Stand Down, Master! The Strongest Across the Heavens Have Surrendered
收手吧馆主！诸天至强已经投降了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 113k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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49Chapters
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You broke down the first world for me. Originally, this subject matter was quite good, alas! If you start writing about Ip Man or Kung Fu, or even Jin Yong's novels, it will work. From the beginning, you will be able to stand up to war, and it will still be equivalent to ordinary martial arts and Gang that can be elementalized. At the most basic level, if someone is elementalized, you will be beaten (´-ω-`). You don't say what realm you are in, just say an eighth-level master. Is this still a mortal realm? If you want to talk about martial arts, golden body, or Shattered Void, these realms are still a bit of a joke. It collapsed from the start. And your second world is actually Marvel, which is even more funny. Your subject is Zhutian Martial Arts Hall. Can you write a world that is not related to martial arts? Thanos is a powerful man at the level of a heavenly father. You solved it with another mortal martial arts. It can't collapse any more. I suggest you organize the outline first and then start adding content to it. Don't waste it like this at the beginning.
Author, stop writing. The world collapsed in the first one. I wanted to continue reading, but you ended up collecting tolls as a disciple. I really don't know why you liked Luffy. You thought he was a character you like, so you accepted him as your disciple. You are really awesome. I can't even scold him.
A different word, so much so that Akainu hit him on the jaw with an elbow from behind?? Then he said again, one punch is enough to deal with you??? He stomped the ground, shattering the ice, and breath came out of his palm?!!!! I didn't write well, why don't you report me?
I don't understand why I wrote about martial arts schools, but why did I go there at these two times? Do they have anything to do with martial arts? Whether you go to low martial arts or fantasy, isn't it good? You have to write about something irrelevant.
Come on, work hard,~o('▽')o
The characters are a bit poisonous
What are these things?