The Villain Stops Being a Simp and Wins the Heroine

Yesterday was the first day of the show. Whether it was book reviews, chapter reviews, or sentence reviews, I read them all. Thank you everyone for your encouragement, criticism and suggestions. Every comment is important to me. I am a new author, and this is my first real work. It does have many bugs and shortcomings, and I know all of these. But not everyone can write particularly well at the beginning, and geniuses are in the minority. I will continue to maintain the good things in the future, and I will try my best to correct the bad things, and I will continue to work hard. I believe it will definitely get better and better in the future. Finally, some people say that God King Chuanshu doesn't have his previous skills. What I think is that there is no need for it now. I don't plan to take too many cultivation routes at the moment. My current focus is on daily life with the heroine, and I can torture the heroine by the way, as long as I am strong enough, not too strong.

The writing is very good. It would be even more awesome if the author could make the villain turn his hands into rain.

Not bad, but the only drawback seems to be that you, a god king, have traveled through time and you don't even have useful skills. You still need to get them from the system. I want to know how you, the god king, got there.

Dear author, hello, I would like to make a comment. Although the plot of King of War is over, the heroine in the story of King of War feels that she can continue writing. It does not mean that she will stop writing after finishing the plot. The plot is really good

Overall, I feel pretty good, but I haven't practiced the exercises. It's obviously impossible for a god king to be reincarnated and not even practice a set of exercises. I can write that the current spiritual energy is thin, the cultivation is not fast, and the realm is high.

Well, the author keeps up the good work. Come on! 👍👍😄

Overall, this book is a very good urban villain article. I think some other elements should be added, such as one villain with multiple protagonists, which would look better.

Update soon. It's a good read. I hope it can stay like this.

The author writes very well. This is the first book that made me feel that the villain novel is very good-looking. Please continue to update the author @(=^ω^=)@

A very good novel, five stars. I hope the author can update it more.