Duanxian

Newcomers are shameless and give themselves a five-star review! If you like it, you can leave more comments. The first volume is a complete story, with daily life and foreshadowing. Family members who have clicked in may wish to read the entire first volume before leaving! Double updates every day at 12:00 noon. I have to consider whether I can get more updates on weekends. I love you! It's over! ! There is no mess, no eunuchs, all the foreshadowings have been revealed and there are no omissions. Thank you all for accompanying me all the way.

This is the nth good novel after Perfection, Covering the Sky, Holy Ruins, Fearing Su, Jianlai, Qin Sanshi, Dali, Body Ghost, and Zhan Shen

So far, it's very easy for me to watch, and it seems that the more I watch, the more I get addicted to it, and I don't want to stop at all! (What should I do if I can't finish my homework?) The characters are well created, making me feel that every character is alive, such as Wang Jing and Hong Fugui. Especially when Wang Jing disappeared at the end, I really shed tears. The characterization of these characters is at least among the top three in the books I read. So far I have only read the first volume, so I will write this much. This is still This is the first time I have reviewed this chapter so seriously😋 (I will never finish my homework, God!) In short, it's done if it's well written. I hope the author can keep it up, but don't be a eunuch (Blade warning)

It's obviously very good, but why doesn't anyone watch it? 🤔 This is obviously one of the best books I have ever read. It is quite novel and eye-catching. PS: Dear author, come on, don't break the book!

There is not much to say. It would be unjust to not give this book five stars. What surprised me most about this book was how perfect the plot framework was. Even the structural framework of those sacred books. There are few who can compare with him. Moreover, every character is truly flesh and blood and has a soul. It feels like the protagonist becomes a supporting character beside him. And this book is also my favorite type, with a sweet love story. Ordinary days, funny routines, invincible strength. It can be said that this book really met all my needs in the early stage. Although it is said to be an invincible novel, it is also a different kind of invincible novel. Well, the author of this book will make some summaries at the end of some volumes. He always mentioned that his writing skills are not good enough, but I feel that he is already very strong. Among the books I have read, there are very few that give five stars. The only shortcoming of this book may be that it lacks a bit of fighting. This may be the only thing that proves that the author is a novice because the plot is foreshadowed and hinted in advance. It's very cool, and every character's story has a beginning and an end. There is no problem at all that the characters in the early stage cannot be found in the later stage. I actually read books relatively quickly. This book is also one of the few that I wish I had not finished reading so quickly, because it is really not easy to find such an excellent book.

I suggest the author not to be ignorant and give me a good update as soon as possible. I have been a bookworm for eight years, but the quality of this book is still very good. At least among the invincible novels, it is the most comfortable for me to watch, and the characters are also very well drawn. Keep up the good work, 500,000 words is not enough to read. Hope more will continue! 

This is really the best novel I have ever read [laughing and crying]. It's a cool novel among cool novels. If you haven't tried it before, you can give it a try. The writing is not good and the plot is even worse. I thought the writing was okay at the beginning but then I kept getting addicted. Come on, author.

The early stage is full of fireworks, the plot and writing are smooth, and the writing style is relaxed and very satisfying. The characterization is impressive and engaging. I haven't seen it in the later stage, but the introduction may go towards fantasy. I hope it won't be written as a cool novel later. It will be good to keep this rhythm and fireworks, with a few ups and downs. In addition, the plot will be smooth and the antique light fantasy will be spread out.

The author's writing is quite good, and he has put great effort and care into the characterization and plot development. Reading it reminded me of "Ya She" I read in high school. Each volume depicts a theme, and accessories are gradually introduced. The protagonist is more of a transition that takes over the instructions. Compared with many invincible stories in Tomato that only have one main line, the story is more full and exciting. The slight shortcoming may be that when portraying the characters, the writing skills are a bit behind the conception and seem a bit immature. The same is true for the foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Sometimes seemingly casual details echo the subsequent plots and can make people smile. The author's book uses Li Zhujie (it seems to be the word Zhujie, I can't remember to show off) as a perspective, as a detached "god" to look at the common people. In fact, the article has a large subject matter and is not very easy to write, but the author can cleverly use the perspective of a human "god" and a slightly humorous voice, which makes people feel that it is not a high-level talk, so that readers can also look at the problem from a different perspective. The score of the author's book on Tomato is unsatisfactory at best. For no better reason, it may be due to the audience problem. I think middle school and high school students account for the majority of this platform. They may still be in a stage of self-exploration and prefer self-heroism. I hope the author will not be discouraged and continue to work hard.

I've read Chapter 57 so far Let me start by saying that this book is really worth reading. Except for a few books about gods, it is difficult to compare it with advance payment. This book is really good (from the second book), the characters are full of personality, but sometimes it feels more like a shortcoming, because all the characters are too full, for example, there are funny clowns and reckless fools in many stories, so it would be better to have more characters with obvious personalities. Interesting, of course the author's book is already very good, at least it is much better than those books where everything is serving the protagonist. In addition, I didn't see any foreshadowing in the early stage of the friend's rebellion. The key is to find the ghost. It is suspenseful enough. The second friend's rebellion really makes it feel more like this. I have read Chapter 225 so far This time I changed it to five stars. This book is definitely worth reading. I won't regret reading it. The genre of the book is slow and popular. The further you go, the more exciting it becomes. The front part is also very good. It's alive, it's really alive. Can you believe that this author can bring the characters to life? ! Not only that, the first two volumes have corresponding questions, and many tasks in them can actually be answered. Anyway, I have rarely seen such awesome comments. Really, if I hadn't accidentally spoiled the book, I would have blown this book. The score is definitely low, at least 9.3 Points or above. It's an absolute miracle book, even if you don't read Blood Loss

I think it is definitely a rare good book on Tomato. I looked through the comment area and found a lot of people who like me are reluctant to comment most of the time. However, this book is really good. There is basically no poisonous point. The writing style is also very good. It has a theme and has many thoughts of the author. There may be some opinions in the book that not everyone agrees with, but I think it is very good. Compared with many of the messy books nowadays, the ratings are low. Yes, this is definitely a book worth reading. If you feel that some parts are not handled to your liking, I think it is better not to comment. After all, it is not easy for authors to write books, and there are fewer people who can write carefully. It is meaningless to give a low score because of some of my own dissatisfaction. I still hope that everyone can read it for themselves and not be affected too much by the comments. I don't think the reference section of the Tomato comment section is very strong. I look forward to the author's other books and give them five stars.

This book is full of fireworks. Although it is about cultivating immortals, it is also full of true human feelings. The protagonist is invincible but can truly face the people around him as a normal person. If you read it calmly, you will feel more of the gurgling true feelings of the world. I changed my name after not seeing you for one day?????!!!!!!!

A good book, without the boring routines of most invincible novels. The author's writing style is also good, and the character creation is also good. Although there may be a certain gap compared to Jianlai and the like, but as a new author, it is already very good. I hope the author will work hard and not be a eunuch.

The book is a good book, indeed a good book. Whether it is the characterization, the description of things, or the fighting plot, it is all excellent. But I really can't stand this kind of torturous plot. At first, I thought that the key to being a pig, eating a tiger, becoming an invincible immortal is the single female protagonist, but after reading the first stage, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I am suitable for reading mindless novels [face covering]. It is already tiring enough if I have to use my brain to read a novel. It's just that I, the wild boar, can't eat fine chaff. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better works. If the author writes a novel in which you pretend to be a pig, eat a tiger, become an invincible immortal, and the most important thing is to have a single female protagonist, I will definitely read it, and then I will give you gifts.

It's quite beautiful. In an environment where nine out of ten Tomato books are unfinished, the author really deserves praise [almost crying]

This book is really good, the supporting characters are delicately portrayed, and the settings in the book are not cliché at all. What makes me excited the most is the transformation of the protagonist in the middle period. He clarifies his belief, Duan Xian! Only by allowing the world to have no immortals can the mortals in the world of cultivating immortals live and work in peace and contentment, and allow human civilization to develop normally. Because there is a very interesting setting in this book, which is that because you can cultivate immortality, evil thoughts in this world will give birth to demons. Ordinary low-level demons pose little threat to immortal cultivators, but they are a disaster to ordinary mortals. In order to save the world from water and fire, the protagonist embarks on the path of immortality.

Catching up! Thanks to the author for sharing the story. In fact, you don't have to pay too much attention to those not-so-good reviews. Keep your heart and create with peace of mind. It's hard to agree with others. Just write what you want to write! Looking forward to more exciting stories in the future!

The character creation of Wang Jing was really successful. The novel Wang Jing left behind and the protagonist finally writing about his friend Wang Jing on the tombstone made me burst into tears. The story of Novice Village touched me deeply, including the fact that the protagonist later wrote a book under the pseudonym Wang Jing. The protagonist always remembers Wang Jing and misses Wang Jing's friends, which made me see a pure and dark friendship. It is a good book, although not as good as Sword, a masterpiece in the snow. But the story of Novice Village alone is comparable to that of Zhan Shen Shen. I hope that the author will continue to work hard to add fresh blood to the new generation of books and suppress the unhealthy trend of copying. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.

This book may not really be an excellent work, but it must be a well-written work. I have been reading it for more than half a month. Among today's fantasy novels, it is considered a good work of conscience. The length is not too lengthy, and the ending is quite acceptable. So, all the holes that can be filled have been filled, and there is no overly unreasonable plot. However, there are really not many novels that can meet such basic requirements. In the end, I hope that the author can stick to his beliefs, just like Li Nanshi in the book, he always sticks to his beliefs and moves forward.

It's good to have a book like this on this platform as a condiment. The humanistic portrayal feels a little more detailed than in other books. Maybe it's intentional, after all, this is the author's first novel. Really nice.

It's good to read 😊 I really like reading novels like yours. The protagonist's character changes, there is no absolute evil, and the supporting characters are fleshed out. But the author should take it easy. This kind of novel is very difficult to write. Although I want you to update more, don't trade quality for quantity.

It feels really good. I have read the novels of 67 years and seven years ago, and also read a lot of daily ones. The main thing is that it is good. At least the chapters I have read so far are very suitable to my taste. The protagonist is a bit like a virgin, but this is what I like, and it has a daily atmosphere.

Originally, I could give it 5 stars. The author's writing skills are in the upper-middle range, the story is coherent and smooth, and the characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood, just like the real world. The inner description of the characters is quite good, but the writing is a little short. I will decide whether to make up for that star after reading it later.

This book is okay, but the author didn't control the emotions well, and many plots made people feel annoyed. There should be more cool articles. I personally feel like I can continue reading. I hope the author of the subsequent plot will control it well. 4 Stars first

The second Tomato book that I read safely, maybe because of its short length, or maybe because I have read so many impetuous and similar books, but this book is quite calming. Although the writing style is still a little immature, it is inexplicably attractive. Maybe the author has really put his heart and soul into each character. The images of each character are really vivid, and Yang Tiangang, his gentle kindness and love spanning thousands of years are also touching. The writing is very good, simple and touching. Perhaps the simplest sincerity is the most attractive. . .

Overall, it's good. The supporting characters in each short story, or should be said to be the protagonists, are all described with flesh and blood, especially Wang Jing in the opening chapter. The whole article focuses more on exploring the truth rather than fighting (after all, fighting in Invincible is nothing to write about). This is more comfortable to watch. The whole story is very sweet, so feel free to watch it without any knives (5 cents per bracket removed) Then there is the ending. The people who went to another small world did not explain the ending, so it felt like something was missing. Finally, the junior sister is number one in the world!

"Broken Immortal" uses a unique setting of cultivating immortals to build a challenging world of cultivation. The protagonist makes difficult choices between plunder and creation on the way to advance in physical training, heavenly veins, and spiritual endowment. The plot is suspenseful, from the emergence of mysterious skills to the exploration of ancient ruins, attracting readers' attention step by step. The description of the battle scenes is extremely tense, and the concise writing outlines the scene of swords and auras, making it immersive. The protagonist's growth line is clear, from an ignorant boy to a powerful man who faces the dangers, and his transformation is real and touching; the supporting characters each have their own characteristics, and the guidance of their teachers and the company of their close friends add color to the story. Although the logic of some plots is a little hasty, the introduction of magic weapons is insufficient, and the emotional portrayal is slightly shallow, the compact rhythm and unique practice system still make it a worthwhile read for Xianxia lovers, from which you can feel the passion of cutting through illusions and pursuing the road.

Please take a detour if you just want to read the soft rice. This book also has a lot of supporting characters. Although it is an invincible flow, it does not say that the protagonist is invincible after reading a few chapters. It will be slapped in the face and then boring. I personally like the protagonist of Invincible but Salted Fish and the supporting characters with different faces.

Come on, author, it's okay if the pace is slower, just don't overwhelm the plot, write it seriously, come on!

This is one of the few books I have read to the end in such a long time. It is very meaningful and worth reading [Blowing Kiss]