel is good

Pig's Feet is a true biography of Han Lao Mo. Although some plots are a bit awkward in logic, the book is vivid, exciting and immersive in the details of the characters' fights with martial arts treasures and other details. It is indeed a rare masterpiece written by mortals.

Click a little, good, good!

Well written, I like it

It's beautiful, but it's a pity😭

It's as good-looking as A Mortal's Legend of Immortality!

This is good. I haven't seen a good book in a long time. I hope the author can write it well and don't stop updating it in the middle of writing like some authors, and don't end it badly. This will give readers a bad impression and no one will read the work in the future. Anyway, it's very interesting. I hope this movie won't be cut off halfway like Journey to Immortality. Please keep working hard. As long as you keep writing it well, we will support you.

It tastes like a mortal

Not bad, it can be regarded as a follow-up to the Mortal Stream.

Some of my personal thoughts are that I prefer a more realistic development with average talent and few opportunities, which is more in line with my vision.

It's really good. It's really good.

I like this kind of subject matter, it looks good.

Well enough. It's good to read Shuhuang

Thank you very much to the author for the memory.

Not bad, well done, Wai Rui Gu De

The author still has a certain level of writing!

Come on Aoli gives you [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] I am optimistic about you

I am quite picky about reading books, but I have read the latest chapter of your book, which is well written. I like it very much [Like]

I think whether it is reality or fantasy, it all has a certain impact on the living environment. This book is more faithful to reality

The content is well written, looking forward to the follow-up

Finally, the author has updated the book a lot. The protagonist is not a cookie-cutter five-spirited person with an online IQ. I quite like this kind of plainness similar to that of a mortal. I would like to give some suggestions. The villain's IQ can be slightly improved to form a contrast with the protagonist. I think it will be more interesting. Some climaxes can also be interspersed with the plainness, which will definitely improve the senses when reading. Finally, I wish the author a big hit and a lot of Mane [eating melon] [eating melon]

Reading so far, I feel pretty good and worth reading

Very beautiful, not ordinary!

Not bad, the plot is serious and exciting, hahaha

Come on, author, you write very well, you must stick to it