Hogwarts Apprentice

To be honest, the author really put a lot of effort into writing this book! It's very attentive, and I feel like the characters are well developed. Be sure not to stop updating. It's not easy to see a novel that is not systematic and very realistic, and it is not a novel that has a lot of elements added. If it is not updated or it is unfinished, I think I will cry to death. Also, I want to ask, if you follow this progress, at what chapter can you enter Hogwarts? Also, I want to ask which hospital the protagonist is from🌚💦💦

This book is really good, gentle and reasonable. The author also put a lot of effort into researching information and writing the novel. It can be said to be very good! As an 11-year-old bookworm, I guarantee that this book can be consumed with confidence! I hope the author can persevere and persevere! Stay true to your original intention!

This book seems to be good so far. Hope it doesn't end badly. Is the heroine Hermione? It would be better if not.

It's very interesting. Compared to other Harry Potter fan fictions, this one is my favorite so far. It's just that I discovered it too early. I really wish I had seen it when it was finished, so I wouldn't have to wait for updates hahaha

Help, woohoo! How can it be so beautiful? ! Totally can't get enough of it! ! ! T^T Speaking of which academy will the protagonist be assigned to? Is there a female protagonist? I hope there is no heroine! ! !ヾ(^▽^*)))

Very good, this is a novel. Many books nowadays are written like instructions, and the plot is interrupted from time to time. Don't they know that there is a method called annotation?

The language is logically clear and the context is foreshadowing. I have read dozens of hp fanfics, and this one can be said to be very exciting! There are just too few, so I plan to keep them and look at them again. The author should not forget to take a break while updating! 🙏🙏

Well written and exciting. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

After reading this book, I really feel that the author wrote it very seriously, and the meticulousness in writing the magic wand can be seen. But I have a question, that is, will the people who died in the original book die in this book?

I don't understand why there are so few people. The characters are very good and have reasonable personalities. There are no things other than magic or many things derived from magic. I don't see the female protagonist. I like it very much😘

Brother, can we update it and stop being lazy (but I personally suggest that Hermione be the heroine)

Very nice, highly recommended. The one point deducted is because the author doesn't know how to divide it into sections, so it is densely packed into one large piece. I feel like my interest is suddenly waning.

Personally, I think this book is one of the few HP fanfics. The author is very attentive. Similarly, after reading this book, I also learned about some aspects that I have never been exposed to. The setting is also very unique, and the character description is also very vivid. When I first read this book, it really made me feel like I was reading it. It feels like an old movie translated from England or France, but this book is a new star after all, and the author is not known to many people or is unknown. But I think that although the author tries his best to maintain the quality, his health is also one aspect. I hope the author can recover soon and bring us better works in the future!

The author writes with great care, full of details, and detailed character descriptions, just like the main text of Harry Potter. Love this article so much. I beg the author to update as soon as possible. But I prefer that the male protagonist be assigned to the Snake House and there be no female protagonist (because I feel that no one is worthy of being the male protagonist (><)). In short, the author's writing is super supportive, and I hope there won't be a harem later.

This is the best book I have ever written among Harry Potter fanfics (✪▽✪) I hope there is no female protagonist!

I think this is the best fanfic I've seen in Tomato so far, don't miss it. I hope that the author can maintain the quality and pay attention to his own body. As a student party, there is no way to reward, but you can watch the video to support and comment on the recommendation. Finally, I can express my love for this book, it is really beautiful!

It's pretty good, but I think the author can divide it into paragraphs appropriately in some places. After all, if a paragraph is too long, the structure will look a little strange. Everything else is very good.

If there is a heroine, could it be someone other than Luna and Hermione? Other HP stories are basically these. I hope the author can make up a fictional one. Of course, this is just a suggestion from me.

I have already listened to half of this book. Why? Because it's a bit short, and I really like it. If I watch it, I'm afraid I'll finish it in less than half an hour, so I listened to it, and it's super good. I really like this one. The content, I hope it's a heroine-free one! Update frequently ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )~

The most unexpected thing about this book is that it is "illustrated". Yes, you read that right, it is illustrated, which is very convenient. In the first few chapters, the protagonist starts his own business, and then he meets Harry Potter. Overall, the book is pretty good, without any system, and he is trying to get closer to the original plot. I am waiting for the author to update it (*^ω^*)

So far I feel the best, very detailed, very rigorous, the author is very serious, I just fall in love with him~❤️ Quietly ask the male protagonist if he has CP👀 I recommend it to my friends (*'▽'*)♪ Here I wish the author good health and happiness every day (*'▽'*)♪

This is the HP fanfic with the clearest logic, the richest details, and the most comfortable look that I have ever seen. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch, and he must stick to it! I have read many HP fanfics on the market, but I feel that they are not as refreshing as reading this one. Because I am usually a detail-oriented person, so it is really not easy to have such a good book. Again, I really hope that the author will not abandon the article! ! !

A very nice Harry Potter fanfic. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into researching the information, and the plot is reasonable. The only small problem is that the author seems to have forgotten that there is a thing called silk traces in the wizarding world. The Ministry of Magic will use silk traces to detect whether there are underage wizards casting spells outside the school, but the protagonist seems to have ignored this setting.

I think this salary is not very reasonable. An employee's salary is less than 20 galleons for one to two weeks. If calculated this way, she only has less than 2,000 yuan a month. As a director, Arthur Weasley only has one hundred galleons a month, which is equivalent to 4,250 yuan. I think it is a bit less. (Rowling's idea is that 1 galleons is fixed = 5 pounds. According to the current exchange rate, one galleons ≈ 42.5 Yuan)

First of all, this book is really good, very detailed and exquisite. You can write about what you did in Diagon Alley, meeting Malfoy and so on. But it's too long-winded (I think). In fact, you don't need to write so long at the beginning, otherwise it will make a small number of people irritated and not want to read anymore (like me) I've read more than 50 pictures, and the author has updated a little over 100, half of them are done, and I haven't even arrived at Hogwarts yet! There are 7 Harry Potter books in total, from Philosopher's Stone to Deathly Hallows. I would like to ask the author: When will you finish it? Which one are you going to write? Philosopher's stone? Goblet of Fire? Or the Deathly Hallows? If I wrote all 7 books, plus the details, it would be 1,000 chapters anyway (I'm speaking in a questioning tone) Anyway, I can't stand the front anymore. If you don't like it, please don't complain, thank you (the last important point: I think it's a bit verbose, I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks so)

Although there are some places where the word count is too long (that is, it is wordy), and the character portrayal, such as Voldemort, is not very good, the writing is rigorous and logical, and the reproduction of the magical world is also very detailed. Overall, it is very interesting to read, but the first few dozen chapters are always a long paragraph. If you stick to it, you will feel much more comfortable. Finally, cheers to the author, I hope this fan can become a god

To be honest, the author of this book is so detailed that it's hard not to become popular, so don't stop updating it.

More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates soon The early stage of the book is very well prepared. The financial problems from birth to later are prepared in advance. However, because of the rationality of the plot, the protagonist is really a little adult. I couldn't help but bring in the Gryffindor trio. I felt that the pace was a bit fast, but the number of words was missing a lot. Overall, it was good. I just wanted to know about the issue of the lead female lead. I saw a comment about the sisters. I also wanted Hermione to be the female lead but didn't want to break the original cp. I hope the author will update it quickly. I finished it within two days of the Chinese New Year. There are really no Harry Potter books. Come on, author.

The content is generally good, and a lot of effort has been put into it. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow.

I basically don't know what Allen looks like when describing his image? What changes will occur as you grow up? The heroine deserves it, right... Men don't care how long it takes, if they don't want to find a woman, there is a problem with their sexual orientation. Do you like Allen like this? What wonderful adventure stories will he have in the future waiting for me to discover...