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Give your book a good review. If you have any suggestions, I will adopt the good suggestions.

There are too few details about the fighting process. I can't tell whether the author wants to write a section about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger or a passionate series. I hope the author can add some funny things within his ability, but don't force it. If you can't control the direction of the article, don't add it. Come on ٩( 'ω' )و٩( 'ω' )و٩( 'ω' )و

It's okay, I barely give you a five-star rating Character descriptions require details.

Well, to be honest, I started reading novels in the second grade of junior high school and now I am a freshman. There are fewer and fewer good novels. The book shortage is quite serious. Many fantasy and science fiction novels are invincible and the plots are not outstanding. It is really difficult to find a good book. This one is already good. The author should lubricate the plot and the plot. Sentences, write some emotional scenes appropriately, and of course don't level up quickly without hardship. Being too invincible will not give readers a good feeling. I recommend the author to read "Super Power: I Have a Replica Mirror". I believe it will affect and improve your writing and the level of this book. Five stars. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

Can you update it quickly? I finished it in just a few minutes. Do you want me to force you to update? Is it because you can't update without a knife on your neck? Is it okay to update 4 chapters a day? If not, be careful with a knife on your neck. It's up to you.

It is recommended that the author introduce the Naruto combat power system in the later stage. The scroll in the early stage is a foreshadowing. The scroll is a common item in Naruto, so I am very, very, very, very, very looking forward to entering the world of Naruto. Naruto has stronger combat power, a high upper limit, and a diverse combat power system. Thank you very much.

You're a newbie, you have to work hard

How should I put it... There is no doubt that it is a short story, and the subject matter is relatively general, but it is worthy of encouragement for a first-time writer. I hope the author can greatly enrich the plot and fighting scenes, so as not to make people feel embarrassed after reading it just to heighten a certain atmosphere. (The above is my personal opinion, please feel free to comment if there are any similarities or differences)

Chapter 24? Your eightieth birthday has just passed!

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

Although the writing is good, the update speed is terrible. One sentence, 20,000 words a day! ! ! ! Is it possible?

Come on, come on, come on

It's really good-looking (just looking at it personally), and it's worth recommending! ! !

The protagonist should have the characteristics of the protagonist and develop some skills that are different from Kizaru.

It's awesome, it even has lightning⚡

Squeezing your kidneys dry is the source of my happiness🙏

It's so short, I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on!

Finished watching it in less than an hour 🙃🙃

The author must have talent. He glowed when he didn't eat the fruit. Although he ate the fruit, it didn't conflict with his original talent, right?

When I watched it, the rating was 8.4, But now it's 8.1, Awesome author

Not bad, add a little more details

So few, I can't see enough

Give a five-star review

Why it disappeared is still a mystery

Not bad, not bad. Nice

Not bad, good, good-looking

Looks good

Five-star praise sent

Damn it, it's like taking a bite... And drinking it

It looks so good, why is it rated so low? . . . .