Teiko's encounter with five girlfriends in the Age of Miracles and the appearance of U17 and Net King (if it's not written well, don't scold me, I'll change it if you tell me it's not written well, thank you)
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Uh...
I don't know what I feel
Or do other people feel the same way?
I think it's quite confusing
And to be honest, I didn't watch them for the purpose of watching their games.
I came here to see them fall in love.
The previous emotional drama was too fast
There are too many games in the middle, and there is very little plot about their love.
The back part feels a bit sloppy?
Also... I really want to see how the heroines introduce their partners to their brothersww
Uh... Of course this is just my opinion
I'm sorry if I offended the author.
It's too messy. If you want to write more CPs, there's no problem. You have to write them separately and don't mix them together. Each character must have its own characteristics. But I like the subject matter, so the author should work hard to improve his writing style.
Uh... I don't know what I feel Or do other people feel the same way? I think it's quite confusing And to be honest, I didn't watch them for the purpose of watching their games. I came here to see them fall in love. The previous emotional drama was too fast There are too many games in the middle, and there is very little plot about their love. The back part feels a bit sloppy? Also... I really want to see how the heroines introduce their partners to their brothersww Uh... Of course this is just my opinion I'm sorry if I offended the author.
It's too messy. If you want to write more CPs, there's no problem. You have to write them separately and don't mix them together. Each character must have its own characteristics. But I like the subject matter, so the author should work hard to improve his writing style.
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