Brother Pit************

It looks good. In fact, many times I can't tell which one of them likes whom. They get along very much like the CP from the original novel, but they say they like the heroine. I really can't figure it out, but it's still very good-looking.

I got the storybook from the old graveyard, and after the college entrance examination, I read it four times on Tomato. The author really wrote it very well, both in terms of writing, plot and characters. My wife is the one who supports half the sky in Old Ford when her brother cheats Otome😭🫰🏻

It's the first time I've seen a fan of my brother's trap. The Thai pants are hot [laughing and crying]. The character design is very good, it fits the original work, and it's original [please update] [like] [like] [like]

It's very good to watch, but there is a vague feeling of discomfort. No one likes the heroine wholeheartedly. Although everyone has a good relationship, this feeling is really sour. Fortunately, it is written in the first person, and the heroine is not very enlightened, which alleviates my discomfort.

Ah, it's so happy to have cp sex [Adoration] [Adoration] Every couple has a good time, haha, but the author's writing is also quite good

It's rare to see someone write about Brother Pit. It's so well written.

It's so beautiful. Although there is no fixed CP at the moment, I hope there won't be any CP in the main text and I'll read every extra chapter [shy]

It's obviously a small heart-throb novel, why is it so easy to criticize! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I like it! ! ! ! ! Zundu is pretty good, nothing particularly OOC, it's so spicy!

Very good I really like the character of the protagonist

Ahhhhhhhh, it's so beautiful. You are so amazing in this world. Why is it gone? Isn't it finished? ? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh why why is it gone?"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, why am I gone? There is no article to read again! Why is the update discontinued! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's really good-looking, without any sense of inconsistency, and perfectly blends into the character. Wahahaha...(ㆁωㆁ)

It's super good-looking and I especially like the protagonist. It's obviously a very common heartthrob script but it's just so good.

I've been waiting for an update for a long time, but as soon as I finished reading it, I finished it [face covering]. This book has a good plot, and it's one of my favorite fanfics to read. I still love senior brother so much

Maybe it's because I like Brother Pit too much, but in short, I think it's very lively and interesting. PS: This should be regarded as the first novel I read in one sitting on Tomato, although it is not finished yet...

It's wonderful. The character's personality is well grasped, and it doesn't seem out of place for the protagonist to join it. Moreover, I suddenly discovered a blind spot. Author, why are your update times all on the same day? Is this a one-time release of the inventory? [Laughing and crying]

It's quite good-looking, the characters are well controlled, and Biyu's character is also very novel. All in all, it's one of the best-looking books I've ever read. I hope the author won't give up on updating (ﾉД`)

This is my brother's cheating. It is the longest of all the articles I have ever written. It is much better than some of the articles that only come out after only one or two words. Don't worry, I have read through your brother's cheating many times. This is the longest one.

I really like this book. It's my first time reading Xiongkeng fanfic. I feel that the characters fit very well and the emotions between the characters are very natural. But can the author please update more? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh size being it's not enough that it's not enough! ! ! ! ! !

This is the only one I have finished reading. It should be Otome Xiang's brother pit fan work. I think it is very good. When I read the second half, I was a little tired, but I found that I was a little bit disappointed after reading it. I still want to read it. [Crying] Uh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh, I recommend this novel to those who are omnivores.

So good-looking, so cute, so handsome! ! ! The protagonist's fear of heights also made me laugh. At the same time, the interaction with other characters when she has to wield a sword is also very interesting. The protagonist's natural stupidity makes me laugh to death. She is still talking about Gong Changsheng, but they are evenly matched hahahaha

Nice! But it ended too suddenly

It's great. It feels almost the same as the original style, and the characters are also very restored. The author's writing style is also very good

So pretty, so pretty. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Why should it end!

Recommendation, recommendation, recommendation, I feel that there are quite few fanfics written by Xiong Zhan. The characters are not OOC at all. Sometimes the heroine and the four little ones are really good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The author greatly appreciates the update! !

It took me so long to find out that there are no comments yet. I abandoned it for a while because of a new book, but when I looked back at this one, I found that I could seamlessly connect the plot. I love the author's writing style very much. It feels light and ordinary, but not boring, and the plot is not awkward. It is very comfortable to read.

It's very interesting and interesting. This is the best fanfic I've ever read. The writing is online and the characters are very consistent with the original work. It's not OOC at all. I'm convinced, please update it soon! ! ! If you don't update your fanfic, you won't be able to continue writing it. It's been so many years and it's still not finished.

Very nice! It's a very novel plot [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] I urge you all to come and watch it. Anyway, you won't suffer any loss if you watch it. Who am I doing this review for? It's not all for you to see good-looking works! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile]

Love Biyu so much! ! ! ! So cute! ! ! ! The author's writing is also very good! ! ! ! No ooc can be seen at all! ! ! ! (Giving flowers) It's like reading the original novel! ! ! ! Besides! All Jasper's Shura field consumes incense! ! ! ! Although, I like Dongfang Wuqiong x Xiao Biyu the most! ! ! ! Knocked me to death! ! ! I really like this kind of writing without CP bias! ! ! ! The extras are also super delicious (drooling)! ! ! !

This is my first time watching a fanfic of Xiongkeng. Overall, it is really great. The image of Senior Sister Biyu is also well created. However, some of the later plots are incoherent with the previous ones, and the ending is too hasty. But I still recommend it, it looks good.

The characters are vivid and real, the plot is well restored, the colleagues have unexpected and reasonable surprises, and each Shura scene is also good to watch. Especially the extra in the middle, it's super, super, super cool! Love watching! Oh, it's such a pity that it ended. It was so hasty. I didn't read enough. How about the author publish a follow-up book? There was a suspense at the end which made me feel itchy and uncomfortable😖