A Weak Husband and a Tough Husband

It's beautiful. The author's writing is very good. I need to update it every day!

It's wonderful. No matter what others think, you are the most beautiful in my eyes.

It's really good. It's ordinary, life goes smoothly, and it's very warm.

So loving, happy and lasting. ✧＼ ٩(눈౪눈)و /／✧Come on, hey m9(´∀｀) is you! ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡- ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑)(ω< )★

It's just perfect for my taste. It's really sweet and the pace is fast. I fell in love at first sight and will get married soon. Hehe is beautiful. It's simply great. I love it so much.

Dear author, it is your first time to write an article, and it is so well written. It is already very good. Author, you are the best, support you, come on. [Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing is okay, but I always feel that there is a bit of a contradiction between the front and the back. The mother Lin in the front is good, but the mother Lin in the back is a bit like that, but I still like it very much. Great author, come on! (づ￣ ³￣)づ

The author has such a big imagination 😂 Some of the plots are really beyond the imagination of ordinary people. The character creation is not particularly good, the contrast between the early and late stages is too great, and generally speaking, the connection in the middle is not particularly good. The plot is shaped, emmmmm, the continuity is not particularly strong, but it is not bad. When I was writing the story in the later stage, I felt that I could write the scenes more coherently. But it's my first time writing an article, and it's still great to write to this level. (/^▽^)/Come on＾0＾~

It's a very good little sweet article. Although some weird things happened in the middle, the problems are not big. There are no abuses or misunderstandings. Lin Shi and Lin Mu's love life is sweet. They have a warm family, run some small businesses, and live a happy life in harmony as a family. (There are too many typos)

The author's writing is pretty good, but I feel it's a bit too hasty, causing the characters' personalities to change a lot. It would be better to have more foreshadowing or more detailed characterizations.

It's okay, but it feels like this book was written as if it came to mind. Although I don't think it's perfect, I really like the love between Lin Shi and Lin Mu. Lin Shi is thinking about how to knock Lin Mu down all the time every day, and he can use any tricks.

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of two-male protagonist in Tomato. The author should do his best and take care of your body. 😃😃😃😍

To me, it's a good, light-hearted novel, but there are many places where it's written too fast, as if I can't grasp anything. And the characters in the book, in ancient times, I always felt that some people did things that were unrealistic and weird. The author has great ideas. In short, I still prefer this kind of short story.

The overall feeling is okay, daily life is very relaxed and interesting, but some plot transitions are unnatural, the characters' psychological transitions are not foreshadowed, and the chronological order is unclear. I hope it will be corrected in the future, and the author will get better and better!

We will never leave each other for a lifetime, and we will grow old together hand in hand. I have read every book written by Xiao Yuer. Compared with other books, this one is a bit greener, so keep going! Looking forward to more new books.

There are only two words, okay, good-looking, this one is very to my liking, okay, this one is really good-looking, just one sentence, sisters, go for it! ₍₍ ง(*Ӧ)ว ⁾⁾ Believe me, I'm right❛˓◞˂̵✧

This article is generally OK, a little bland in the middle, but the result is still good. Highly recommend this book! Recommend! Recommend! Very nice☺

I can see my hair exploding\Hmm → So sharp

Your article is great, but your ending is not very good, it is too vague. Come on! [Laughing]

I like this book very much. Life is plain and plain, full of warmth and sweetness. Who says that plainness is not a kind of happiness? [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This book is really good, and I finished it in one night, so I hope the author will update it faster.

The content of the article is quite well written and quite enjoyable. But I always feel that the author may have written in a hurry. Some details can be described in more detail.

It's very interesting. For someone who has been reading Danmei novels for more than ten years, this article is already well written, but this is just my opinion. Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's not bad, you can watch it for a short time. It's also a kind of happiness. It's love at first sight. There are some imperfections, but just watch the protagonist.

It's a very good article, every detail is interesting, it's true in its plainness, and it's all sweet and sweet. It's also very funny, with a lot of laughs.

Very everyday love, warm and sweet, the plot is okay, if you like this style, you can watch it, I really like it hahaha

The story is very warm, relatively plain, but makes people feel that they are very happy [blowing kiss]

Very pretty and sweet. What a good one, "We will never leave each other for the rest of our lives, and we will grow old together until the end of time." Lin Shi & Lin Mu I hope to see the story of Lin Muchi and Lin Mulan, the author, please come on!

Big cheers for the author! I really like this kind of book

It's okay, it feels okay, it looks pretty! !