Fantasy****

The background, realm, system, etc. Are all well handled, and it can be considered a high-quality product among "villains". The plot development is also okay, there are no big pitfalls, there are foreshadowings, and there are also unexpected things. It doesn't seem so far-fetched that things plundered can affect oneself. However, the protagonist's character and ideas don't have to be so rigid and rigid. The reason for escaping from marriage was pretty good when I came to the Xuanling Realm. It was much better without the excuse I had before to run away. For the protagonist now and for the heroine in the future, the relationship can slowly develop and ferment, making the character appear more alive. Instead of coming up and giving it for free. But you can't be a "fool" who is indifferent to the actions and contributions of others, or feel uncomfortable if you deliberately write a contrived story about time-traveling people's souls. Huang Ling'er acted very "recklessly" for this fiancé, and it was not difficult to see her deep love and sincerity. I want to see something sweeter later. The protagonist should not be too straight or dull. Lu Changsheng: I only talk about flowers, not pick flowers. That's fine too. As long as the heroine doesn't have too much and is too messy, and takes her time, I believe this will be a good work on Tomato.

It's well written, just don't fold it

After all, it is a new book, and it depends on your follow-up development. I have also read a lot of villain novels, but I have only really finished one or two. Most of them are stable in the early stage and jumpy in the later stage. To maintain a good rhythm, I would rather you change the rhythm less than to mess up. After all, you also know that the quality of a novel does not depend on the early stage, but on the later stage. Most of them are good in the early stage and open up in the later stage, and the five-star reviews are not broken in the later stage.

It's really good, I hope it lasts longer [blowing kiss]

Very good, keep up the good work

Yes, it is not necessary to look at the villains. The characters are divided into the sons of fate, the sons of heaven, the sons of heaven, and the sons of the great road. The protagonist is directly the son of the great road and protected by the heaven. The so-called son of destiny is the rising resources prepared by the great road and the heaven for the protagonist [laughter]

Well, I have to say that the author succeeded. He took the villain writing to a new level. Although it is no longer a cool novel, it has poetry-like language and implicit and heavy foreshadowing. But the main plot is a bit bland, and the early foreshadowing is a bit over 100 million [face covering] But to be honest, I like it very much. [Adoration]

If the male villain doesn't learn magic skills and doesn't have demonic energy, he's not a villain anymore?

Come on, don't enter the palace

It's really well written, I like it

It's pretty good, come on

Be sure not to break it, it's best to grow it longer, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Author, can you finish this book?

I love it. I used to read a few chapters of novels, but now this is the first one I want to finish.

Good-looking is the young man.

The author, please stop being eunuchs

I want to see the follow-up. After I added the bookshelf, it has always been 76 and has not been touched. I don't know how to be a eunuch. No, nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

The book is good, but there are too few. I saved it for a long time and finished it in half an hour.

It's pretty. It's pretty. I like it.

It's okay, there are relatively few typos and I hope the author will continue to improve it. Create another masterpiece

Not bad, I hope the author can speed up the update and stop making typos all the time [laughing]

Come on, author, your writing is great.

Will you still want to go back?

It's okay, not too embarrassing

It's very well written. I hope you can stick with it.

Wow😯are the missing persons back?

Author, I think you just don't like it, five stars, it's so beautiful!