(2022 Rehabilitation literature practitioners, don't read it.)
When he and Xin Jushang were tablemates for the first time, Zhou Yuchuan moved the table ten centimeters to the side in front of the whole class and laughed in a nonchalant way:
"I'm sorry, the family is strict."
Later, Zhou Yuchuan stared at Xin Jushang's beautiful almond eyes, gritted his teeth and forced a smile:
"Xin Jushang, are you really stupid or are you pretending to be stupid? I like you so obviously, you didn't notice it at all?"
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A few years later, they reunited again.
At that time, standing next to Xin Jushang was another young man who looked very similar to Zhou Yuchuan. The scene of the two of them rubbing their ears and temples made Zhou Yuchuan's face darken.
He stared at Xin Jushang with his long, slightly narrowed eyes teasingly, and his tone was sly but also revealed a trace of innocence——
"Why do you look so much like my ex-girlfriend?"
Reader comments
Ahhhhhh! ! Xu Yinan is from next door. It is outrageous that this book does not score 9 points! ! ! So pretty! ! Ahhhhh! ! ! Brother Chuan is the eternal god! !
It's very interesting. The story of Xu Yinan and Xu Zhiyan and the story of Xin Jushang and Zhou Yuchuan are very interesting. The author's writing style is very good. I hope he can publish a book about Xu Yiye and Xia Zhizhi [Adoration]
Emma, the author has mentioned several times in the comment section not to read it, but as stubborn as I am, I still read it.
Let me talk about my thoughts: Generally speaking, it is good, a sweet text, but it is not sweet, and there are also some sourness, such as facing parents who are not supportive, etc.
Regarding the younger uncle, my opinion is: the heroine only regarded him as a stand-in, but after the breakup, she did not explain much and did not apologize. This is quite embarrassing. Maybe a sincere apology and explanation of the reasons would be better.
The second thing that makes me feel sweet is: the male protagonist sings to the female protagonist, takes her to the concert, takes care of the female protagonist when she has appendicitis, and provides candies and sour plums when she gets carsick. The emotions are described very carefully and in detail, and the outline is good and sweet.
But a lot of holes need to be filled in. For example, the story of Xu Yiye is not finished, and there is no follow-up to say that he is with the male protagonist's sister, or in other directions, or whether he still likes the female protagonist, so it will easily make us readers feel that all the men are surrounding the female protagonist, but in fact, it is not like Xu Yinan and Xu Zhiyan are together.
The author probably prefers to write one-on-one emotional plots, but sometimes adding emotional scenes between the second female lead and the second male lead will enrich the story. I continue to follow the footsteps of Da Da Da, and the emotional scenes are written very clearly.
It's so beautiful that I watched it all. I really love Zhou and Xin's character. What struck me the most was the fantasy chapter. No matter what time or place, no matter how early or how late we met, I only like you.
Don't ask me why it only has four stars. Zhou Yuchuan and Xin Jushang can't have children. It pisses me off. I have to keep my eyes open when reading books from now on. It almost drives me crazy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
This book is very interesting to me. I really like the writing style of Dada. The ambiguous relationship next door is also good. I like them all. So come on, Dada, just write what you like. I will always support you [Love]
It's really good, and the twists and turns in the plot really impressed me [laughs] I highly recommend everyone to watch it! ! ! ! ! ! Super interesting! ! !
It's a bit regretful that the heroine can't get pregnant and have a baby.
I don't know why I gave this book a five-star rating.
Although the early relationship between the male and female protagonists in this book is mediocre and too fast.
But that's what I'll do. It's really sweet in the early stages.
Although in this book, the characters and characters of the uncle and Jiang are so good, the heroine is too much of a loser.
But this article is too short and I can't help but keep reading.
And I also wanted to see the final outcome of these two affectionate male supporting actors (it turned out to be nothing)
Although the plot of this article is not satisfactory,
But I really like the handsome character of the male protagonist wearing a floral shirt.
[Cry][cry]
I'm so confused... Let's give it a five-star rating!
It was quite exciting at first, but when the heroine used the hero's uncle as a substitute, I couldn't accept it [awkward laugh] but overall it was still wonderful [smile]
The story of Xu Yinan's sister Xin Jushang and Zhou Yuchuan is also very interesting.
The author of Ran Ran's great treasure [Sending Hearts]
Why is this duty so low? Very nice! Why is the score so low? I got it from Xu Yinan next door and I like it very much. Highly recommended!
Good reviews, super good reviews. The plot is compact and there is no procrastination to pique readers' curiosity. The three views the author gives to the characters in the text are also very positive (leaving aside the villains). When the male and female protagonists are hurt by others, the two people's counterattacks are also great. It makes people happy and refreshing to watch. Both the male and female protagonists are talkative, and there is no such thing as a long-term misunderstanding between two people without explanation. The male and female protagonists are also absolutely praised for their way of dealing with things. They just say it if they don't like it. They don't say anything for fear of hurting each other, or fearing that the relationship will be broken off if they hurt each other. The only thing that everyone thinks is not good is that the heroine's child was killed by the evil heroine, and she will not be able to get pregnant in the future. After the heroine's biological parents found the heroine, they kicked the child they had raised for so many years out of the house (knowing that the heroine's biological parents kept the sister who reported the mistake and raised her abroad, and it was the younger sister who was kicked out, and they also knew that the adopted daughter had hurt the heroine). ), But I still don't understand. After all, they have been together for so many years. How can they let go of each other just because they are not biological? There is no affection at all. Also, are childhood sweethearts really too old to fall from the sky? The male protagonist obviously liked Zhao Jianing before the heroine appeared. How come he doesn't like Zhao Jianing anymore because of the contrast between Zhao Jianing and the heroine? However, these points do not affect the enjoyment of this article. After all, a successful article cannot be affected by a few nodes that make people uncomfortable when reading it (in my personal opinion). Recommended results⊙ω⊙
I came here from "Ambiguous Relationships", and the two articles have some things in common: Internet violence, emotional paranoia (hurting one person because you like another person), indifference and alienation in family relationships... (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)
Very nice! The love between Zhou Yuchuan and Xin Jushang is really enviable. 18-Year-old Xu Yinan is so hypocritical, hahaha
Originally everything was fine up to this point, but when it came to the little uncle scene, I couldn't bear it anymore and I didn't know what to say [I almost cried]
I first read the Xu Yinan
I read this book after reading Ambiguous. Both books impressed me very much. I like them [laughs]
I feel that the author's writing style is very good. Am I the only one who likes the first one better? [Thinking] The plot of the daughter who suddenly comes true is a bit abrupt, but I still like the campus novels written by the author. I love it so much. [Send my heart] After reading the second book, I feel that the author still has the potential to write yandere novels, but I still love the author's campus novels the most. It's great [Like] [Like] [Like]
Like it very much! Taro Bao also wants to work hard today!
Very good. Although the author said that those who have read another book should not read it, but it is unexpectedly good. Come on💪Brother Chuan and Sister Xin yyds
Why do such beautiful books have such low ratings [crying]
There are few novels that I like so much. Thank you to the author for writing [blowing kiss]
The whole book is okay, except for the fact that the heroine's life experience is reversed at the end, which is a bit unexpected for the Zhao family. Haha, it's a bit like life is unpredictable, the big intestine wraps up the small intestine.
This book is so good, I think it's even better than Ambiguous Relationship hahahahaha
I really like the characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist [laughing][laughing][laughing]
Show them all to me!!!!
Come on, the author, come on!
Emmm, I think the male supporting characters in it are quite miserable. The male and female protagonist's child was also killed. It would be better if there was a better ending [I'm about to cry]
Ahhhhhh! ! Xu Yinan is from next door. It is outrageous that this book does not score 9 points! ! ! So pretty! ! Ahhhhh! ! ! Brother Chuan is the eternal god! !
It's very interesting. The story of Xu Yinan and Xu Zhiyan and the story of Xin Jushang and Zhou Yuchuan are very interesting. The author's writing style is very good. I hope he can publish a book about Xu Yiye and Xia Zhizhi [Adoration]
Emma, the author has mentioned several times in the comment section not to read it, but as stubborn as I am, I still read it. Let me talk about my thoughts: Generally speaking, it is good, a sweet text, but it is not sweet, and there are also some sourness, such as facing parents who are not supportive, etc. Regarding the younger uncle, my opinion is: the heroine only regarded him as a stand-in, but after the breakup, she did not explain much and did not apologize. This is quite embarrassing. Maybe a sincere apology and explanation of the reasons would be better. The second thing that makes me feel sweet is: the male protagonist sings to the female protagonist, takes her to the concert, takes care of the female protagonist when she has appendicitis, and provides candies and sour plums when she gets carsick. The emotions are described very carefully and in detail, and the outline is good and sweet. But a lot of holes need to be filled in. For example, the story of Xu Yiye is not finished, and there is no follow-up to say that he is with the male protagonist's sister, or in other directions, or whether he still likes the female protagonist, so it will easily make us readers feel that all the men are surrounding the female protagonist, but in fact, it is not like Xu Yinan and Xu Zhiyan are together. The author probably prefers to write one-on-one emotional plots, but sometimes adding emotional scenes between the second female lead and the second male lead will enrich the story. I continue to follow the footsteps of Da Da Da, and the emotional scenes are written very clearly.
It's so beautiful that I watched it all. I really love Zhou and Xin's character. What struck me the most was the fantasy chapter. No matter what time or place, no matter how early or how late we met, I only like you.
Don't ask me why it only has four stars. Zhou Yuchuan and Xin Jushang can't have children. It pisses me off. I have to keep my eyes open when reading books from now on. It almost drives me crazy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
This book is very interesting to me. I really like the writing style of Dada. The ambiguous relationship next door is also good. I like them all. So come on, Dada, just write what you like. I will always support you [Love]
It's really good, and the twists and turns in the plot really impressed me [laughs] I highly recommend everyone to watch it! ! ! ! ! ! Super interesting! ! !
It's a bit regretful that the heroine can't get pregnant and have a baby.
I don't know why I gave this book a five-star rating. Although the early relationship between the male and female protagonists in this book is mediocre and too fast. But that's what I'll do. It's really sweet in the early stages. Although in this book, the characters and characters of the uncle and Jiang are so good, the heroine is too much of a loser. But this article is too short and I can't help but keep reading. And I also wanted to see the final outcome of these two affectionate male supporting actors (it turned out to be nothing) Although the plot of this article is not satisfactory, But I really like the handsome character of the male protagonist wearing a floral shirt. [Cry][cry] I'm so confused... Let's give it a five-star rating!
It was quite exciting at first, but when the heroine used the hero's uncle as a substitute, I couldn't accept it [awkward laugh] but overall it was still wonderful [smile]
The story of Xu Yinan's sister Xin Jushang and Zhou Yuchuan is also very interesting. The author of Ran Ran's great treasure [Sending Hearts]
Why is this duty so low? Very nice! Why is the score so low? I got it from Xu Yinan next door and I like it very much. Highly recommended!
Good reviews, super good reviews. The plot is compact and there is no procrastination to pique readers' curiosity. The three views the author gives to the characters in the text are also very positive (leaving aside the villains). When the male and female protagonists are hurt by others, the two people's counterattacks are also great. It makes people happy and refreshing to watch. Both the male and female protagonists are talkative, and there is no such thing as a long-term misunderstanding between two people without explanation. The male and female protagonists are also absolutely praised for their way of dealing with things. They just say it if they don't like it. They don't say anything for fear of hurting each other, or fearing that the relationship will be broken off if they hurt each other. The only thing that everyone thinks is not good is that the heroine's child was killed by the evil heroine, and she will not be able to get pregnant in the future. After the heroine's biological parents found the heroine, they kicked the child they had raised for so many years out of the house (knowing that the heroine's biological parents kept the sister who reported the mistake and raised her abroad, and it was the younger sister who was kicked out, and they also knew that the adopted daughter had hurt the heroine). ), But I still don't understand. After all, they have been together for so many years. How can they let go of each other just because they are not biological? There is no affection at all. Also, are childhood sweethearts really too old to fall from the sky? The male protagonist obviously liked Zhao Jianing before the heroine appeared. How come he doesn't like Zhao Jianing anymore because of the contrast between Zhao Jianing and the heroine? However, these points do not affect the enjoyment of this article. After all, a successful article cannot be affected by a few nodes that make people uncomfortable when reading it (in my personal opinion). Recommended results⊙ω⊙
I came here from "Ambiguous Relationships", and the two articles have some things in common: Internet violence, emotional paranoia (hurting one person because you like another person), indifference and alienation in family relationships... (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)
Very nice! The love between Zhou Yuchuan and Xin Jushang is really enviable. 18-Year-old Xu Yinan is so hypocritical, hahaha
Originally everything was fine up to this point, but when it came to the little uncle scene, I couldn't bear it anymore and I didn't know what to say [I almost cried]
I first read the Xu Yinan
I read this book after reading Ambiguous. Both books impressed me very much. I like them [laughs]
I feel that the author's writing style is very good. Am I the only one who likes the first one better? [Thinking] The plot of the daughter who suddenly comes true is a bit abrupt, but I still like the campus novels written by the author. I love it so much. [Send my heart] After reading the second book, I feel that the author still has the potential to write yandere novels, but I still love the author's campus novels the most. It's great [Like] [Like] [Like]
Like it very much! Taro Bao also wants to work hard today!
Very good. Although the author said that those who have read another book should not read it, but it is unexpectedly good. Come on💪Brother Chuan and Sister Xin yyds
Why do such beautiful books have such low ratings [crying]
There are few novels that I like so much. Thank you to the author for writing [blowing kiss]
The whole book is okay, except for the fact that the heroine's life experience is reversed at the end, which is a bit unexpected for the Zhao family. Haha, it's a bit like life is unpredictable, the big intestine wraps up the small intestine.
This book is so good, I think it's even better than Ambiguous Relationship hahahahaha I really like the characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist [laughing][laughing][laughing] Show them all to me!!!!
Come on, the author, come on!
Emmm, I think the male supporting characters in it are quite miserable. The male and female protagonist's child was also killed. It would be better if there was a better ending [I'm about to cry]
So pretty
This book is really nice
Plain, warm