Dream of the Red Chamber: The Phoenix Arrives

Never give up on Bao Dai CP. I think Bao Jade is unworthy, expensive and useless.

As long as you are not worthy of Bao Dai, I will chase her.

I really like Wang Xifeng like this. She is always a cheerful and smart person. Why should she put all her thoughts on men and live out her own style!

This is the best one among all the Red Mansions fanfics written by Tomato. It respects the character of the original characters without being overly destructive. Unlike other books, except for the names of the characters, there is no connection at all. It's rare to see Baochai Daiyu described as a vicious and stupid heroine. It would be an insult to Dream of Red Mansions. Sister Qiao is really a little angel. I was touched when I saw her hugging Daiyu. I hope Daiyu and Baochai will have a happy ending. Baochai's ideal is to assist the country and govern the people. Although it is unrealistic for a woman to enter the court, it would be good if she could enter the palace and become a female official. Don't let her marry Baoyu.

Let Lin Daiyu marry into a good family

Give it five stars for encouragement. There's nothing wrong with the writing, but it's not outstanding either. The relationship between the characters is indeed a bit unclear. Indeed, the main line mentioned in the comment section is too deep in the original work. In fact, the most important thing is that the characters in the original work are very distinct. The author needs to consider how to break through and establish a clear and full image in the re-creation. The author has to be aware of it, and the writing style... There is still a lot of room for improvement. Writing a book is not easy, so five-star reviews serve as encouragement. However, what is worthy of praise is that the minor regrets of some characters have been made up so far, and they can continue to make up for it and then make breakthroughs. Another main problem is that the article cannot be too bland. It is only 300,000 words. There must be conflicts and conflicts that promote the plot. Come on!

It looks good. I don't like Li Wan. I hope Daiyu won't be with Baoyu anymore. It's best to be water-soluble.

I feel very good now and hope to continue working hard.

It is one of the few reliable novels in Red Mansions. It has an online IQ. There is no overly exaggerated and illogical plot, and there is no stallion. It looks very comfortable. Keep up the good work.

It would be best for Wang Xifeng to have a happy ending! I'm happy too