Severing Immortality

Newcomers are shameless and give themselves a five-star review! If you like it, you can leave more comments. The first volume is a complete story, with daily life and foreshadowing. Family members who have clicked in may wish to read the entire first volume before leaving! Double updates every day at 12:00 noon. I have to consider whether I can get more updates on weekends. I love you! It's over! ! There is no mess, no eunuchs, all the foreshadowings have been revealed and there are no omissions. Thank you all for accompanying me all the way.

This is the nth good novel after Perfection, Covering the Sky, Holy Ruins, Fearing Su, Jianlai, Qin Sanshi, Dali, Body Ghost, and Zhan Shen

So far, it's very easy for me to watch, and it seems that the more I watch, the more I get addicted to it, and I don't want to stop at all! (What should I do if I can't finish my homework?) The characters are well created, making me feel that every character is alive, such as Wang Jing and Hong Fugui. Especially when Wang Jing disappeared at the end, I really shed tears. The characterization of these characters is at least among the top three in the books I read. So far I have only read the first volume, so I will write this much. This is still This is the first time I have reviewed this chapter so seriously😋 (I will never finish my homework, God!) In short, it's done if it's well written. I hope the author can keep it up, but don't be a eunuch (Blade warning)

It's obviously very good, but why doesn't anyone watch it? 🤔 This is obviously one of the best books I have ever read. It is quite novel and eye-catching. PS: Dear author, come on, don't break the book!

This is really the best novel I have ever read [laughing and crying]. It's a cool novel among cool novels. If you haven't tried it before, you can give it a try. The writing is not good and the plot is even worse. I thought the writing was okay at the beginning but then I kept getting addicted. Come on, author.

There is not much to say. It would be unjust to not give this book five stars. What surprised me most about this book was how perfect the plot framework was. Even the structural framework of those sacred books. There are few who can compare with him. Moreover, every character is truly flesh and blood and has a soul. It feels like the protagonist becomes a supporting character beside him. And this book is also my favorite type, with a sweet love story. Ordinary days, funny routines, invincible strength. It can be said that this book really met all my needs in the early stage. Although it is said to be an invincible novel, it is also a different kind of invincible novel. Well, the author of this book will make some summaries at the end of some volumes. He always mentioned that his writing skills are not good enough, but I feel that he is already very strong. Among the books I have read, there are very few that give five stars. The only shortcoming of this book may be that it lacks a bit of fighting. This may be the only thing that proves that the author is a novice because the plot is foreshadowed and hinted in advance. It's very cool, and every character's story has a beginning and an end. There is no problem at all that the characters in the early stage cannot be found in the later stage. I actually read books relatively quickly. This book is also one of the few that I wish I had not finished reading so quickly, because it is really not easy to find such an excellent book.

I suggest the author not to be ignorant and give me a good update as soon as possible. I have been a bookworm for eight years, but the quality of this book is still very good. At least among the invincible novels, it is the most comfortable for me to watch, and the characters are also very well drawn. Keep up the good work, 500,000 words is not enough to read. Hope more will continue! 

The early stage is full of fireworks, the plot and writing are smooth, and the writing style is relaxed and very satisfying. The characterization is impressive and engaging. I haven't seen it in the later stage, but the introduction may go towards fantasy. I hope it won't be written as a cool novel later. It will be good to keep this rhythm and fireworks, with a few ups and downs. In addition, the plot will be smooth and the antique light fantasy will be spread out.

I've read Chapter 57 so far Let me start by saying that this book is really worth reading. Except for a few books about gods, it is difficult to compare it with advance payment. This book is really good (from the second book), the characters are full of personality, but sometimes it feels more like a shortcoming, because all the characters are too full, for example, there are funny clowns and reckless fools in many stories, so it would be better to have more characters with obvious personalities. Interesting, of course the author's book is already very good, at least it is much better than those books where everything is serving the protagonist. In addition, I didn't see any foreshadowing in the early stage of the friend's rebellion. The key is to find the ghost. It is suspenseful enough. The second friend's rebellion really makes it feel more like this. I have read Chapter 225 so far This time I changed it to five stars. This book is definitely worth reading. I won't regret reading it. The genre of the book is slow and popular. The further you go, the more exciting it becomes. The front part is also very good. It's alive, it's really alive. Can you believe that this author can bring the characters to life? ! Not only that, the first two volumes have corresponding questions, and many tasks in them can actually be answered. Anyway, I have rarely seen such awesome comments. Really, if I hadn't accidentally spoiled the book, I would have blown this book. The score is definitely low, at least 9.3 Points or above. It's an absolute miracle book, even if you don't read Blood Loss

The author's writing is quite good, and he has put great effort and care into the characterization and plot development. Reading it reminded me of "Ya She" I read in high school. Each volume depicts a theme, and accessories are gradually introduced. The protagonist is more of a transition that takes over the instructions. Compared with many invincible stories in Tomato that only have one main line, the story is more full and exciting. The slight shortcoming may be that when portraying the characters, the writing skills are a bit behind the conception and seem a bit immature. The same is true for the foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Sometimes seemingly casual details echo the subsequent plots and can make people smile. The author's book uses Li Zhujie (it seems to be the word Zhujie, I can't remember to show off) as a perspective, as a detached "god" to look at the common people. In fact, the article has a large subject matter and is not very easy to write, but the author can cleverly use the perspective of a human "god" and a slightly humorous voice, which makes people feel that it is not a high-level talk, so that readers can also look at the problem from a different perspective. The score of the author's book on Tomato is unsatisfactory at best. For no better reason, it may be due to the audience problem. I think middle school and high school students account for the majority of this platform. They may still be in a stage of self-exploration and prefer self-heroism. I hope the author will not be discouraged and continue to work hard.