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There must be no heroine ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

The plot is good, but the mix of Douluo is a little bit bad. The main thing is to write the plot yourself. Don't mix too much plot ideas from other novels. Just a little is fine. In addition, many fans in Tomato have been offended by the third young master of the Tang family, so don't mix too much with the third young master's book, because it will be difficult for you to mess around here.

I made a blind guess because there is a school beauty in the tag. So I Keep Touching Your Belly (There's Only One Truth), this book must have a heroine, is that right for the author? If it's not right... I have many accounts, so let the sea of ​​one-star bad reviews come more violently! Right! Author!

If you blindly guess that the author writes this, you will be criticized.

To be honest, I am very optimistic about this book, but I wish there would be fewer emotional lines, preferably none (ﾉД`)

My personal impression is good, the writing is very good, but the content is very similar to Douluo. If you are the kind of person who hates Douluo, you can leave. Don't lower your score here.

Interesting and beautiful

Good job, young man. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.

I don't quite understand why the rating is so low, but I quite like it

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First of all, for me, the character creation is good, the IQ is online, the plot is well connected, and the foreshadowing is very natural. However, the reference to Douluo is very strange and makes it uncomfortable to read, especially the end of Chapter 20 which is very awkward. Other small problems and advantages can be ignored for readers who are short of books.

Very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The protagonist already has two types of pets: mind control and poisonous gas. I will classify them as control types for the time being. So the protagonist still needs the attack type, defense type, and assassin type. It is recommended to add the attack type first. Doesn't the author like Douluo Continent? You can add a Dark Demon Evil God Tiger, a Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear, and what is that dragon called Ditian? Anyway, he is a black dragon, and his wife is also a demon dragon (although he also has an emerald swan wife)

If it weren't for Douluo's ideas, I would definitely read it, but it's not easy for the author to give five-star support when writing a book.

Good book, good book! This type of novel is rare! The dragon cub is giving chase!

If you didn't borrow Douluo Dalu, you would have been at least 9:02 [staring]

Come on💪! Also, Douluo Superstar is a bit too adulterated.

Although the background is a bit like Douluo, the author's setting is not bad. At least Su Li is not a hidden weapon like Tang San. And I like the dark style, decisiveness and no hesitation. Come on ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

I suggest that the author writes less about the dark genre. Doesn't it mean very little? Is it difficult to train? But now almost everyone has one...

It's good, I just hope there won't be a female lead

The author keeps updating from time to time, which makes me wonder if he can write anymore.

It is recommended to have a yin-yang fish at the back, or other beasts with both holy light and darkness elements (I really want health) ଲଇଉକ

I like darkness, darkness is super cool

Although the setting is slightly familiar, the plot is definitely not boring and not bloody [the kind where there are many female thieves and it seems like you can't live without meeting the protagonist]. Play steadily, step by step. There is no such thing as a cliché of mindless explosions and counter-attacks in times of adversity.

I'm so excited to finally see a villain with brains (ΩДΩ)

I have read a lot of beast-controlling novels, and this is the first one that stood out to me.

This is a very good novel, and the content is also very exciting, but it has not been updated for a long time. I am almost tired of reading these few chapters over and over again. Come on, update quickly, it's not enough to read. I hope the author will update it quickly and don't stop updating it, let alone remove it from the shelves.

It's okay, no obvious shortcomings

Personally I think it looks great👍👍

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking