Pirate**********

As a rule, I give myself five stars.

I have to say that when I saw this novel, I was used to reading systematic articles. I just couldn't stop reading it... It's just that the author's coding speed is the only problem that kept the rating from going up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Fan Pirates Appear The Longest Living Celestial Dragon

The writing is very good, the protagonist has a growth process, and each character is very unique. I have not read the original One Piece novel, but among so many Pirates fan fiction, this book completely gave me a new and different experience. The protagonist does not necessarily have to have an epiphany at the beginning, does not have to be unparalleled in the world, and does not have to join the pirates or the navy. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon

Although it does not match the title of the book, the description of his inner drama is still very rich. The first dozen or so scenes are about the inner life of the male protagonist. The male protagonist has doubts about justice in his heart, just like the green pheasant, and he is more considerate of the situation of his friends around him.

It's okay. I clicked on this novel because of the last sentence in the introduction. The dog head is obviously a Celestial Dragon. The plot is good, and the emotional line is also written with flesh and blood. I tried to write it first and then to expand, but I don't care. Anyway, what I read is that the Celestial Dragon is going to die, and then the child is going to die too. I don't care about the rest. It doesn't matter how exciting or depressing the previous writing is, as long as I want to read it.

The author writes well, the writing style is also very smooth, and the objective description is also good. The shortcomings are also obvious. There are too many confessions. There are 3-5 confessions in less than 30 chapters, and some have several chapters. I wish the author could be less confessional and more plot-driven.

It's a pretty good book, but the Tianlong people in the front look really aggrieved.

From the current point of view, the novel may be too realistic, resulting in the loss of the original joyful effect of the novel, and causing too much depression. However, it is undeniable that this is a good book. The rendering of all aspects and the description of the personal heart are very good. I personally think that the current reading can be regarded as paving the way for the future, which can make the subsequent rebound stronger. (Personal opinion)

This book is really good! Although I was a coward in the early stage, I just thought that Roman Ronan said that there is only one true heroism in the world, and that is to recognize the truth of life and still love him! I hope the author can keep writing!

It looks good, but it's the code speed that makes me want to send you a blade! (I know you want to express your desire before you write, but your coding speed prevents me from seeing the back, so I want to send you a razor blade)

The reason for giving four stars is because you don't work hard to update, so you don't come up with a few more pictures to celebrate the New Year?

The first 22 chapters are really good, but it starts later. Since the so-called justice is reflected through growth, it is best to implement it as a lone ranger, or with one or two companions. You must know that the pirate world is not only a world of beautiful scenery, wine, and beauties, but also a world where personal strength can grow infinitely, which is the romance of men.

The book is very good. Is the reason why the score is so low because of the slow updates? Or is Momonosuke not dead yet?

Why is no one commenting? Do you know the author?

Basically, most of the good-looking novels you can get are about 100,000 words. Just add a bookshelf and support it. It will be fine if you can support it. But basically, if you can't support it, it just depends on your fate.

Kind people will turn evil when pushed. Honest people are in a hurry. It will also turn black. No matter what you do, don't offend others. Otherwise, you may disappear from this world forever.

I've been browsing Pirates for so long and finally found the style of writing I wanted to read.

The writing is very good, but the title should be changed, and the previous reading is frustrating. I hope you can leave the harem. Akainu's words are a bit inconsistent with the original work, but I don't rule out the factors that have been influenced by the protagonist since childhood. Overall, the writing is very good, keep up the good work.

I think the protagonist could use a little bit of cheating.

Not bad, good, promising.

Quite to my liking.

In one sentence, support is enough!

Come on we support you

Outside the bed, it's a foreign country

Come on, I'll give you five stars

Okay, I just feel a little bored watching it.

The first time travel that made me feel so real Disappointed, disappointed, still disappointed

You don't have to fight yourself, I'll give you one too

It's pretty good-looking. Finally, it's not Shuangwen and Black Akainu.