Naruto: I Drew Dual Kamui at the Start

Although the settings in some places are a bit outrageous, it still feels pretty good. The author will continue to work hard (~￣▽￣)~

The fiction is generally good, the plot is good, and the relationships are more realistic and human. The update is too slow. The blood book of thousands of people will be updated 1/10000.

The plot progresses and escalates little by little, which is great The details and order are also very awesome. What I feel is the most important thing about this book is that it is relatively orderly. What should be highlighted should be highlighted, and what should be omitted should be omitted. The biggest highlight is your writing style. The only drawback is that I feel that the protagonist's emotional approach may be a little indecisive. After all, dragon writing also curses the clan. It can be written more courageously, with the courage to fight for one hundred thousand blood on the head and save the world. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. (It's also great that the author sticks closely to the theme. He always writes around the theme of divine power, which is a plus)

The days are dull, but as warm as water. In the new year, be clear-eyed and determined. May there be hot soup and sweets in your life, and books and distant places in your backpack. May all difficulties be relieved, and every loneliness be embraced and resonate. There are always bright dreams in the long night, autumn harvest and spring plowing. In the sea of ​​​​people, you are always accompanied by good friends, and you will always be happy. Everything you ask for will come true, your journey will be smooth, you will have much joy, and you will always have peace.

Very well written. In some places, I thought it would be just like a normal novel, and it would always be bloody and slap in the face, and it would be done without thinking. But he had neither. I feel like this is so refreshing. [Segmentation] Update soon! Update soon! I can't help but take out my 40m long sword.

Overall, I feel that the pace of this book is tight, neither urgent nor slow. It should be possible to write more than 300 chapters, and there is no harem. The writing is systematic. It is very enjoyable but not too sudden. It reaches the peak all at once. I am very optimistic about the author. Come on!

It is a book that I really like to read, but I have always had a question, that is, in the era of advanced information, competitions are generally recorded. This is generally a way to understand the choices and opponents. In most novels, every time there is a new round of competitions, others do not know anything about the protagonist. Moreover, this protagonist has participated in many competitions and has exposed very important things. However, others still know nothing about it elsewhere and do not know how to prevent it. Is it the protagonist's halo? But this always feels like it's missing a certain charm.

I really like the books Zhan Shen and Shenwei. This is also a book that I have been chasing for a long time. It is really very good-looking. The plot is not rushed and slow, and the grasp is just right. It is really very good-looking.

It's been a long time since I've seen a good fan novel. The author writes it well. Come on!

You can watch it. Maybe I'm not a 2D fan, and I don't have much interest in Naruto. This novel is remarkable to me. The advantages are that the subject matter is acceptable, the data is reasonable, there is no collapse, and the world view is relatively large. The shortcomings I personally feel are that the writing style needs to be improved. I always feel that it is neither good nor bad, and sometimes it is a bit verbose. Some of the routines used to advance the storyline are very cliche, and there is no exciting climax. Of course, as the protagonist works hard to practice step by step, some restrictions on the protagonist are also correct. After all, if the protagonist upgrades too fast, the data will easily collapse. Overall good, but needs to be improved