I Stand on Top of the Trainers

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I like the rhythm of this book very much. It is not as exaggerated as in other elf novels where the trainer is very strong in more than 100 chapters. The relationship between the characters is also well handled and makes people feel warm. I hope this novel will not be poorly written.

This novel is the best elf novel I have ever read. The pace is very good. There can be plots about mythical beasts, but it is not recommended to conquer them. As for the elves that are expected to appear... Tutaigui (?) (No eunuchs!)

It's really good. I still have some left to finish, so that's today. Haha, it's so rare to find a good Pokémon book now. The author can write millions of words based on how few holes he left in front of him. I'm really looking forward to it. I hope I won't be an eunuch. Please! ! ! (By the way, the author will consider the protagonist's cp horse later, whisper bb, I want Ayang O(≧▽≦)O)

This rhythm is quite good, but there is a fatal flaw, that is, there is not much content in one chapter, and it is easy to be spoiled. You can push the early progress a little faster, just a little faster (although I quite like this rhythm), or you can add more updates. . . .

The author's writing style is really good (⑉°з°)-♡ The emotions are very delicate and they really hold me in check. I have seen more than 300 pictures of "The Forgotten Traveler" so far. I am so amazed and shocked (｡ò ∀ó｡) Finally, the feeling of cp in Pokémon is really good. I usually watch some pornographic stuff again. Yang Ye really makes me happy ah ah ah ah ✪ω✪

It's a very good book, except that the part where Li Ziye is possessed by a demon is a bit far-fetched (it just doesn't flow very smoothly), the rest is fine, and I still blame "Yang Ye"

After viewing more than 400 photos, I think I should be qualified to comment. This is one of the rare high-quality novels that I have read. The main character is big, but the invincible beast is truly aloof, powerful and mysterious. And let's talk about Yang Ye walking together all his life~ How many people can really have such a relationship with these two cubs? [For details, you can skip directly to read "The Forgotten Traveler"] [First Editor] I'm really impressed after reading this book. It's a really slow-paced book that likes to catch mythical beasts and then cultivate them very quickly. The protagonist is super strong. I recommend not reading it. [Part 2] I would like to add that this book is one of the few that explains the protagonist's time travel. What are parents like in the real world? [Part 3 - 2023.2.1] I'm here again. I really don't have any books to read. After finishing the second page, I thought about the third time. [Of course, I kept 20 pictures for the time being without reading them, so I feel more secure. It's weird.] Although I like this rhythm very much, it seems that I didn't record the time before the update was really painful. I'll record it this time. [Part 4—2023.3.7] Yes, that's right, I'm here again. I have no books to read. I saw the latest comments. There are many bad comments. I can only say that there are more than 700 pictures. I am still spraying the first 30 pictures [face covering] [face covering] Who in the real world doesn't want a super baby [although I prefer Hu Di hehe] [Part 5 - 2025.1.23] Dangdang, I am resurrected again. Why is this book not finished yet? I haven't read a novel for a long time. I have almost forgotten the plot, so I started reading it from the beginning. . . . After watching it for two days, I felt a little uncomfortable, so I started skipping to watch it. Because I hadn't watched it for a long time, I also had a new feeling. That is, the pace of this book is really too slow, but I still like this world view, the superiority of the gods, the description of the priesthood, and the male protagonist shouting about the bond of friendship hhhh [Ayang has been waiting for you for 50 years, can't you two be together?] What I like most now is still the forgotten traveler, the loneliness of staying in ancient times for 50 years, and the sense of fate that saves him from life and death time and time again. Can you two really not be together?

This book is really good. Although some people hate it, some people like it. For example, I like it to be very clear. Come on, the author. We must be brave enough to be ourselves. Your writing is really great in my mind. I don't think it is watery. Come on~ I will support you, don't let me down.

If you guessed it right, this book should be written from a third-person perspective, focusing on the supporting character Li Ziye and lightly describing the pig's feet Song Jingyang😏So this book is a hidden boos flow

I downloaded the app after seeing the tweet posted elsewhere. The advantage is that it depicts a real Pokémon world in detail, as well as the family relationship with elders and parents and the friendship with Song Jingyang and others. It's not like some Pokémon stories where you can cheat and get number one after just practicing. It's too fake to win all the way and reach the top without losing a few hundred chapters. It's almost like playing a game. Pokémon's existence becomes a tool for leveling. But the shortcomings of the author are also too detailed. To be honest, I was almost persuaded to quit in the early stage... If I hadn't remembered the poster's recommendation, I almost clicked x [laughing and crying] In short, the author continued to maintain this real-world writing style and persisted until the end. It's very interesting!

Come on, author, the first dozens of chapters I have read so far are very good, and I hope the author can update it soon. I read it faster [laughs] I hope the author will not give up on this book because of some people's comments. It is very good so far (≧∇≦*) affirmation from an lsp I have a strong desire for the protagonist to have powerful elves. Since the protagonist has a mission, the author should arrange some more powerful elves for him. This is not to say that ordinary elves are not strong, but to be honest, there is still a gap between them. I hope the author will continue to work hard, but it is a bit not to my liking, so I apologize and say goodbye. I wish the author will write better and better.

After reading it in one sitting, I really like the rhythm of this book. The characters are arranged just right, and the plot is very reasonable. The protagonist does not have any excessive cheats. This kind of slow development and hard work seems very comfortable, hahahahaha. However, I still hope that there will be a little more halo of the protagonist. It is best for the members of the protagonist team to have their own characteristics.

Very good. Books about elves are basically scrapped in the later stages, mainly because most of them are too fast-paced. . . But the pace of this book is well controlled. The protagonist does not have an extremely powerful golden finger. If there are loopholes, he can be filled in time. I have to say that this is one of the best elf novels I have ever read😁. Come on, author💪We have to make progress in a cycle.

Nice. A rare piece of fine writing. The mythical beast is truly superior. The protagonist is powerful but not invincible.

I feel very good. The pace is indeed slower than other articles, and the written content is very detailed, but almost all of it has been mentioned before and will not be mentioned again later. For example, the content of the class was only described once, but it gave me an imaginary material, which made it easier for me to incorporate it into it. The picture is very strong. Everything is described very delicately, such as the appearance of elves and the emotions between people. I like it very much. In addition, I also saw the author's full desire for survival. For example, the ratio of male and female trainers is to prevent anyone from saying that the author favors boys over girls. [Laughing] Also, I actually admire Aye and Ayang's CP. They have so much CP, hehe.

Very well written, keep it up (have you considered being a man?)

I think this book is very good, the type of development I like

This book is one of the better elf books in my opinion.

It's very exciting, and the writing is delicate. It's suitable for those who like to read Pokémon articles. The heroine is very good, and the interpersonal relationships are handled very well. But I hope to add an emotional line. I think the relationship between the protagonist and Ayang is good. I hope the author can write these two.

It's really worth reading and the writing is great. I just finished reading the Traveler chapter. It's just that the protagonist feels a little uncomfortable being led by fate. Also, when will Yang and the protagonist get together? [Pout]

"No matter which world he is in, Song Jingyang is Li Ziye's best friend." This book has many flaws, but the emotions are sincere and sincere, which makes me much more tolerant. The forgotten traveler's chapter is so dazzling that it can be worthy of a precious jade that does not hide its flaws. (It would be nice if we could sort it out again in the early stage. No, buddy, you can't be so ruthless when it comes to eating books [face covering]

The author is very detailed and the descriptions are very real. I also gained deep insights while reading. It is easy to bring it into the novel. Overall, the author's writing style is very good. Come on, author, don't give up halfway!

The rhythm is very normal. It is much better than those mindless stories that only have three stages of evolution in more than ten chapters and guarantee two fantasy beasts in about a hundred chapters. The characters are fuller, there is no ultimate good or evil, and there are no embarrassing words that force people to attract people. It is very suitable for long-term plot development. Big support for the author [Sending Hearts]

I really like this type of elf novel. The progress is not too fast and there is no mythical beast master ball at the beginning like other elf novels. However, I don't mean to hate it. I just express my feelings. It would be great if the author can update it every day. As long as it is not unfinished, it will have a high score.

The Needle Does Not Poke is now the only book that Tomato is following. The protagonist has a reasonable growth and his family background is neither high nor low. And there is no female protagonist, so you can rush in with confidence I have a good gay friend who is also a really nice person. I can clap on my own, or it can be a brotherhood. Although I don't have any particular obsession with Gardevoir, the Gardevoir in this book is quite likable. I also like the way Gardevoir calls the protagonist at the beginning. Moreover, the protagonist Goldfinger is not a system, but an unknown totem, which is quite interesting. The protagonist is a good friend and has a good impression of Jirachi. It's rare to play with Jirachi. I've only seen two books. It's just that the title doesn't make much sense. After all, the game has little reference to reality. There seems to be no cash out of the knowledge gained in the game. I mentioned before that the only golden finger is the unknown totem, which is a bit wrong. In addition to the annoying title, the chapter questions are too boring. However, these do not affect the content of the article. It's not a good feeling to follow the update, and I haven't seen enough. It just feels a bit watery. It's not that watery, but the content of one chapter is too little, both in terms of word count and plot. Maybe the author should consider updating more, because I haven't seen enough.

Five-star recommendation. If you like to read Pokémon-like novels without a heroine or a system, it's best not to see the evolution route. This article completely satisfies you. I like the protagonist and Song Jingyang. The characters are all very good, but the part about "The Forgotten Man of Time and Space" was so brutal that I cried. Fortunately, Song Jingyang integrated the memory later! [Love] Another rare thing about this article is that it does not require the elves to do what they want. If the elf doesn't want to fight, it doesn't matter to the protagonist. Just think of it as opening more mouths and feeding it. There is no such kind of team where I ask everyone to reach a certain height. (I've seen so many things, even the auxiliary elves, how they behave) The aspect that I'm not comfortable with is that the super power setting at the end feels a little bit broken... The protagonist quickly develops super powers to some extent, and then there's teleportation and the like. A small shortcoming. Overall, a five-star recommendation.

I think the overall thing is pretty good, but I feel that Li Ziye's feelings in The Forgotten Traveler will slowly collapse. I feel that the description is a bit weak, but the overall writing is great, Yang Ye yyds [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

I like this book very much. The protagonist is also very suitable for his age. He is not even 18 years old. If you suddenly tell him that the world is going to be destroyed, everyone would be crazy. The early stage is still relatively slow. The protagonist is not strong from the beginning, but it is also in line with the concept. In the later stage, the strength will also improve quickly, and Yang Ye is the king!

Unlike other copycat games where teleportation is acceleration and passive regardless of level. The elves' skills and reality are well integrated in this book, but I don't really like the protagonist's personality, which is a bit maverick and cowardly. Maybe it's because of the lack of preparation in this aspect. There are short paragraphs in the middle that are annoying to read. But overall it's okay After reading it, I actually feel that the superpower is not very useful, because the mysterious totem has been upgraded to C, but the ability is much larger than that of F. The superpower described seems to be only A-level useful. I originally thought that the male protagonist had grown up quickly enough, after all, there was a little plug-in, but it turned out that Song's strength was just as fast, and some of his classmates also reached this level. Elves consume a lot of resources, but are often restrained by their attributes and cannot beat the same level. I don't want to watch the invincible stream, but it's basic that Mysterious Totem Gift has grown to be stronger than the same period, otherwise it's just a waste stream.