Naruto: That Thing About Me Becoming One Soul and Two Souls

It does not rely on the system, it is one body with two souls, and the subject matter is very novel. It also writes about the psychological changes of the protagonist from being a salty fish to risking his life for others. Unlike other articles, where he travels back to Obito and establishes a good relationship with other classmates, it is all purposeful. This book is written very naturally.

Fortunately, the protagonist of this book is indeed very consistent with the appearance of ordinary people when they travel through time. Unlike some protagonists who are decisive and decisive at the beginning, there is no adaptation process at all. I also hope that the author can continue to follow up.

It's really good to watch, and it's not the kind of mindless cool novel that I hate. The ideas are very clear, and the graphics also brought me in. The setting of two souls in one body also made me feel very novel, and I felt like I was on fire.

It's very good. Although the author is a novice, compared with other types of novels, it is far better than the current Naruto fan fiction. Except for a small flaw at the beginning, it clearly expresses the process of a person's transformation. The part about Kakashi's father, although the character is broken, is the result we want most. The author's writing is also constantly becoming more and more proficient. It can be said that this novel written by a "newbie" is very exciting. I even doubt that it was written by a newbie? However, I found in the comment area that many people's viewing points are not in the same channel. Some people said that Brother Tuzi did not want to see Lin and the protagonist together, but I want to ask, when a person who has died can see that his beloved girl is still supporting him, shouldn't he feel comforted by this, or even I felt unworthy for that girl, and later I said with words, "I used my chakra to blow him up." (I won't tell you about the plot later) Do you want me to think that this is a wolf-like beast with a heart of a beast, repaying kindness with revenge? Although it is said to be a coincidence, is it not exactly this coincidence that gave Obito this opportunity? Obito regards the protagonist as his continuation, and Obito wants to change this sad ending. This is what I saw in the author's writing. I would like to give the author a suggestion here. If you want to see a person's transformation most intuitively, it is actually very simple. "Appropriate" description with scenes is a good choice. After all, I have some experience in this area. Above, 5 stars. (´∇ﾉ｀*)ノ

This book is still very good. In my opinion, I personally feel that the author can make him grow up a little faster.

It looks good. This is the true reaction of time traveling to Naruto. The protagonist will be a little timid, but the protagonist has also completed the transformation again and again under the author's pen.

It's very, very good. So far, there seems to be no problem with the pacing and the plot is not brainless. It can be said to be one of the best Naruto fandoms. At least for now, it seems that expressing the deepening theme is not embarrassing. The protagonist also doesn't have a gold ring. Such as the so-called system that appears out of thin air. At the same time, the protagonist's thoughts are also very realistic and relatively close to real society. The character descriptions are particularly detailed, and it can be said that there seems to be no character breakdown so far. (It's not like a certain AB's portrayal of female protagonists. It's a poor batch, and the character's behavior often makes people confused.) I hope there won't be a harem. (When you look at the characters in Naruto, do they seem to be able to be haremed?) Then don't be as good as Xiang, a certain AB who kills his relatives and friends at every turn. (So ​​far, the look and feel is very good. I hope the author's writing skills are stable enough and he can grasp the rhythm later. Although it is impossible that the combat system behind Payne will not collapse in the later stages of Naruto. In short, I hope the author's book will become popular, and I also hope that the author will continue to eat and write.

This book is not like other books. The protagonist is not afraid of anything from the beginning, not even killing people. I hope the author will write more.

Author, come on, try to write more. You are one of the few Naruto books about Obito that I like to read.

The writing in the Naruto story is pretty good, and it fits the original setting quite well. In addition, the psychological growth of the protagonist group is also good. I hope the author can continue to work hard to complete Boruto and write it down. If you are worried that the chapter is getting too long and you can't control it, just put it away temporarily. If the author is not following the genre of pure and refreshing writing, then he should not lose quality in order to rush the manuscript. Finally, five stars are given and keep up the good work.

Personally, I think this Naruto story is very well written, and it is very consistent with the state of ordinary people when they travel through time. If you don't want to think about anything else, once you travel through time, you will just kill all kinds of things without thinking. It's just that some of the battle scenes in the middle feel a little confusing. In short, I hope the author can stick to it!

It's very beautiful, very creative and has its own ideas, but you'd better update it soon, otherwise the 40-meter-long knife is waiting for you. The author of "Dear" is Da Da

Come on, author, I have read forty or fifty Naruto fan novels, and your article is still very new, but I also read what you said, you are a novice who has just written online articles. Compared with the novice articles I have read before, your article is definitely superior. However, I personally feel that the logic is not very good. Everyone's motivation for doing something must be related to the person's current thoughts and state, and it cannot be fooled by one or two sentences. But you also said that it will change in the future. I think this novel started from small things, and it needed to refine the characters and story logic bit by bit.

The writing is very good [like] It is much better than those mindless and cool books. You are not invincible from the beginning, nor do you deliberately get close to the protagonist from the beginning. It is a transformation process of the protagonist who is a little cowardly and afraid of death. It can be regarded as one of the better books for Naruto fans.

The plot is very good. Other time-travel Naruto novels dare to kill people at the beginning, but as a person today, this is almost impossible to do. But in this book, it is obvious that the author has described the characters very well. I recommend reading this novel.

It's really good-looking, and it's my favorite style. And there are a lot of regrets in it that I want to make up for. Thank you, the author helped me realize my wish [laughing]

It's well written, but it's too short and weak. The characters are well created and the personality is very close to reality. If I could travel through the past, I might not be better than the protagonist. So overall, this book is very good, but the most important thing is that it is too short and the ending is suspected of being unfinished. I hope the author's future books will get better and better, that's it.

Support the author, come on, I haven't seen such a good-looking Naruto fanfic in a long time

This book is the only sane one among all the mindless cool novels I have read. It reflects the cruelty of war and the mentality of ordinary people who hope for peace. The protagonist is not like other cool novels. He kills decisively from the beginning, but he will only kill if someone really touches the bottom line. The subject matter is also very good.

Although I have only read a few chapters, I feel very good. This kind of novel that does not rely on the system is really novel and attractive. Moreover, reading this book has made me find something, my brain, which is so difficult. Nowadays, Naruto books are all system-less and brainless books. The plot is old-fashioned and does not make me cry. I will not read it even if I give it 🐶. I am very much looking forward to the author's subsequent plots. I hope to maintain the original intention and work hard to write well.

I have to say that the author is really imaginative. One is his future self and the other is a modern person. It perfectly shows the performance of a modern person traveling into a world with constant wars! ! ! Come on, author, I want to read all your books.

Let's take a look at this book first, eh! The subject matter is novel, huh! The writing is superb, eh! The plot is interesting, huh! Five stars for you 😆

This book is very good in terms of writing. It was written by an 18-year-old author and it's his first book. It doesn't seem to embarrass me at all. From the plot point of view, there are details. Unlike other time-traveling Obito novels, all Lin are brainless and love Obito. From these aspects, I think this book is worthy of your five stars.

It is very consistent with the psychology of people who traveled from the peaceful era to the war era, and then there is the change of the characters' psychology. The writing here is very good, and the various details are also done well. It is very beautiful. Come on ^ω^

The writing is really good [heartfelt]. In fact, the author can leave the subsequent plot to others to continue, just like Shippuden is over and Boruto will follow. Of course, this is just a suggestion from me [eating melon]

The subject matter is very novel, and the overall structure of the article is complete. However, the author's description of the battle is a bit lame, but the Naruto novel is considered top-notch in Tomato, and the extra chapters interspersed from time to time are also good. I hope the author does not want to be a eunuch!

This book is quite interesting. In the early stage, the protagonist always wanted to have a stable life because of the psychology of ordinary people. Later, through the bond with Kushi and Lin, he transformed from an ordinary person to a real ninja. The characterization is relatively detailed.

This is the first time I see this kind of theme of two souls in one body. I have never seen it before. The plot is very well written and very immersive. It is one of the few Naruto novels that can be read with the brain. Also, the author is too slow to update. I can't wait. Come on! ! !

This book is very realistic at present, because people in peacetime must adapt to the cruel reality suddenly, and this book does it. Also, the character creation in this book is very good. For example, it is easy to see Minato's character from his words and other aspects. I believe that as long as this book continues to be updated, it will definitely be able to stay above 9.2

Very good, I have long been tired of seeing template-style second creations. This book stood out to me. The plot was okay, but the fighting scenes were a bit lacking. But I believe the author will change in the future.