After Cultivating Immortality, My Dao Companion Worries Themself Sick Over Me

It's very interesting so far, I just wish the article would be longer. Nowadays, there are hundreds of articles, most of which are about cultivating immortality.

It feels like a long time coming. I like the character of the heroine very much. She is smart and independent. She does not rely on acting coquettishly to obtain resources. She is not like others who vow to become the protagonist of the world when it comes to time travel. I think it is very good. Come on, author.

It's quite interesting. It's an ordinary person's journey through time. He's timid and afraid of death. He dreams of living until the end of his life. I feel like I can relate to the unspectacular person.

After watching for so long, I still haven't found the male lead, haha

The heroine's character is quite lovable, and I look forward to the follow-up development.

How to put it this way, I thought the heroine was quite good-looking before I met Xie Changfeng. After I met him, I always felt that something was wrong and I always felt heartbroken, but I couldn't help but keep watching. If the heroine is the reincarnation of Ning Ran, who was transported to modern life, and then passed on again, it would be a bit weird to directly say that Xie Changfeng is a Taoist couple as soon as he appears. Although they just grew up together, they have never been officially confirmed. Although it seems a bit ambiguous, but how to say it. The male protagonist may have just wanted to compensate the female protagonist with guilt and complicated psychology at the beginning, but then gradually fell in love with the female protagonist through subsequent contacts. But calling him a Taoist monk from the beginning is a bit too forced. Although the heroine has always been a person from this world, oh no, Zhuzi. But, um... I can't quite accept the way the male protagonist appears. Finally, although there isn't much interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist in the back, well, actually, I was a bit dissatisfied with Zhao Xian and Fang Mingjing's CP in the front, but Fang Mingjing's scenes are getting less and less in the back. At first, I also competed with Zhao Xian and Lou Nan's CP, but the scenes were less than those of Fang Mingjing😭. And later Lou Nan died to save the heroine. Although he didn't want to live for a long time, he really felt sorry for Lou Nan.

It took me a long time to read it, and I felt empty after reading it. However, Xie Changfeng and the heroine finally became lovers and got married. Their lives in several lifetimes were full of fate. The author put the plot together very well, and the characters were quite interesting. Lou Nan personally thought it was a bit regretful that he passed away, but everything is fate, and it is the best arrangement.

There is no golden finger for an ordinary heroine to travel through time. She was confused at the beginning, but after she decided to become an immortal, she didn't see her efforts. She didn't know how to practice elixirs, weapon formations, or anything, and she never thought about learning. Knowing that the world is dangerous and the jungle is strong, and even after being knocked unconscious several times, I did not act more cautiously, nor did I try to practice hard to become stronger. But it doesn't seem to be necessary, after all, no matter where the heroine goes, someone will protect her and deal with the aftermath, haha.

This subject matter is great and novel. Everyone needs to grow up. I have always wanted to find this kind of novel where the heroine gradually changes from an ordinary person to an extraordinary person. The starting point is too high, which makes it less interesting. The heroine also has a mysterious identity, but she is not the type of intrigue at the beginning. Big cheers for the author! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Advantages: The heroine basically has no trouble, she is a real person who is slowly cultivating immortality. The heroine has an unassuming personality and avoids trouble but has a sense of justice. The description of human nature is okay, more realistic Possible problems: The plot is relatively gentle and has no ups and downs, requiring patience (but in fact, the tone of a fairy tale should be this, but many people will be impatient, and a climax would be better) The male protagonist came out too slowly. He probably didn't even show his face now, so he recognized the wrong person? The description of the action and fighting scenes in the middle period was a bit inconsistent, and the plot of the fruit tree was too bland, and it felt like a lot of it was not narrated. I will continue to watch it. I actually like the heroine's character. I hope she can help her best friend find justice as soon as possible.