When Xu Song woke up, he found that he had come to a doomsday land and became the only NPC in the world. Not only did he come to the doomsday land, but people all over the world came through!
(There is no heroine in this book. After all, how can an NPC fall in love?)
Reader comments
The writing style is okay, but the logic needs to be further strengthened. There must be foreshadowing before the emotional transition, otherwise it will appear too sudden. Try to describe the plot as concisely and clearly as possible, otherwise some readers will not understand it. Hope to keep working hard, come on!
Let's talk more and give some suggestions. The author writes books because of his hobby, not for money.
The writing style is okay, but the logic needs to be further strengthened. There must be foreshadowing before the emotional transition, otherwise it will appear too sudden. Try to describe the plot as concisely and clearly as possible, otherwise some readers will not understand it. Hope to keep working hard, come on!
Let's talk more and give some suggestions. The author writes books because of his hobby, not for money.